~~"HAR LADKI KI ZINDGANI"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on May 16, 2009, 11:23:31 AM
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Dear friends,

Aaj maine ek ladki ki kahani likhi hai,bachpan se lekar mout tak ki kahani,wo kahani jise wo aksar apne daman me chupa kar rakhti hai, kya kya hota hai uski zindagi me yahi bass batane ki koshish ki hai, uske har padaav ko 2 lines me likha hai umeed hai aap sab pasandh karenge, khas-kar ye meri taraf se har ladki ke liye hai...



Daman me apne maine bachpan ki yaadein chupayi hai,
Wo kaanch ki gudiya wo paani ki kashti bithayi hai,

Wo ahde-jawani me ki hui mohabbat-ruswayi ki baatein,
Wo judayi ki peer aab talak ghutan me samayi hai,

Wo shaadi karke jaana kisi aur ke ghar ban ke sangini uski,
Wo chandni raatein jo saath apne sanam ke bitayi hai,

Wo bacho ka aana mere jeewan me aur duniya ka khilna,
Maine unki har shararat har yaad shiddat se sajayi hai,

Nibhte-nibhate zindagi ke har modd se himmat ke saath,
Lo aaj waqt ke saath peeri bhi milne chali aayi hai,

Kya kuch sahej kar rakh liya apne iss daaman me Shally,
Aaj jo sametne jaa rahi ho wo meri aakhiri widaayi hai...

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2009, 11:31:07 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on May 16, 2009, 11:23:31 AM
Dear friends,

Aaj maine ek ladki ki kahani likhi hai,bachpan se lekar mout tak ki kahani,wo kahani jise wo aksar apne daman me chupa kar rakhti hai, kya kya hota hai uski zindagi me yahi bass batane ki koshish ki hai, uske har padaav ko 2 lines me likha hai umeed hai aap sab pasandh karenge, khas-kar ye meri taraf se har ladki ke liye hai...



Daman me apne maine bachpan ki yaadein chupayi hai,
Wo kaanch ki gudiya wo paani ki kashti bithayi hai,

Wo ahde-jawani me ki hui mohabbat-ruswayi ki baatein,
Wo judayi ki peer aab talak ghutan me samayi hai,

Wo shaadi karke jaana kisi aur ke ghar ban ke sangini uski,
Wo chandni raatein jo saath apne sanam ke bitayi hai,

Wo bacho ka aana mere jeewan me aur duniya ka khilna,
Maine unki har shararat har yaad shiddat se sajayi hai,

Nibhte-nibhate zindagi ke har modd se himmat ke saath,
Lo aaj waqt ke saath peeri bhi milne chali aayi hai,

Kya kuch sahej kar rakh liya maine apne iss daaman me,
Aaj jo sametne jaa rahi ho wo meri aakhiri widaayi hai...

Shally.


Behtareen >. bahoot bahoot Khoob Shally... Well expressed Shally.. Tumne kam sabdo mea Ladki k pure jeevan ko bakoobi bayaan kiyaa hai..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2009, 11:31:23 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on May 16, 2009, 11:23:31 AM
Dear friends,

Aaj maine ek ladki ki kahani likhi hai,bachpan se lekar mout tak ki kahani,wo kahani jise wo aksar apne daman me chupa kar rakhti hai, kya kya hota hai uski zindagi me yahi bass batane ki koshish ki hai, uske har padaav ko 2 lines me likha hai umeed hai aap sab pasandh karenge, khas-kar ye meri taraf se har ladki ke liye hai...



Daman me apne maine bachpan ki yaadein chupayi hai,
Wo kaanch ki gudiya wo paani ki kashti bithayi hai,

Wo ahde-jawani me ki hui mohabbat-ruswayi ki baatein,
Wo judayi ki peer aab talak ghutan me samayi hai,

Wo shaadi karke jaana kisi aur ke ghar ban ke sangini uski,
Wo chandni raatein jo saath apne sanam ke bitayi hai,

Wo bacho ka aana mere jeewan me aur duniya ka khilna,
Maine unki har shararat har yaad shiddat se sajayi hai,

Nibhte-nibhate zindagi ke har modd se himmat ke saath,
Lo aaj waqt ke saath peeri bhi milne chali aayi hai,

Kya kuch sahej kar rakh liya maine apne iss daaman me,
Aaj jo sametne jaa rahi ho wo meri aakhiri widaayi hai...

Shally.



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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2009, 11:32:12 AM »
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Badi hi jazwati ghazal hai ye, Shally Ji
very very nice
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2009, 11:33:00 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on May 16, 2009, 11:31:07 AM
Behtareen >. bahoot bahoot Khoob Shally... Well expressed Shally.. Tumne kam sabdo mea Ladki k pure jeevan ko bakoobi bayaan kiyaa hai..
 Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Sophi Dear,

Bahut khushi hui apne thread par pehla comment aapka dekhkar, tahe dil se shukriya..

Shally.
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2009, 11:33:32 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 16, 2009, 11:31:23 AM

FAAAAAAANE

Sorry aapka comment samjh nahi aaya, kya kehna chahte hai aap ??

Shally.
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2009, 11:34:10 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 16, 2009, 11:32:12 AM
Badi hi jazwati ghazal hai ye, Shally Ji
very very nice
SARVESH RASTOGI

Shukriya Sarvesh Ji, Aapne ghazal ko pasandh kiya mehnat kabool ho gayi.

Shally.
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2009, 11:36:59 AM »
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subhan allah , bahoth qoob shally bahoth umda peshkash dil se dad qubool karen !!

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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2009, 11:38:17 AM »
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Quote from: junaidqadir on May 16, 2009, 11:36:59 AM
subhan allah , bahoth qoob shally bahoth umda peshkash dil se dad qubool karen !!

Qadeer

Shukriya Qadeer Ji, Aapne ghazal ko kabool kiya dil ko sakoon mil gaya.

Shally.
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2009, 02:59:07 PM »
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WAAH SHALLY JE..
KYA BAAT HAI....
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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2009, 04:44:41 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah!!! Bahut Hi Khoob Shally Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi jazbaati Aur Khoobsurat Peshkash!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 16, 2009, 05:01:11 PM »
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Nice creation Shael
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«Reply #12 on: May 16, 2009, 05:15:37 PM »
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Bahut khoob Shally...
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«Reply #13 on: May 17, 2009, 03:01:37 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob shally ji,
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«Reply #14 on: May 17, 2009, 05:00:27 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on May 16, 2009, 11:33:32 AM
Sorry aapka comment samjh nahi aaya, kya kehna chahte hai aap ??

Shally.



VERII VERII  NAAAICE....!! K.S
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