~~"HAR LADKI KI ZINDGANI"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on May 16, 2009, 11:23:31 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 17, 2009, 10:45:07 AM »
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yakeenan bahut umda likha hai Shally
too good   icon_salut
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«Reply #16 on: May 17, 2009, 12:49:04 PM »
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Wo shaadi karke jaana kisi aur ke ghar ban ke sangini uski,
Wo chandni raatein jo saath apne sanam ke bitayi hai,

Wo bacho ka aana mere jeewan me aur duniya ka khilna,
Maine unki har shararat har yaad shiddat se sajayi hai,

bahut accha likha hai dear Shally  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #17 on: May 17, 2009, 12:58:52 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut khoob likha h aapne Shally ji.Ek ek shabd behtrin. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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k.shael
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«Reply #18 on: May 18, 2009, 05:46:21 AM »
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Quote from: pandit on May 16, 2009, 02:59:07 PM
WAAH SHALLY JE..
KYA BAAT HAI....

Shukriya Pandit Ji, Apna keemti waqt dene ke liye.

Shally.
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«Reply #19 on: May 18, 2009, 05:48:07 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 16, 2009, 04:44:41 PM
Wah Wah Wah!!! Bahut Hi Khoob Shally Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Bahut Hi jazbaati Aur Khoobsurat Peshkash!!

Shukriya Khwaish Ji, AAcha laga aapko apne thread me dekhkar,
Keemti waqt dene ke liye Tahe-dil se shukriya.

Shally.
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«Reply #20 on: May 18, 2009, 05:52:11 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on May 16, 2009, 11:23:31 AM
Dear friends,

Aaj maine ek ladki ki kahani likhi hai,bachpan se lekar mout tak ki kahani,wo kahani jise wo aksar apne daman me chupa kar rakhti hai, kya kya hota hai uski zindagi me yahi bass batane ki koshish ki hai, uske har padaav ko 2 lines me likha hai umeed hai aap sab pasandh karenge, khas-kar ye meri taraf se har ladki ke liye hai...



Daman me apne maine bachpan ki yaadein chupayi hai,
Wo kaanch ki gudiya wo paani ki kashti bithayi hai,

Wo ahde-jawani me ki hui mohabbat-ruswayi ki baatein,
Wo judayi ki peer aab talak ghutan me samayi hai,

Wo shaadi karke jaana kisi aur ke ghar ban ke sangini uski,
Wo chandni raatein jo saath apne sanam ke bitayi hai,

Wo bacho ka aana mere jeewan me aur duniya ka khilna,
Maine unki har shararat har yaad shiddat se sajayi hai,

Nibhte-nibhate zindagi ke har modd se himmat ke saath,
Lo aaj waqt ke saath peeri bhi milne chali aayi hai,

Kya kuch sahej kar rakh liya maine apne iss daaman me,
Aaj jo sametne jaa rahi ho wo meri aakhiri widaayi hai...

Shally.

good wrk shally really a touchy one.....bbeautifully versed and phrased......keep up the good wrk
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«Reply #21 on: May 18, 2009, 07:37:36 AM »
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Quote from: k.shael on May 16, 2009, 11:23:31 AM
Dear friends,

Aaj maine ek ladki ki kahani likhi hai,bachpan se lekar mout tak ki kahani,wo kahani jise wo aksar apne daman me chupa kar rakhti hai, kya kya hota hai uski zindagi me yahi bass batane ki koshish ki hai, uske har padaav ko 2 lines me likha hai umeed hai aap sab pasandh karenge, khas-kar ye meri taraf se har ladki ke liye hai...



Daman me apne maine bachpan ki yaadein chupayi hai,
Wo kaanch ki gudiya wo paani ki kashti bithayi hai,

Wo ahde-jawani me ki hui mohabbat-ruswayi ki baatein,
Wo judayi ki peer aab talak ghutan me samayi hai,

Wo shaadi karke jaana kisi aur ke ghar ban ke sangini uski,
Wo chandni raatein jo saath apne sanam ke bitayi hai,

Wo bacho ka aana mere jeewan me aur duniya ka khilna,
Maine unki har shararat har yaad shiddat se sajayi hai,

Nibhte-nibhate zindagi ke har modd se himmat ke saath,
Lo aaj waqt ke saath peeri bhi milne chali aayi hai,

Kya kuch sahej kar rakh liya maine apne iss daaman me,
Aaj jo sametne jaa rahi ho wo meri aakhiri widaayi hai...

Shally.



wah Wah Wah...... Kya Baaat hai.. Applause Shally.. ek Ladki Ki Zindgi Ko aapne Jo Lafzon me Dhaala hai.. Waqai Kaabil-e-Taareef Hai..!! ladki ki Poori Zindgi Ko aapne In Chand Lafzon Me Samet diya..!! Bahut acche jazzbaat hain Dear.. Really Beautiful Creation..!!  icon_salut icon_salut


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #22 on: May 18, 2009, 07:59:37 AM »
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Nawab Ji,

Chand panktiyon mein ek ladki ki poori kahani tumne bayan kar di ! Applause Applause Applause

Keep going ! Thumbs UP
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«Reply #23 on: May 28, 2009, 05:06:03 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 16, 2009, 05:01:11 PM
Nice creation Shael

Shukriya Celmira dear,

Aap mere thread par aayi aacha laga.

Shally.
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«Reply #24 on: May 28, 2009, 05:07:02 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 16, 2009, 05:15:37 PM
Bahut khoob Shally...

Shukriya Angel didi,

Bahut aacha laga ki aap thread par aayi,

Shally.
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«Reply #25 on: May 28, 2009, 05:08:34 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 17, 2009, 03:01:37 AM
bahut bahut khoob shally ji,

Shukriya madhuvesh ji,

Pehli baar aapko apne thread me dekhkar aacha laga.

Shally.
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«Reply #26 on: May 28, 2009, 05:09:24 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 17, 2009, 05:00:27 AM


VERII VERII  NAAAICE....!! K.S

Shukriya K.A. Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #27 on: May 28, 2009, 05:10:21 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on May 17, 2009, 10:45:07 AM
yakeenan bahut umda likha hai Shally
too good   icon_salut

Shukriya diya dear,

Shally.
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«Reply #28 on: May 28, 2009, 05:11:15 AM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on May 17, 2009, 12:58:52 PM
Bahut bahut bahut khoob likha h aapne Shally ji.Ek ek shabd behtrin. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shukriya Pop Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #29 on: May 28, 2009, 05:13:13 AM »
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Quote from: salil2002 on May 18, 2009, 05:52:11 AM
good wrk shally really a touchy one.....bbeautifully versed and phrased......keep up the good wrk

Shukriya Salil Ji, Aacha laga aapko apne thread me dekhkar.

Shally.
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