Har muskurata hua chehra hota nahin meherbaan hai............Aqsh...

by aqsh on April 07, 2014, 08:11:11 PM
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«Reply #15 on: April 08, 2014, 08:14:17 AM »
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Bohat khoob aqsh jee...likhte rahiyeee
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«Reply #16 on: April 08, 2014, 09:03:22 AM »
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wah, wah,  Applause Applause Applause ek Rau banta hai
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«Reply #17 on: April 08, 2014, 11:50:28 AM »
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very nice dear
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«Reply #18 on: April 08, 2014, 12:11:53 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob jee super one.. Thumbs UP

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«Reply #19 on: April 08, 2014, 02:59:02 PM »
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वाह....वाह....बेहद खुबसूरत एहसास.....

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«Reply #20 on: April 08, 2014, 04:12:29 PM »
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Badlaa zamana, pahle ka dastoor bhee gayaa
muthee khuli, mere buzurgo ka guror bhi gayaa
pat'thar-pat'thar zod ghar banaya tha dada ne
wo kyaa gaye beto ka taal mel bhi gayaaa......
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Baajee aapki poetry ki shaan me chaar lines likhe hai.......

By the way
Aapki gazal ki kyaa tareef karuun... Wo sachchaai aapne kholke saamne rakhkhi hai.. Jisse aaj kal sab do chaar ho rahe hai.... SuperB creation
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«Reply #21 on: April 08, 2014, 06:05:40 PM »
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halo sunati hooN tumhe, jo zamane ki dastaaN hai
KyuN bikhri padhi hai zameeN, bik raha aasmaaN hai

Jabse darareiN padhni, shuru hui hai rishtoN meiN
Ghar saare gir gaye, nazar aane lage sirf makaaN hai

Kitna arsa beet gaya, phir bhi aati nahiN pahele waali eid
Halanki har saal aakar guzar jaata, maah e ramzaaN hai

ApnoN ke har sitam ko, ashkoN sang bahakar dekh liya
Zindagi phir lagti jaise ki, kaantoN ke darmiyaaN hai

Khuloos agar shamil na ho apni wafa apne ishq meiN
Yaad bhi lagne lagti hai, jaise ki vahm o gumaaN hai

Muruvvat ko muhabbat ki, halavaat na jaan lena “Aqsh”
Har muskuraata hua chehra, hota nahiN meherbaaN hai
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«Reply #22 on: April 08, 2014, 07:25:07 PM »
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Waah waah waah bas waaaaaaaaaahhhh hi waaahhhhh....
Behtareen Aqsh Jee,
Really aapne kuch naya likha or yakeen maniye kya khoob likha hai aapne....
bahut bahut khoob, dheron daad qubool karein...
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«Reply #23 on: April 08, 2014, 08:11:04 PM »
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Aqsh ji this creation is beyond any appreciation ....behad haseen khayalaat ko aapne pesh kiya hai waah waah
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«Reply #24 on: April 08, 2014, 08:24:27 PM »
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Wah Wah Ashq Jee!! Bohat hi sanjeeda aur haqiqat se judi hui ghazal pesh ki hai aap ne. Har ahsaar khub raha.


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«Reply #25 on: April 09, 2014, 03:14:51 AM »
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waah bahut khoob Aqsh jee.
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«Reply #26 on: April 09, 2014, 01:02:47 PM »
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waah Aqsh ji . kya khubsurat kalam pesh kiya hai . Dheron daad aur mubarakbad.
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«Reply #27 on: April 10, 2014, 03:05:20 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on April 07, 2014, 08:11:11 PM
Chalo sunati hooN tumhe, jo zamane ki dastaaN hai
KyuN bikhri padhi hai zameeN, bik raha aasmaaN hai
haan ji kyon hai aisa....sunaao na icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Jabse darareiN padhni, shuru hui hai rishtoN meiN
Ghar saare gir gaye, nazar aane lage sirf makaaN hai
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Kitna arsa beet gaya, phir bhi aati nahiN pahele waali eid
Halanki har saal aakar guzar jaata, maah e ramzaaN hai
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ApnoN ke har sitam ko, ashkoN sang bahakar dekh liya
Zindagi phir lagti jaise ki, kaantoN ke darmiyaaN hai
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Khuloos agar shamil na ho apni wafa apne ishq meiN
Yaad bhi lagne lagti hai, jaise ki vahm o gumaaN hai
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Muruvvat ko muhabbat ki, halavaat na jaan lena “Aqsh”
Har muskuraata hua chehra, hota nahiN meherbaaN hai

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«Reply #28 on: April 12, 2014, 02:44:03 PM »
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Quote from: Ritesh Modi on April 07, 2014, 09:32:01 PM
behad khoobsurat andaaz se pesh ki gayi peshkash...
dil khush hogaya. haqiqat pad keaccha bhi laga aur dard bhi hua..
wah...very nice...meri aur se ek chota sa toufa aap ko....
thnxxxxxxx a lotttttt ritesh ji...Aapka tohfa qubool hai bahut bahut shukriya ji...
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«Reply #29 on: April 12, 2014, 02:44:49 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on April 07, 2014, 09:36:32 PM
waaah waah superb Aqsh jee behtereen ghazal  sabhi ashaar pasand aye khas ye

Chalo sunati hooN tumhe, jo zamane ki dastaaN hai
KyuN bikhri padhi hai zameeN, bik raha aasmaaN hai

Kitna arsa beet gaya, phir bhi aati nahiN pahele waali eid
Halanki har saal aakar guzar jaata, maah e ramzaaN hai

ApnoN ke har sitam ko, ashkoN sang bahakar dekh liya
Zindagi phir lagti jaise ki, kaantoN ke darmiyaaN hai

Khuloos agar shamil na ho apni wafa apne ishq meiN
Yaad bhi lagne lagti hai, jaise ki vahm o gumaaN hai

ek Rau to banta hai

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thank you sooooooooooo much sahal aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut shukriya..
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