Har muskurata hua chehra hota nahin meherbaan hai............Aqsh...

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«Reply #30 on: April 12, 2014, 02:45:45 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on April 07, 2014, 09:38:22 PM
Jabse darareiN padhni, shuru hui hai rishtoN meiN
Ghar saare gir gaye, nazar aane lage sirf makaaN hai

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Very nice.
thank you soooooooo much sudhir ji...
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«Reply #31 on: April 12, 2014, 02:46:24 PM »
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Quote from: jeet jainam on April 07, 2014, 11:36:57 PM
Chalo sunati hooN tumhe, jo zamane ki dastaaN hai
KyuN bikhri padhi hai zameeN, bik raha aasmaaN hai
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Jabse darareiN padhni, shuru hui hai rishtoN meiN
Ghar saare gir gaye, nazar aane lage sirf makaaN hai
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Kitna arsa beet gaya, phir bhi aati nahiN pahele waali eid
Halanki har saal aakar guzar jaata, maah e ramzaaN hai
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
ApnoN ke har sitam ko, ashkoN sang bahakar dekh liya
Zindagi phir lagti jaise ki, kaantoN ke darmiyaaN hai
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Khuloos agar shamil na ho apni wafa apne ishq meiN
Yaad bhi lagne lagti hai, jaise ki vahm o gumaaN hai
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Muruvvat ko muhabbat ki, halavaat na jaan lena “Aqsh”
Har muskuraata hua chehra, hota nahiN meherbaaN hai
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wah wah wah bohut hi umda hai alfaaz ki apni hi adaa hai wahhhhhhhhh
thank you sooooooooooo much jeet ji...
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«Reply #32 on: April 12, 2014, 02:47:28 PM »
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Quote from: admani on April 08, 2014, 08:14:17 AM
Bohat khoob aqsh jee...likhte rahiyeee
Bahut bahut shukriya shoaib ji...
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«Reply #33 on: April 12, 2014, 02:48:06 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on April 08, 2014, 09:03:22 AM
wah, wah,  Applause Applause Applause ek Rau banta hai
thank you soooooooo much nand ji... rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #34 on: April 12, 2014, 02:48:42 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on April 08, 2014, 11:50:28 AM
very nice dear
thnxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttt sahill ji..
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«Reply #35 on: April 12, 2014, 02:49:16 PM »
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Quote from: Miraj. on April 08, 2014, 12:11:53 PM
bahut bahut khoob jee super one.. Thumbs UP

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thank you sooooooooo much miru ji..
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«Reply #36 on: April 12, 2014, 02:49:53 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on April 08, 2014, 02:59:02 PM
वाह....वाह....बेहद खुबसूरत एहसास.....

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thnxxxxxxxx a lottttttttttt amit ji...
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«Reply #37 on: April 12, 2014, 02:52:01 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on April 08, 2014, 04:12:29 PM
Badlaa zamana, pahle ka dastoor bhee gayaa
muthee khuli, mere buzurgo ka guror bhi gayaa
pat'thar-pat'thar zod ghar banaya tha dada ne
wo kyaa gaye beto ka taal mel bhi gayaaa......
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Baajee aapki poetry ki shaan me chaar lines likhe hai.......

By the way
Aapki gazal ki kyaa tareef karuun... Wo sachchaai aapne kholke saamne rakhkhi hai.. Jisse aaj kal sab do chaar ho rahe hai.... SuperB creation
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Masooooom bahut khoooooob... bahut pyaari lines hai... dil khush ho gaya... meri ghazal ko padhne aur pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya..
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«Reply #38 on: April 12, 2014, 02:52:41 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on April 08, 2014, 06:05:40 PM
halo sunati hooN tumhe, jo zamane ki dastaaN hai
KyuN bikhri padhi hai zameeN, bik raha aasmaaN hai

Jabse darareiN padhni, shuru hui hai rishtoN meiN
Ghar saare gir gaye, nazar aane lage sirf makaaN hai

Kitna arsa beet gaya, phir bhi aati nahiN pahele waali eid
Halanki har saal aakar guzar jaata, maah e ramzaaN hai

ApnoN ke har sitam ko, ashkoN sang bahakar dekh liya
Zindagi phir lagti jaise ki, kaantoN ke darmiyaaN hai

Khuloos agar shamil na ho apni wafa apne ishq meiN
Yaad bhi lagne lagti hai, jaise ki vahm o gumaaN hai

Muruvvat ko muhabbat ki, halavaat na jaan lena “Aqsh”
Har muskuraata hua chehra, hota nahiN meherbaaN hai
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thnxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttttt saru ji...
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«Reply #39 on: April 12, 2014, 02:53:32 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on April 08, 2014, 07:25:07 PM
Waah waah waah bas waaaaaaaaaahhhh hi waaahhhhh....
Behtareen Aqsh Jee,
Really aapne kuch naya likha or yakeen maniye kya khoob likha hai aapne....
bahut bahut khoob, dheron daad qubool karein...
thank you soooooooooooooo much musaahib ji...
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«Reply #40 on: April 12, 2014, 02:54:24 PM »
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Quote from: Akash Basudev on April 08, 2014, 08:11:04 PM
Aqsh ji this creation is beyond any appreciation ....behad haseen khayalaat ko aapne pesh kiya hai waah waah
Thnxxxxxxx a lottttttt akash ji...
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«Reply #41 on: April 12, 2014, 02:55:06 PM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on April 08, 2014, 08:24:27 PM
Wah Wah Ashq Jee!! Bohat hi sanjeeda aur haqiqat se judi hui ghazal pesh ki hai aap ne. Har ahsaar khub raha.


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thnx a lot shireeeeeeeen ji...
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«Reply #42 on: April 12, 2014, 02:55:52 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on April 09, 2014, 03:14:51 AM
waah bahut khoob Aqsh jee.
thnxxxxxxxx a lottttttt iftakhar ji...
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«Reply #43 on: April 12, 2014, 02:56:40 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 09, 2014, 01:02:47 PM
waah Aqsh ji . kya khubsurat kalam pesh kiya hai . Dheron daad aur mubarakbad.
thnxxxx a lottttttttt hasan ji...
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«Reply #44 on: April 12, 2014, 02:57:25 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 10, 2014, 03:05:20 AM
wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
thnxxxxxxxxxx  a lottttttttttt sheba ji...
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