Har pal...................................................Aqsh

by aqsh on November 27, 2012, 04:28:49 AM
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Har pal saansoN meiN, samaane laga hai tu
Pyaar ka ehsaas dil meiN, jagaane laga hai tu

Doondhthi hai nazreiN, tujhe har pal
Dikha kar ek jhalak, sataane laga hai tu

Teri yaadoN se, mehek uth thi hai meri rooh
Apni kushboo ko bikhraane laga hai tu

Chaaya hai tera suroor, kuch is qadar
Aaine meiN bhi nazar, aane laga hai tu

SadiyoN se pyaasi thi, mohabbat "Aqsh" ki
pyaar bhari duniya, sajaane laga hai tu
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«Reply #1 on: November 27, 2012, 04:31:31 AM »
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How romantic!
Bahut achchi koshish hai. Keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: November 27, 2012, 04:33:27 AM »
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SUPERB
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«Reply #3 on: November 27, 2012, 04:40:15 AM »
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Har pal saansoN meiN, samaane laga hai tu
Pyaar ka ehsaas dil meiN, jagaane laga hai tu

Doondhthi hai nazreiN, tujhe har pal
Dikha kar ek jhalak, sataane laga hai tu

Teri yaadoN se, mehek uth thi hai meri rooh
Bikher kar apni kushboo, aazmaane laga hai tu

Chaaya hai tera suroor, kuch is qadar
Aaine meiN bhi nazar, aane laga hai tu

SadiyoN se pyaasi thi, mohabbat "Aqsh" ki
pyaar bhari duniya, sajaane laga hai tu

Bohut khoob aqsh jee kya umda ghazal kahi hai , dherroon daaad qubool karen; sabhi ashaar khoob rahe

            "Aarish"
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«Reply #4 on: November 27, 2012, 04:41:54 AM »
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How romantic!
Bahut achchi koshish hai. Keep it up
very very thnx masoom
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«Reply #5 on: November 27, 2012, 04:42:43 AM »
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SUPERB
thnx sir jee
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2012, 04:43:06 AM »
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Bohut khoob aqsh jee kya umda ghazal kahi hai , dherroon daaad qubool karen; sabhi ashaar khoob rahe

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thank you so much aarish jee
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2012, 10:01:36 AM »
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Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: November 27, 2012, 10:03:06 AM »
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wah romance se bhari huyee, badhai kabool kariye janab
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«Reply #9 on: November 27, 2012, 10:13:36 AM »
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just beautiful..
wonderful.
very very nice
Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: November 27, 2012, 10:22:53 AM »
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Har pal saansoN meiN, samaane laga hai tu
Pyaar ka ehsaas dil meiN, jagaane laga hai tu

Doondhthi hai nazreiN, tujhe har pal
Dikha kar ek jhalak, sataane laga hai tu

Teri yaadoN se, mehek uth thi hai meri rooh
Bikher kar apni kushboo, aazmaane laga hai tu

Chaaya hai tera suroor, kuch is qadar
Aaine meiN bhi nazar, aane laga hai tu

SadiyoN se pyaasi thi, mohabbat "Aqsh" ki
pyaar bhari duniya, sajaane laga hai tu


nice,ma'am
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«Reply #11 on: November 27, 2012, 10:24:19 AM »
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Har pal saansoN meiN, samaane laga hai tu
Pyaar ka ehsaas dil meiN, jagaane laga hai tu

Doondhthi hai nazreiN, tujhe har pal
Dikha kar ek jhalak, sataane laga hai tu

Teri yaadoN se, mehek uth thi hai meri rooh
Bikher kar apni kushboo, aazmaane laga hai tu

Chaaya hai tera suroor, kuch is qadar
Aaine meiN bhi nazar, aane laga hai tu

SadiyoN se pyaasi thi, mohabbat "Aqsh" ki
pyaar bhari duniya, sajaane laga hai tu

zabardast Applause Applause  Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #12 on: November 27, 2012, 10:33:27 AM »
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superb
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«Reply #13 on: November 27, 2012, 11:01:18 AM »
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Bahot khoob.
many many thanks riyaz ashna jee
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«Reply #14 on: November 27, 2012, 11:01:49 AM »
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wah romance se bhari huyee, badhai kabool kariye janab
shukriya nandbahu jee
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