Har Tasavvur har ek Khayaal mein Paaya Tha..

by A.$.H on November 15, 2010, 10:05:05 AM

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A.$.H

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har tasavvur har ek khayal mein paaya tha
woh ek shakhs jo hum ne kabhi ganwaya tha

nazar aata hai ab surajon ki basti mein
ghane darakht ka woh ek sard saaya tha

shab-e-firaq yahi baat ab satati hai
woh bichda mujhse ya mainne use ganwaya tha

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Intezar

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Re: Har Tasavvur har ek Khayaal mein Paaya Tha..

«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2010, 10:24:09 AM »

bahut achha likha hai... do chaar lines aur likhna chahiye aapko jee nahi bhara itna sa padh kar... ummeed hai phir aapki creation padhne ka mauka milega... khush rahiye !

Intezar !


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: Har Tasavvur har ek Khayaal mein Paaya Tha..

«Reply #2 on: November 15, 2010, 10:42:16 AM »

kya baat hai..bahut khoob a$h ji..bada achha laga a[padhkar..

likhte rahiye

dher sarii daad~


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dead heart

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Re: Har Tasavvur har ek Khayaal mein Paaya Tha..

«Reply #3 on: November 15, 2010, 10:00:19 PM »

Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Intezar jee ne bilkul sahi kaha, kuch aur lines add kijiyega..Bada maza aa raha tha padkar..
Akhri shaer toh sochne par majboor kargaya..
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