harjaai.....(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on February 05, 2011, 10:38:27 AM
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                               viraangi mein bhi humein sataate hain.!
                               tarikion mein bhi humein pahchaante hain.!!

                               hataaya kya ek kaantaa raah se humnein,
                               shaher ke loag humein buzurg bataate hain,

                               ho bekhudi mein jab lafzo ka maslaa,
                               shagird mere Ghazal ko sajaate hain,

                               kya hai ki mere qabr se aashna sabhi,
                               baad maut ke yahaan rishte banaate hain,

                               guzri umr KHAMOSH shauq-e- deedaar mein ..!
                               husn wale humein harjaai bulaate hain...!

                              

                              
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2011, 10:39:35 AM »
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                               viraangi mein bhi sabhi jaante hain.!
                               tarikiun mein bhi sabhi pahchaante hain.!!

                               uthaaya kya jo ek kaantaa raah se,
                               shaher ke loag abb buzurg maante hain,

                               bekhudi mein ho jab ghazal ka maslaa,
                               shagird mere alfaaz sajaate hain,

                               kya hai ki mere qabr se aashna sabhi,
                               rishte yahaan baad maut ke nibhaate hain,

                               ek umr guzri shauq-e- deedaar mein khamosh..!
                               husn wale mujhe harjaai bataa te hain...!
                               

                               

Ji .. Good One ..... dil se daad !
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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2011, 11:42:48 AM »
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                               viraangi mein bhi sabhi jaante hain.!
                               tarikion mein bhi sabhi pahchaante hain.!!

                               uthaaya kya jo ek kaantaa raah se,
                               shaher ke loag abb buzurg maante hain,

                               bekhudi mein ho jab ghazal ka maslaa,
                               shagird mere alfaaz ko sajaate hain,

                               kya hai ki mere qabr se aashna sabhi,
                               rishte yahaan baad maut ke nibhaate hain,

                               ek umr guzri shauq-e- deedaar mein khamosh..!
                               husn wale mujhe harjaai bataate hain...!
                               

                               

Aapki koshish ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage hume ... sabhi ashaar asardaar adaa hue hai .. Very Nice Creation ... !

daad qubuul farmaayeN ... !
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2011, 03:52:31 PM »
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                               viraangi mein bhi sabhi jaante hain.!
                               tarikion mein bhi sabhi pahchaante hain.!!

                               uthaaya kya jo ek kaantaa raah se,
                               shaher ke loag abb buzurg maante hain,

                               bekhudi mein ho jab ghazal ka maslaa,
                               shagird mere alfaaz ko sajaate hain,

                               kya hai ki mere qabr se aashna sabhi,
                               rishte yahaan baad maut ke nibhaate hain,

                               guzri ek umr shauq-e- deedaar mein khamosh..!
                               husn wale mujhe harjaai bataate hain...!
                               

                               
Bahaut bahaut khoob jee..
Dusra shaer sabse zada pasand aya mujhe..
Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2011, 04:20:28 PM »
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wah bahut khub K_A ji.
aapka andaaz e bayaan bahut dilchasp hai aur har sher ko aapne bakhubi alfaaz die hain.
dil se daad ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 07, 2011, 08:52:31 AM »
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Bahut Khub Khamosh JI
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2011, 07:53:19 AM »
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Ji .. Good One ..... dil se daad !

thanks R-2
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«Reply #7 on: February 16, 2011, 06:33:08 PM »
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Aapki koshish ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage hume ... sabhi ashaar asardaar adaa hue hai .. Very Nice Creation ... !

daad qubuul farmaayeN ... !

THANX AM
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«Reply #8 on: February 16, 2011, 06:34:05 PM »
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wah bahut khub K_A ji.
aapka andaaz e bayaan bahut dilchasp hai aur har sher ko aapne bakhubi alfaaz die hain.
dil se daad ji
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thanx
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THANX NIRALA JI
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«Reply #9 on: February 16, 2011, 06:34:57 PM »
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Bahut Khub Khamosh JI

THANX RA
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