Harjaayee dar-b-dar hai, paraayee hai yeh hawaa!:Ghazals

abdbundeli

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Meyrey adabee dosto!
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/submit-your-poetry-now-show-to-world-p9.html par meyrey dwaaraa post keen gayeen kayee gazaloun ko 'copy-paste' key dwaaraa, kuchh 'beyeemaan log' apney naam sey doosree 'sites' par post kar rahey hain! Aik nayaa mua'amlah jo meyree nigaah mein aayaa hai, wah http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/ghazals/ik-dard-chhupaanaa-hotaa-hai-t62017.0.html par, 20-2-2011 ko 10.32.24 AM bajey post kee gayee meyree gazal key baarey mein hai! Is gazal ko http://beautiful-shayari.blogspot.in/2011/08/dard-suhaanaa-hotaa-hai.html par 27-8-2011 ko kisee 'Shahnaaz' ney post kiyaa hai, wa 'abd' kee jagah 'Naaz' substitute kar diyaa hai!
Isliye main aaj key ba'ad apnee koyee bhee pooree gazal post karney sey bachoongaa!

Harjaayee dar-b-dar hai, paraayee hai yeh hawaa!
Kisko patah hai, chhoo kisey aayee hai yeh hawaa?

Meyraa khayaal hai, ki, tujhey chhoo key baarahaa;
Jaw sey, zameen sey, arsh mein chhaayee hai yeh hawaa!

Gardish hai, rawaan reyg hai, raah-e-talab key naam;
Meyree tarah kisee ki sataayee hai yeh hawaa?

Jaaree hai, 'abd', jaakey loutney kaa silsilah:
Katm-e-adam mein lout samaayee hai yeh hawaa!

- abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)


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malli

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Re: Harjaayee dar-b-dar hai, paraayee hai yeh hawaa!

«Reply #1 on: May 30, 2012, 03:34:28 PM »

Harjaayee dar-b-dar hai, paraayee hai yeh hawaa!
Kisko patah hai, chhoo kisey aayee hai yeh hawaa?

Meyraa khayaal hai, ki, tujhey chhoo key baarahaa;
Jaw sey, zameen sey, arsh mein chhaayee hai yeh hawaa!

Gardish hai, rawaan reyg hai, raah-e-talab key naam;
Meyree tarah kisee ki sataayee hai yeh hawaa?

Jaaree hai, 'abd', jaakey loutney kaa silsilah:
Katm-e-adam mein lout samaayee hai yeh hawaa!

- abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)

Wah wah bahut hi khoob likha hai... aap ja jawab nahi.


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Re: Harjaayee dar-b-dar hai, paraayee hai yeh hawaa!

«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2012, 04:08:07 AM »

bade dukh kee baat hai ye sahityik choree meree nazron men badd zurm hai.


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abdbundeli

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Re: Harjaayee dar-b-dar hai, paraayee hai yeh hawaa!

«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2012, 12:36:22 PM »

Quote from: malli on May 30, 2012, 03:34:28 PM

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, malli ji!


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abdbundeli

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Re: Harjaayee dar-b-dar hai, paraayee hai yeh hawaa!

«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2012, 12:42:36 PM »

Quote from: sksaini4 on May 31, 2012, 04:08:07 AM

bade dukh kee baat hai ye sahityik choree meree nazron men badd zurm hai.

Dr Saini ji/, Aap kaa kahnaa bilkul sahee hai!
Choree karney kee koshish to kee hee jaa rahee hai! Par, sach to ujaagar ho hi jaataa hai! Meyree kisee na kisee kitaab mein yah gazal bhee zaroor hee 'sangraheet' ho chukee hogee, wa aik-do doosree 'sites' par bhi yah bahut pahile sey 'posted' hai!


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