haspatal mein karo daakhil.. hum patthar dil hain.. charan..

by lovely_charan on February 09, 2013, 07:11:37 AM
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hum kahan kisi ke kabil.. hum patthar dil hain..
hum nahi kisi ki manzil.. hum patthar dil hain..

koi kehta tha ki tum jaan ho, mera armaan ho..
nahi kisi khitab ke kabil.. hum patthar dil hain..

kisi bachche se milti hai surat, murat bhi meri..
na karo bachche ko bojhil. hum patthar dil hain..

nahi fikar mujhko uski wafaon ki,, sadaaon ki..
nahi chahiye woh mehfil.. hum patthar dil hain..

kahan se laun main woh chehra apna phir se..
ghum de gaya kaatil.. hum patthar dil hain..

koi hal ho toh batayein "charan" ko iss bimari ka..
haspatal mein karo daakhil.. hum patthar dil hain..
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«Reply #1 on: February 09, 2013, 07:18:46 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob lovely charan jee
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«Reply #2 on: February 09, 2013, 07:36:53 AM »
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waah waah subhaan allah kamal kee peshkash dheron daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #3 on: February 09, 2013, 08:00:39 AM »
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wah wah wah wah wah kya baat hai bohut khoob , lovely jee umda peshkash rahi dheerroonnn Daad qubool kareN
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«Reply #4 on: February 09, 2013, 08:27:14 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob lovely charan jee
thanks a lot aqsh ji Usual Smile
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waah waah subhaan allah kamal kee peshkash dheron daad aur mubarakbaad
thank you sir.. aapko pasand aayi bas koshish kaamyab rahi lagta hai Usual Smile please tell me my mistakes sir.. i wish to be a good student
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wah wah wah wah wah kya baat hai bohut khoob , lovely jee umda peshkash rahi dheerroonnn Daad qubool kareN
bahut bahut shukriya aapka aarish ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2013, 09:06:13 AM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on February 09, 2013, 07:11:37 AM
hum kahan kisi ke kabil.. hum patthar dil hain..
hum nahi kisi ki manzil.. hum patthar dil hain..

koi kehta tha ki tum jaan ho, mera armaan ho..
nahi kisi khitab ke kabil.. hum patthar dil hain..

kisi bachche se milti hai surat, murat bhi meri..
na karo bachche ko bojhil. hum patthar dil hain..

nahi fikar mujhko uski wafaon ki,, sadaaon ki..
nahi chahiye woh mehfil.. hum patthar dil hain..

kahan se laun main woh chehra apna phir se..
ghum de gaya kaatil.. hum patthar dil hain..

koi hal ho toh batayein "charan" ko iss bimari ka..
haspatal mein karo daakhil.. hum patthar dil hain..


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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2013, 09:42:46 AM »
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«Reply #9 on: February 09, 2013, 10:23:53 AM »
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hum kahan kisi ke kabil.. hum patthar dil hain..
hum nahi kisi ki manzil.. hum patthar dil hain..

koi kehta tha ki tum jaan ho, mera armaan ho..
nahi kisi khitab ke kabil.. hum patthar dil hain..

kisi bachche se milti hai surat, murat bhi meri..
na karo bachche ko bojhil. hum patthar dil hain..

nahi fikar mujhko uski wafaon ki,, sadaaon ki..
nahi chahiye woh mehfil.. hum patthar dil hain..

kahan se laun main woh chehra apna phir se..
ghum de gaya kaatil.. hum patthar dil hain..

koi hal ho toh batayein "charan" ko iss bimari ka..
haspatal mein karo daakhil.. hum patthar dil hain..

hum kahan kisi ke kabil.. hum patthar dil hain..
hum nahi kisi ki manzil.. hum patthar dil hain..
 WOW LOVELY LOVELY CHARAN,,
BOHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI,,,ZABARDAST,,
AAP PATHHER DIL NAI HO,,PATTHER DIL HOTE TO SHAYERI NA KAR SAKTE,
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«Reply #10 on: February 09, 2013, 11:56:11 AM »
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boht khub boht umda waah waah
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bahut bahut shukriya qalb ji Usual Smile
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Applause Applause Applause bhut khub ji
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«Reply #13 on: February 09, 2013, 02:06:43 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on February 09, 2013, 10:23:53 AM
hum kahan kisi ke kabil.. hum patthar dil hain..
hum nahi kisi ki manzil.. hum patthar dil hain..
 WOW LOVELY LOVELY CHARAN,,
BOHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI,,,ZABARDAST,,
AAP PATHHER DIL NAI HO,,PATTHER DIL HOTE TO SHAYERI NA KAR SAKTE,
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itni sari tareefon ka tahe dil se shukriya.. itni tareef ke kabil main nahi
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Quote from: saahill on February 09, 2013, 11:56:11 AM
boht khub boht umda waah waah
thanks saahil ji
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