Hasratein uthati hain.............................saru.......................84

by SURESH SANGWAN on April 30, 2014, 05:27:30 PM
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हसरतें  उठती  हैं  जज़्बात  मचल जाते हैं
वक़्त के  साथ  ऐसे रोज़  भी  ढल जाते हैं

यूँ  तो उठते हैं  ईश्क़  के  तूफान  दिल में
मगर एहतियात के दरिया  में जल जाते हैं

इस  बात  से बे -इंतेहाँ  हैरानी   है   मुझे
जाने  कहाँ  जानेवाले  आजकल   जाते  हैं

तदबीर  क्या  निकलेगी  मुश्क़िलों की यहाँ
कस्में- वादे चंद सिक्कों  में बदल जाते हैं

तेरी यादों के जब  फूल  महकते हैं दिल में
ज़िंदगी  के  झोंके  छू  के  निकल  जाते हैं

राह-ए-शौक़ में मुश्क़िलों ने हिम्मत सिवा दी
लोग  क्यूँ  ठोकरें  खाकर   संभल  जाते हैं

तू लाख पढ़ ले पोथियां  तज़रबे  रखे हज़ार
ये दुनियाँ वाले 'सरु' चाल  तो चल जाते हैं




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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2014, 05:43:25 PM »
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 Applause bahut ache ashaar hain
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2014, 05:50:11 PM »
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तू लाख पढ़ ले पोथियां  तज़रबे  रखे हज़ार
ये दुनियाँ वाले 'सरु' चाल  तो चल जाते हैं
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woow maam this one is AMAZING i liked it very much just beautiful plss accept one RAU
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2014, 05:53:35 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya premdeep ji....
hausla afzahi aur apna qeemati waqt dene ka dher sara shukriya....
Aur haan ji RAU ke liye bhi
तू लाख पढ़ ले पोथियां  तज़रबे  रखे हज़ार
ये दुनियाँ वाले 'सरु' चाल  तो चल जाते हैं
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
 notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy notworthy
 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

woow maam this one is AMAZING i liked it very much just beautiful plss accept one RAU
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«Reply #4 on: April 30, 2014, 05:54:12 PM »
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waaahh bahut hi umda...
bahu khoob...
Dheron daad qubool karein...
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«Reply #5 on: April 30, 2014, 05:58:01 PM »
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thanks a lot Hasan ji....
wav
Applause bahut ache ashaar hain
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«Reply #6 on: April 30, 2014, 06:02:26 PM »
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Wah Wah Suresh Jee Bahut Umdah Qalaam hai aapka,dheron daad. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #7 on: April 30, 2014, 06:03:11 PM »
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thanks a lot Bishwajeet ji
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waaahh bahut hi umda...
bahu khoob...
Dheron daad qubool karein...
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«Reply #8 on: April 30, 2014, 06:04:58 PM »
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हसरतें  उठती  हैं  जज़्बात  मचल जाते हैं
वक़्त के  साथ  ऐसे रोज़  भी  ढल जाते हैं

यूँ  तो उठते हैं  ईश्क़  के  तूफान  दिल में
मगर एहतियात के दरिया  में जल जाते हैं

इस  बात  से बे -इंतेहाँ  हैरानी   है   मुझे
जाने  कहाँ  जानेवाले  आजकल   जाते  हैं

तदबीर  क्या  निकलेगी  मुश्क़िलों की यहाँ
कस्में- वादे चाँद सिक्कों  में बदल जाते हैं

तेरी यादों के जब  फूल  महकते हैं दिल में
ज़िंदगी  के  झोंके  छू  के  निकल  जाते हैं

राह-ए-शौक़ में मुश्क़िलों ने हिम्मत सिवा दी
लोग  क्यूँ  ठोकरें  खाकर   संभल  जाते हैं

तू लाख पढ़ ले पोथियां  तज़रबे  रखे हज़ार
ये दुनियाँ वाले 'सरु' चाल  तो चल जाते हैं





Bahut khoo Suresh ji.
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«Reply #9 on: April 30, 2014, 06:08:45 PM »
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thanks a lot Ravi ji
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Bahut khoo Suresh ji.
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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2014, 06:26:24 PM »
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thanks a lot surindarn ji
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Wah Wah Suresh Jee Bahut Umdah Qalaam hai aapka,dheron daad. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2014, 06:56:02 PM »
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waah bhot khub suresh ji
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«Reply #12 on: April 30, 2014, 07:24:26 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: April 30, 2014, 07:56:42 PM »
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bahut hi jyaada achha likha h ...aapne
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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2014, 08:14:01 PM »
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bahut khub saruji

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