haste haste roti ho tum

by janumanu on May 31, 2013, 07:57:11 AM
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हंसते हंसते रोती हो तुम
ऐसे में इकलौती हो तुम

किसके जाने का धड़का है
आँखें खोल के सोती हो तुम

उसको मोती पसंद बहुत और
धागे में फूल पिरोती हो तुम

us dam nazm kahunga tumpar
कब कब मेरी होती हो तुम

सारे गमले लाल पड़े हैं
इनमे आँसू बौती हो तुम

प्यार वहीं है जिस्म गया है
क्या पाया था जो खोती हो तुम
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2013, 12:01:22 PM »
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waaah kya khubsurat likha hai waah waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2013, 01:43:11 PM »
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interesting laga mujhe... likhte rahiye mirza saaheb...
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2013, 03:03:36 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2013, 03:57:37 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah vikas bahut pyaari ghazal hai yeh aur woh sher us dam nazm kahoonga tum par wala dil ko choo gaya. bahut mubarak ho tumhe
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«Reply #6 on: May 31, 2013, 05:42:29 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: May 31, 2013, 06:58:30 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob.. Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2013, 12:32:43 AM »
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हंसते हंसते रोती हो तुम
ऐसे में इकलौती हो तुम

किसके जाने का धड़का है
आँखें खोल के सोती हो तुम

उसको मोती पसंद बहुत और
धागे में फूल पिरोती हो तुम

us dam nazm kahunga tumpar
कब कब मेरी होती हो तुम

सारे गमले लाल पड़े हैं
इनमे आँसू बौती हो तुम

प्यार वहीं है जिस्म गया है
क्या पाया था जो खोती हो तुम

Wah,Wah,Wah,Bahut khoobsurat ahsaas ke sath bahtreeeeeeeeeeeeeeen ghazal kahi hai aapne.Last Sher se tha DELETE kar den,to wazn thhik ho jayaga.
प्यार वहीं है जिस्म गया है
क्या पाया,जो खोती हो तुम
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«Reply #9 on: June 04, 2013, 04:50:40 AM »
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shukriyaa ashq sahab .. aur theek kaha aapne .. Usual Smile

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