hausla laaun kaise

by saahill on March 19, 2012, 05:42:12 AM
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toote dil ko jo mile woh raahat paaun kaise
phir se dadhke yeh hausla laaun kaise

Ab to dar rehta hai phoolon se bhi .
Daaman kaanton se main apna uljhaun kaise

zindagi thi jo meRi uske dam se .
Bina  saanson ke yeh jism chalaaun kaise
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«Reply #1 on: March 19, 2012, 05:50:31 AM »
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agar pahlee do lines men bhee "kahaan se" ki jagah "kaise" kar len to matlab to vhee rahegaa par pooree rachnaa kee khoobsoortee badh jaayegee
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«Reply #2 on: March 19, 2012, 07:12:38 AM »
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bahut hi badiya sahiil ji!!....
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Quote from: saahill on March 19, 2012, 05:42:12 AM
toote dil ko jo mile woh raahat paaun kaise
phir se dadhke yeh hausla laaun kaise
wah kya khoob kahaa sahill Applause Applause Applause
Ab to dar rehta hai phoolon se bhi .
Daaman kaanton se main apna uljhaun kaise
kya khoob.! Applause Applause Applause Applause
zindagi thi jo meRi uske dam se .
Bina  saanson ke yeh jism chalaaun kaise

kya khoob kahaa very nice Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut pyara kalaam............!
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«Reply #4 on: March 19, 2012, 11:07:54 AM »
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thx saini ji
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«Reply #5 on: March 19, 2012, 04:50:15 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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thx dolly ji
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