Hawaa ho rahee hai sharam dheerey-dheerey!

by abdbundeli on March 10, 2009, 08:19:31 AM
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Mulaaqaat hogee garam dheerey-dheerey!
Sawaalaat hongey naram dheerey-dheerey!

Abhi, dooriyaan khaas, baaqee hain ham mein;
Abhi ho rahey hain karam dheerey-dheerey!

Tah-e-jaw talak raah mein woh naheen hai;
Nigaahoun mein hogaa haram dheerey-dheerey!

Kabhi thaa nazar par naqaaboun kaa saayaa;
Hawaa ho rahee hai sharam dheerey-dheerey!

Woh kuchh aur they; aur, kuchh aur they ham;
Fanaa ho rahey ab bharam dheerey-dheerey!

Naheen jaantey they, samajh aa rahaa ab,
Ki, inssaaniyat hai dharam, dheerey-dheerey!

‘Abd’, aarzoo hai, miley ghar tumhaaraa:
Rah-e-dar hain ham, muhtaram, dheerey-dheerey!

                           - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2009, 08:27:39 AM »
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hey abd,aap aise hi likhte raho,hum aap ke kareeb aate rahenge dheerey dheerey,
anyway very nice,keep it up.

madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2009, 08:34:26 AM »
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Subhan_allah Bhaiyya specially the 5th sher.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Pehle aitbaar phir dil phir GHAYEL toota
Sanam ho raha tha be_reham dheere dheere

-SG-
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2009, 09:25:02 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on March 10, 2009, 08:27:39 AM
hey abd,aap aise hi likhte raho,hum aap ke kareeb aate rahenge dheerey dheerey,
anyway very nice,keep it up.
madhuwesh
madhuwesh ji!
Itnaa meethhaa bologey to 'nikatataa' to badhheygee hee! Shukriyah!
                                        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2009, 12:17:45 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on March 10, 2009, 08:34:26 AM
Subhan_allah Bhaiyya specially the 5th sher.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Pehle aitbaar phir dil phir GHAYEL toota
Sanam ho raha tha be_reham dheere dheere

-SG-

Na tooteyngey taarey; na tooteyngey sapney!
Wah din aayegaa, jab sabhi hongey apney!
Kaheen dushmanoun kaa na hogaa thhikaanaa;
Lageyngey, mahaz naam sun, haath kampney!!

                    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2009, 01:19:27 PM »
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Bohot bohot Khoob Babu Ji...sach kaha aapne..."Dheere dheere" radeef par ye ghazal ek alag tarah ka manzar laati hain aankhon ke saamne....Bohot Khoob Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 11, 2009, 01:31:39 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on March 11, 2009, 01:19:27 PM
Bohot bohot Khoob Babu Ji...sach kaha aapne..."Dheere dheere" radeef par ye ghazal ek alag tarah ka manzar laati hain aankhon ke saamne....Bohot Khoob Applause Applause Applause
Thanks a lot! I'm happy to know that it has pleased you!
     - abd bundeli
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«Reply #7 on: March 12, 2009, 08:04:23 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on March 10, 2009, 08:19:31 AM
Mulaaqaat hogee garam dheerey-dheerey!
Sawaalaat hongey naram dheerey-dheerey!

Abhi, dooriyaan khaas, baaqee hain ham mein;
Abhi ho rahey hain karam dheerey-dheerey!

Tah-e-jaw talak raah mein woh naheen hai;
Nigaahoun mein hogaa haram dheerey-dheerey!

Kabhi thaa nazar par naqaaboun kaa saayaa;
Hawaa ho rahee hai sharam dheerey-dheerey!

Woh kuchh aur they; aur, kuchh aur they ham;
Fanaa ho rahey ab bharam dheerey-dheerey!

Naheen jaantey they, samajh aa rahaa ab,
Ki, inssaaniyat hai dharam, dheerey-dheerey!

‘Abd’, aarzoo hai, miley ghar tumhaaraa:
Rah-e-dar hain ham, muhtaram, dheerey-dheerey!

                           - abd bundeli


bhut achi ghazal abd bundeli sahab.................maza aaya ghazal pad kar mashallah saare ke saare aashaar ek se bad kar ek.......achi ghazal se nawaazne ke liyn bhut bhut khukriya..youn hi likhte rahen sir ji...
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«Reply #8 on: March 12, 2009, 08:48:00 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on March 12, 2009, 08:04:23 AM
bhut achi ghazal abd bundeli sahab.................maza aaya ghazal pad kar mashallah saare ke saare aashaar ek se bad kar ek.......achi ghazal se nawaazne ke liyn bhut bhut khukriya..youn hi likhte rahen sir ji...

Bahut-bahut shukriyah janaab!
      -abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: March 12, 2009, 08:57:51 AM »
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Bahoot khoob Sir ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: March 12, 2009, 09:14:10 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on March 12, 2009, 08:57:51 AM
Bahoot khoob Sir ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks a lot, salma786 ji!
              - abd bundeli
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