Haya Tak Naheen Aatee / हया तक नहीं आती...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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होटों पे कभी जिनके दुआ तक नहीं आती
जीने की सही उनको अदा तक नहीं आती

जिस्मों की नुमाइश ने उसे कर दिया रुसवा
करनी पे मगर उसको हया तक नहीं आती

मुश्किल से महीने में बचाता हूँ मैं जितना
उतने में तो खाँसी की दवा तक नहीं आती

किसको हैं ज़माने की मयस्सर सभी ख़ुशियाँ
तक़दीर में मुफ़लिस के क़बा तक नहीं आती

है नाम 'रक़ीब' अपना तभी तो मेरे नज़दीक
दुनिया की कोई खौफ-ओ-बला तक नहीं आती
              --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

hotoN pe kabhee jinke dua tak naheeN aatee
jeene kee sahee unko ada tak naheeN aatee
 
jismoN kee numaaish ne use kar diya rusawa
karni pe magar usko haya tak naheeN aatee
 
mushkil se maheene meN bachata hooN maiN jitna
utane meN to khaaNsee kee dawaa tak naheeN aatee
 
kisko haiN zamaane kee mayassar sabhi khushiyaaN
taqdeer meN muflis ke qabaa tak naheeN aatee
 
hai naam 'Raqeeb' apna tabhee to mere nazdeek
duniya ki koyee khauf-o-bala tak naheeN aatee
                     --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: June 18, 2012, 08:38:05 AM »
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Bahut  khoob , Satish  ji . 3rd  sher  per  khusoosi  daad  .
Bahut  arse  baad  Bazm  mein  aane  per  khair  maqdam  hai.
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satish ji kya baat hai waqai kamaal ki ghazal kahi hai, sabhi ashar lajwab hai, khaskar.. jismoN kee numaaish ne use kar diya rusawa
karni pe magar usko haya tak naheeN aatee... Ye shair lajwab raha. zindagi ki sachchiyon ko bayan karti hui ek zinda ghazal hai. mubarakbad qubool ho...
 
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शान्दार काम भाई जी
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2nd and 3rd  sher bhut pyaara hai.
Aapki es khoobsurat gazal pe ek Rau Pesh-ae-khidmat hai.
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आप बधाई के योग्य पाये गये…… hello2 hello2
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«Reply #6 on: June 18, 2012, 09:43:17 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 18, 2012, 06:47:26 AM

होटों पे कभी जिनके दुआ तक नहीं आती
जीने की सही उनको अदा तक नहीं आती

जिस्मों की नुमाइश ने उसे कर दिया रुसवा
करनी पे मगर उसको हया तक नहीं आती

मुश्किल से महीने में बचाता हूँ मैं जितना
उतने में तो खाँसी की दवा तक नहीं आती

किसको हैं ज़माने की मयस्सर सभी ख़ुशियाँ
तक़दीर में मुफ़लिस के क़बा तक नहीं आती

है नाम 'रक़ीब' अपना तभी तो मेरे नज़दीक
दुनिया की कोई खौफ-ओ-बला तक नहीं आती
              --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

hotoN pe kabhee jinke dua tak naheeN aatee
jeene kee sahee unko ada tak naheeN aatee
 
jismoN kee numaaish ne use kar diya rusawa
karni pe magar usko haya tak naheeN aatee
 
mushkil se maheene meN bachata hooN maiN jitna
utane meN to khaaNsee kee dawaa tak naheeN aatee
 
kisko haiN zamaane kee mayassar sabhi khushiyaaN
taqdeer meN muflis ke qabaa tak naheeN aatee
 
hai naam 'Raqeeb' apna tabhee to mere nazdeek
duniya ki koyee khauf-o-bala tak naheeN aatee Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
                     --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #7 on: June 18, 2012, 09:53:43 AM »
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bahut khoob Shukla ji Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 18, 2012, 01:17:19 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 18, 2012, 06:47:26 AM

होटों पे कभी जिनके दुआ तक नहीं आती
जीने की सही उनको अदा तक नहीं आती

जिस्मों की नुमाइश ने उसे कर दिया रुसवा
करनी पे मगर उसको हया तक नहीं आती

मुश्किल से महीने में बचाता हूँ मैं जितना
उतने में तो खाँसी की दवा तक नहीं आती
 
              --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

hotoN pe kabhee jinke dua tak naheeN aatee
jeene kee sahee unko ada tak naheeN aatee
 
jismoN kee numaaish ne use kar diya rusawa
karni pe magar usko haya tak naheeN aatee
 
mushkil se maheene meN bachata hooN maiN jitna
utane meN to khaaNsee kee dawaa tak naheeN aatee
 
                     --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


Bohat Bohat Hoob Satish Saheb
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: June 18, 2012, 04:50:19 PM »
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bahut achee ghazal rahi, dhero mubarakbaad
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«Reply #10 on: June 18, 2012, 05:33:19 PM »
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Raqeeb Sahaab Aadaab!


Janab itni lambi gair hazeri ke baad aapko yahaaN dekhkar badi
khushi hui.... Par shikayat hai aapse ke aap ne yahaaN apne nishaaN
chhodne bhi baNd kar diye...

Khair badi hi khoobsurat aur umda gazal lekar aap hazir huye haiN..
Kafi umdaa khayaalat bayaaN kiye hai sahaab... aik aik khayaal laakhoN
ka hai... Usual Smile

Behad umdaa gazal hai ... har ashaar par dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 18, 2012, 06:47:26 AM



hotoN pe kabhee jinke dua tak naheeN aatee
jeene kee sahee unko ada tak naheeN aatee
 
WaaH kia kahne sahaab behad khoobsurat aur umdaa
khayaal hai bahut khoob janab... bahut khoob...                   

jismoN kee numaaish ne use kar diya rusawa
karni pe magar usko haya tak naheeN aatee
 
Gazab janab behad khoob... kafi gehra ghav chhodta
hai yeH khayaal bahut khoob... " Karni pe magar unko hayaa tak nahi aati" Masha Allaah kia kahne ...                   

mushkil se maheene meN bachata hooN maiN jitna
utane meN to khaaNsee kee dawaa tak naheeN aatee
 
Kia kahne Raqeeb Sahaab... is qadar khoob sher kabhi
kabhi hi naseeb hote haiN... Haqeekhat hai janab behad khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile                   

kisko haiN zamaane kee mayassar sabhi khushiyaaN
taqdeer meN muflis ke qabaa tak naheeN aatee
 
bahut achche janab bahut khoob daad Usual Smile                   

hai naam 'Raqeeb' apna tabhee to mere nazdeek
duniya ki koyee khauf-o-bala tak naheeN aatee

WaaH jee waaH kia baat hai badi masoomiyat se
tamaacha raseed kar diyaa....
Bahut umdaa daad daad daad ...                   

                     --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #11 on: June 18, 2012, 06:05:57 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 18, 2012, 06:47:26 AM

होटों पे कभी जिनके दुआ तक नहीं आती
जीने की सही उनको अदा तक नहीं आती

जिस्मों की नुमाइश ने उसे कर दिया रुसवा
करनी पे मगर उसको हया तक नहीं आती

मुश्किल से महीने में बचाता हूँ मैं जितना
उतने में तो खाँसी की दवा तक नहीं आती

किसको हैं ज़माने की मयस्सर सभी ख़ुशियाँ
तक़दीर में मुफ़लिस के क़बा तक नहीं आती

है नाम 'रक़ीब' अपना तभी तो मेरे नज़दीक
दुनिया की कोई खौफ-ओ-बला तक नहीं आती
              --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

hotoN pe kabhee jinke dua tak naheeN aatee
jeene kee sahee unko ada tak naheeN aatee
 
jismoN kee numaaish ne use kar diya rusawa
karni pe magar usko haya tak naheeN aatee
 
mushkil se maheene meN bachata hooN maiN jitna
utane meN to khaaNsee kee dawaa tak naheeN aatee
 
kisko haiN zamaane kee mayassar sabhi khushiyaaN
taqdeer meN muflis ke qabaa tak naheeN aatee
 
hai naam 'Raqeeb' apna tabhee to mere nazdeek
duniya ki koyee khauf-o-bala tak naheeN aatee
                     --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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Hasan Sahab...Hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya....Raqeeb
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