Haya Tak Naheen Aatee / हया तक नहीं आती...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #15 on: June 19, 2012, 07:29:34 AM »
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Aarish Ji...bahut bahut shukriya..jawab dene ka..Raqeeb
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«Reply #16 on: June 19, 2012, 08:06:39 AM »
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Kishan Panday ji....hausala afzai ka shukriya....Raqeeb
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«Reply #17 on: June 19, 2012, 08:08:24 AM »
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gazabbbbbbbbbbbbb likha hai aapne rakeeb ji..... bht masttttt hai
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«Reply #18 on: June 19, 2012, 09:51:34 AM »
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Masoom Ji...bahut bahut shukriya ....Raqeeb
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«Reply #19 on: June 19, 2012, 11:24:19 AM »
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kc pandey ji.....jawab dene ka shukriya...Raqeeb
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«Reply #20 on: June 19, 2012, 05:30:54 PM »
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Bechain Sahab...Jawab dene aur hausala afzai ka Shukriya..Raqeeb
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«Reply #21 on: June 19, 2012, 05:34:33 PM »
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होटों पे कभी जिनके दुआ तक नहीं आती
जीने की सही उनको अदा तक नहीं आती

जिस्मों की नुमाइश ने उसे कर दिया रुसवा
करनी पे मगर उसको हया तक नहीं आती

मुश्किल से महीने में बचाता हूँ मैं जितना
उतने में तो खाँसी की दवा तक नहीं आती

किसको हैं ज़माने की मयस्सर सभी ख़ुशियाँ
तक़दीर में मुफ़लिस के क़बा तक नहीं आती

है नाम 'रक़ीब' अपना तभी तो मेरे नज़दीक
दुनिया की कोई खौफ-ओ-बला तक नहीं आती
              --- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

hotoN pe kabhee jinke dua tak naheeN aatee
jeene kee sahee unko ada tak naheeN aatee
 
jismoN kee numaaish ne use kar diya rusawa
karni pe magar usko haya tak naheeN aatee
 
mushkil se maheene meN bachata hooN maiN jitna
utane meN to khaaNsee kee dawaa tak naheeN aatee
 
kisko haiN zamaane kee mayassar sabhi khushiyaaN
taqdeer meN muflis ke qabaa tak naheeN aatee
 
hai naam 'Raqeeb' apna tabhee to mere nazdeek
duniya ki koyee khauf-o-bala tak naheeN aatee
                     --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


Raqeeb sb bahut pyara ghazal likha hai aapne. Lucknow walon ka kya kehna.
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«Reply #22 on: June 19, 2012, 06:02:16 PM »
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Amit Meet Ji...Bahut bahut shukriy...Raqeeb
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«Reply #23 on: June 19, 2012, 06:38:00 PM »
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Shukla jee, aap to kaafi dino.n ke ba'ad nazar aaye YoIndia pe, sabse pehle aapka khairmaqdam karta hu.n. Mujhe to aapki posts ka intezaar rehta hai. Aap ki har ghazal ki tarah ye ghazal bhi shaandaar rahi. Bahut bahut khoob likha aapne, khaastaur pe 2nd aur 3rd she'r mujhe kaafi achhe lage. Dheron daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.
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«Reply #24 on: June 20, 2012, 04:34:30 AM »
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HUM_DUM JI....JAWAB DENE AUR HAUSALA AFZAI KA SHUKRIYA...RAQEEB
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«Reply #25 on: June 20, 2012, 05:06:53 AM »
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Aadaab satish sir
der se reply ke liye maafi chahta hun. bahut khoob likh hai aapne.
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #26 on: June 20, 2012, 06:33:02 AM »
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livingbytheday ji...Bahut bahut shukriya....Raqeeb
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«Reply #27 on: June 20, 2012, 10:09:25 AM »
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ParwaaZ Ji...hamesha ki tarah...post se achchha jawaab..shukriya.
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«Reply #28 on: June 20, 2012, 03:18:28 PM »
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k_a ji....jawab dene aur hausala afzai ka shukriya....Raqeeb
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Hriday Ji...bahut bahut shukriya..jawab dene ka....Raqeeb
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