hijr kee raat hai,,,,,,ghazal,,,,,jeet jainam saini

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main laawaris nahi hoo,n  sath gamo,n kee sougaat hai,
dard e dil se aansuo,n  main bheegi hijr kee raat hai,

zindagi aksr  imtehaa,n lati rahi  har mod mera kiyon,
rab kee nighah main  meri zindagi  kee naa aukaat hai,

din gujarta hai  mera be chain  tadpte  huye is kader,
tanha e raat main hoti aksr aansuo,n  kee barsaat hai,

mohhobat karne kaa  humko kiya  khubb  seelaa mila hai,
yuh din ba din naashad hoti jaa rahi  meri ye zaat hai,

dastaa,n e mohhobat beyaa,n kare to  mahfil ko  rulade,
surkhi e rukhsaar fike karde eyse dil main zajbaat hai,

saanso,n main ghootan dil main chubhan  see hoti  jaise,
mere dil ke sath dhadkano,n   kee aakhiree mulakaat hai,

waffadar kahoo,n ya farebi yeh kashmkash rahi  dil main,
kiya bataate zamane ko usne diye dil ko kitne ghaat hai,
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«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2015, 10:06:29 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2015, 02:43:59 PM »
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main laawaris nahi hoo,n  sath gamo,n kee sougaat hai,
dard e dil se aansuo,n  main bheegi hijr kee raat hai,

zindagi aksr  imtehaa,n lati rahi  har mod mera kiyon,
rab kee nighah main  meri zindagi  kee naa aukaat hai,

din gujarta hai  mera be chain  tadpte  huye is kader,
tanha e raat main hoti aksr aansuo,n  kee barsaat hai,

mohhobat karne kaa  humko kiya  khubb  seelaa mila hai,
yuh din ba din naashad hoti jaa rahi  meri ye zaat hai,

dastaa,n e mohhobat beyaa,n kare to  mahfil ko  rulade,
surkhi e rukhsaar fike karde eyse dil main jazbaat hai,this is not clear ,sir

saanso,n main ghootan dil main chubhan  see hoti  jaise,
mere dil ke sath dhadkano,n   kee aakhiree mulakaat hai,

waffadar kahoo,n ya farebi yeh kashmkash rahi  dil main,
kiya bataate zamane ko usne diye dil ko kitne ghaat hai,








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