Himmat kalam ki...................................................Aqsh

by aqsh on February 16, 2013, 04:31:35 AM
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«Reply #15 on: February 16, 2013, 08:57:41 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on February 16, 2013, 04:31:35 AM
Kabhi dil se nikal kar baat, jab honton pe aati hai
Bayaan kaise karoon, himmat qalam ki toot jaati hai

Khushi ke pal guzaroon toh, kaho kaise guzaroon mai
Na jaane yaad unki kyun, hame har dam rulaati hai

Kabhi jo doondhne tumko, nikal padhti hoon sehra mein
Hawa aakar tumhare, saare naksh e paa mitati hai

Bada hi dard hota hai, tadap ye dil nahi sakta
Bhari aankhon ko duniya, dekhkar sab jaan jaati hai

Ghutan mein jee rahee hai “Aqsh,” dil uska mutassif hai
Bhala yeh zindagi aise, kisee ko kyun satati hai




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«Reply #16 on: February 16, 2013, 09:45:59 AM »
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Waah , aqsh , waah . Kya khubsurat ghazal kahi hai ,  tabiyat khush ho gai.
3rd aur 4th sher bahut hi pyare hain . Bahr mein aap ki shayeri mein 4 chaand
lagna shuru ho gaye hain . Likhti rahye . Bahut  mubarakbad .Hasan
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«Reply #17 on: February 16, 2013, 10:33:20 AM »
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wha wha ji kaya baat ha
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«Reply #18 on: February 16, 2013, 10:40:20 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on February 16, 2013, 04:31:35 AM
Kabhi dil se nikal kar baat, jab honton pe aati hai
Bayaan kaise karoon, himmat qalam ki toot jaati hai

Khushi ke pal guzaroon toh, kaho kaise guzaroon mai
Na jaane yaad unki kyun, hame har dam rulaati hai

Kabhi jo doondhne tumko, nikal padhti hoon sehra mein
Hawa aakar tumhare, saare naksh e paa mitati hai

Bada hi dard hota hai, tadap ye dil nahi sakta
Bhari aankhon ko duniya, dekhkar sab jaan jaati hai

Ghutan mein jee rahee hai “Aqsh,” dil uska mutassif hai
Bhala yeh zindagi aise, kisee ko kyun satati hai

Waah waah aqsh dear bahut bahut khoob likha... bahut bahut daad
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«Reply #19 on: February 16, 2013, 10:45:40 AM »
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very nice bahut bahut khoob kaha aapne  ..
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«Reply #20 on: February 16, 2013, 10:49:13 AM »
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bahut khooob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: February 16, 2013, 11:01:24 AM »
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Quote from: qalb on February 16, 2013, 08:57:41 AM

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Thank you qalb ji
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«Reply #22 on: February 16, 2013, 11:04:18 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on February 16, 2013, 09:45:59 AM

Waah , aqsh , waah . Kya khubsurat ghazal kahi hai ,  tabiyat khush ho gai.
3rd aur 4th sher bahut hi pyare hain . Bahr mein aap ki shayeri mein 4 chaand
lagna shuru ho gaye hain . Likhti rahye . Bahut  mubarakbad .Hasan
Hasan ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya meri ghazal ko padhne ka use pasand karne ka. aapse guzarish hai ki aage bhi isi tarah housla afzai karte rahiyega. jazakallah
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«Reply #23 on: February 16, 2013, 11:04:52 AM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on February 16, 2013, 10:33:20 AM
wha wha ji kaya baat ha
thnx rajan ji
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«Reply #24 on: February 16, 2013, 11:05:24 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on February 16, 2013, 10:40:20 AM
Waah waah aqsh dear bahut bahut khoob likha... bahut bahut daad
thank you soooooooo much suman ji and thnx for the rau also
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«Reply #25 on: February 16, 2013, 12:15:55 PM »
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Aqsh Jee Aadaab!



WaaH jee kia kahne, badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa gazal kahi hai
aapne... aik se badhkar aik ashaar rahe jee... is khoobsurat kalaam
par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile


Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: February 16, 2013, 12:28:30 PM »
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Kya kahun?
accha bahut accha..
Ye taaliya, ye comments, sab aapki hauslafzai ke liye hai..just to inspire you..
keep trying..
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«Reply #27 on: February 16, 2013, 12:38:24 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 16, 2013, 12:15:55 PM
Aqsh Jee Aadaab!



WaaH jee kia kahne, badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa gazal kahi hai
aapne... aik se badhkar aik ashaar rahe jee... is khoobsurat kalaam
par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile


Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
thank you soooooooo much parwaaz ji
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«Reply #28 on: February 16, 2013, 12:38:51 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on February 16, 2013, 12:28:30 PM
Kya kahun?
accha bahut accha..
Ye taaliya, ye comments, sab aapki hauslafzai ke liye hai..just to inspire you..
keep trying..
Thank you sooooo much Mukesh ji
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