HO CHALAA............(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on September 13, 2009, 09:06:50 AM
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           YAHAAN GULDASTAA BHI MASHAAL SAA HO CHALAA HAI,
           YAHAAN KHAAR BHI DHAAL SAA HO CHALAA HAI,

           MARNEY KI CHAAHAT MAIN ZINDAGI LAMBI HO GAYI,
           AARAAM  KARNAA BHI BEHAAL SAA HO CHALAA HAI,

           NIBHAAYA HAI KAI RISHTEY MAIN NEY ZINDAGI MAIN,
           AB APNO MAIN JEENAA BHI MUHAAL SAA HO CHALAA HAI,

           DOSTON KEY BEECH EK SAKOON HOTAA THAA KABHI MAHSOOS,
           KHUDGARZI MAIN YEH RISHTAA BHI BADDHAAL SAA HO CHALAA HAI,

            ISS SHAHAR MAIN KAI NAGEENEY MAUJOOD THEY KABHI,
            YAHAAN ABB KHOTAA BHI JAMAAL SAA HO CHALAA HAI,

           NAFRAT KI AANDHI MAIN JHULAS GAYE SABHI KHAMOSH,
           ABB TO MOHABBAT BHI KHAYAAL SAA HO CHALAA HAI......!!!
      
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«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2009, 10:58:54 AM »
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Wah really nice n wonderful creation Khamosh ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2009, 12:06:49 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Khamosh Ji
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2009, 02:45:08 AM »
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Wah really nice n wonderful creation Khamosh ji. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

THANX MADHU JI
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2009, 02:46:01 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Khamosh Ji

SHUKRIYAA DR SAHIBAA
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«Reply #5 on: September 24, 2009, 07:45:55 PM »
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           GUL BHI KHAAR SAA HUMSHAKAL HO CHALAA HAI,
           SITAM BHI AB PYAAR SAA HO CHALAA HAI,

           MARNEY KI CHAAHAT MAIN ZINDAGI LAMBI HO GAYI,
           AARAAM BHI AB TAKLEEF SAA HO CHALAA HAI,

           NIBHAAYA HAI KAI RISHTEY MAIN NEY ZINDAGI MAIN,
           ISS UMER MAIN KHOON BHI PARAAYAA SAA HO CHALAA HAI,

           TERI QURBAT MAIN EK SAKOON HOTAA THAA MAHSOOS,
           BAAD TEREY JAANEY KEY CHAMAN VIRAAN SAA HO CHALAA HAI,

           SHAHAR MAIN KAI NAGEENEY MAUJOOD THEY KABHI,
           KHOTAA BHI AB NAGEENAA SAA HO CHALAA HAI,

           NAFRAT KI AANDHI MAIN JHULAS GAYAA KHAMOSH,
           AB TO TABAAHI BHI EK MANZAR SAA HO CHALAA HAI
     


wao aap to kamaal ke hayar hain, thx for sharing
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«Reply #6 on: September 26, 2009, 03:36:35 PM »
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wao aap to kamaal ke hayar hain, thx for sharing

THANX SONIAJI JI AND WELCOME TO YO INDIA
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«Reply #7 on: September 26, 2009, 03:46:24 PM »
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Wah wah ... Bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2009, 06:22:18 PM »
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Wah wah ... Bahut khoob


THANX RA
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«Reply #10 on: February 14, 2010, 05:31:22 PM »
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thanx
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«Reply #11 on: February 14, 2010, 05:35:36 PM »
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Wah wah KA ji kitni sunder poem likhi hai aapne bilkul haqeeqat par mabni. Bahut shandaar. ye lines bahut hi achhi lagi:

NAFRAT KI AANDHI MAIN JHULAS GAYE SABHI KHAMOSH,
ABB TO MOHABBAT BHI KHAYAAL SAA HO CHALAA HAI
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«Reply #12 on: February 15, 2010, 08:50:42 AM »
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Wah wah KA ji kitni sunder poem likhi hai aapne bilkul haqeeqat par mabni. Bahut shandaar. ye lines bahut hi achhi lagi:

NAFRAT KI AANDHI MAIN JHULAS GAYE SABHI KHAMOSH,
ABB TO MOHABBAT BHI KHAYAAL SAA HO CHALAA HAI

SHUKRIYA RIYAZ SAHAB
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«Reply #13 on: February 15, 2010, 09:55:42 AM »
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Bahut khoob Khamosh Ji
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«Reply #14 on: February 15, 2010, 07:25:45 PM »
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Bahut khoob Khamosh Ji

thanx RH
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