ho, k na ho (by vb)

by vb on October 21, 2011, 04:09:47 PM
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Shab-e-furqat ki kisi taur sahar ho, k na ho
Main chalaa hoon, koi sehra men shajar ho, k na ho

Koi shama na mazaaron pay charhaayay bhe tu kya?
Meri taqdeer men jalvon ki nazar ho, k na ho

Wo k saaqi hay jisay chaahay may-badar kar day
Ab kisi shakhs ka sansaar men ghar ho, k na ho

Main ne tu toot k chaaha hay tujhay jaan-e-wafa
Teray ehsaas ko chaahat ki khabar ho k na ho

Sheher ko aag laga kar to chali ho lekin
Phir teri raah men ulfat ka sheher ho, k na ho




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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2011, 05:49:53 PM »
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khoobsurat kalaam.waah!!!bahut mubarak ho.Hasan
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2011, 06:00:35 PM »
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VB Jee Aadaab!

Masha Allaah janab kia umdaa kalaam kahi hai
aapne.. bahut khub khayaal aur behad achchi
adaygi rahi... Usual Smile

Sabhi khayaal hume achche lage ... Dili daad
O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

Aur in ashaaroN ke kia kahne janab behad gazab
ke khayaal piroye hai aapne.. bahut umdaa..

    


Quote from: vb on October 21, 2011, 04:09:47 PM


Main ne tu toot k chaaha hay tujhay jaan-e-wafa
Teray ehsaas ko chaahat ki khabar ho k na ho

Masha Allaah janab behad laa jawaab
sher kaha hai daad ... Usual Smile   Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  


Sheher ko aag laga kar to chali ho lekin
Phir teri raah men ulfat ka sheher ho, k na ho

Yeh bhi behad umdaa raha ... Usual Smile   Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  



Humari daad firse aik baar...

Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile    
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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2011, 06:13:32 PM »
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Quote from: vb on October 21, 2011, 04:09:47 PM


Shab-e-furqat ki kisi taur sahar ho, k na ho
Main chalaa hoon, koi sehra men shajar ho, k na ho

Koi shama na mazaaron pay charhaayay bhe tu kya?
Meri taqdeer men jalvon ki nazar ho, k na ho

Wo k saaqi hay jisay chaahay may-badar kar day
Ab kisi shakhs ka sansaar men ghar ho, k na ho

Main ne tu toot k chaaha hay tujhay jaan-e-wafa
Teray ehsaas ko chaahat ki khabar ho k na ho

Sheher ko aag laga kar to chali ho lekin
Phir teri raah men ulfat ka sheher ho, k na ho




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wowww greatttttttt!!!!!!
once again superbbb poetry Sirji
just fantastic:)

iss khubsurat ehsaas ko shabd dene ke lie
THANX
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2011, 07:07:12 PM »
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Bahut Bahut achhe VB sahab..!!


Luta.n doon yun daad aisi peshkash par..
Phir aisi ghazal gaur-e-nazar ho k na ho..!!
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2011, 05:21:54 AM »
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Bahut khoob ! likhte raho... abaad raho
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«Reply #6 on: October 24, 2011, 07:06:57 AM »
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Sukriya aap sub ka...


sochta rehta hoon, kuchh sher kahoon ya na kahoon
ab k mehfil men koi deeda-e-tar ho, k na ho.....
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«Reply #7 on: October 24, 2011, 07:10:57 AM »
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bahot khoob sher joda hai ... wah wah
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«Reply #8 on: October 24, 2011, 10:55:09 AM »
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Quote from: vb on October 21, 2011, 04:09:47 PM


Shab-e-furqat ki kisi taur sahar ho, k na ho
Main chalaa hoon, koi sehra men shajar ho, k na ho

Koi shama na mazaaron pay charhaayay bhe tu kya?
Meri taqdeer men jalvon ki nazar ho, k na ho  Applause Applause

Wo k saaqi hay jisay chaahay may-badar kar day
Ab kisi shakhs ka sansaar men ghar ho, k na ho

Main ne tu toot k chaaha hay tujhay jaan-e-wafa
Teray ehsaas ko chaahat ki khabar ho k na ho  Applause Applause Applause

Sheher ko aag laga kar to chali ho lekin
Phir teri raah men ulfat ka sheher ho, k na ho  Applause Applause Applause




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bahut bahut khoob vb sahab
daad haajir hai janab
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«Reply #9 on: October 25, 2011, 07:39:38 AM »
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mkv jee! buhat shukriya aap ka.....
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