HO N JAAE KAHIn GODHARA PHIR SE...///....................///...IFTAKHAR

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DostoN aur seniors ko mera aadaab, abhi k haalaat pe maine ye ghazal likhi
hai, aur khaas baat ye hai ke isse sirf taqreeban 1/2 ghante - 45 minute
meN poora kiya. Pesh hai khidmat meN:



NafratoN   ki   chali    hai    hawa    phir se
Ho  na   jaae    kahiN     godhara    phir se

Apne matlab   ki     khaatir   siyaasatdaaN
BaaNtne naa    lageN    ab    qaza   phir se  

Apni    jaati      ke      insaan    ke    hi  ab
KhooN ka pyaasa  hai InsaaN suna phir se

Bhai  bhai   meN     kaisi    khalish   hai ye
Bhaichara     hua      bad-maza     phir  se

Ayk rab  ki   haiN   aulaadeN   jab  ham to
DarmayaaN   kyuN    hua    faasla   phir se
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«Reply #1 on: September 12, 2013, 08:35:26 AM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2013, 08:38:42 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB............. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 12, 2013, 09:13:58 AM »
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bahut khoob Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: September 12, 2013, 11:10:34 AM »
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Ayk rab  ki   haiN   aulaadeN   jab  ham to
DarmayaaN   kyuN    hua    faasla   phir se

bilkul sach..
kuch mutthi bhar log..dilo ke beech dooriyan paida kar rahe hai.. hamen unse door rahna chaahiye.
khoob likha aapne..aur sahi hai..kabhi-2 likhne me bahut kam waqt lagta hai.
bahut mubaraakbaad
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«Reply #5 on: September 12, 2013, 12:12:17 PM »
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waah waah iftakhar bhai behad khoob likha hai aapne.. Usual Smile

Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: September 12, 2013, 01:50:28 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Bahut Umda.
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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2013, 02:17:18 PM »
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khoob likha hai iftakhar saheb .
siyasatdaanon ke liye bus yahi dua hai ki :

KHAAK  KAR  DE  PAHLE  UNKE  GHAR  KHUDAYA

NAFRATON  KI   AAG  JO  BHADKA  RAHE  HAIN
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«Reply #8 on: September 12, 2013, 02:20:10 PM »
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Sidhi sahi sachchee baat .... Is asardaar bayaan par khoob saaree daad apko Iftakhaar ji
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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2013, 02:32:26 PM »
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bahot khooob, waaaaah hi waaah Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 12, 2013, 09:01:56 PM »
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As Salaamu Alaikum Bhai Iftikhaar....
Fikra Mein Doobi Aapki Ye Ghazal Bahut Achhi Bani Hai
Aur Aapki Saaf Dili Ko Bhi Darsaati Hai Ki Kis Qadar
Insaniyat Ke Liye Aapke Dil Me HumDardi Aur Muhabbat Hai
Par Bhai Aapne Jo Makte Mein Aulaaden Lafz Istemal Kiya Hai
Kya Wo Sahi Hai? Aapko Nahi Lagta Ki Aulaad Ki Jagah
Makhlook Ya Bandey Istemaal Hona Chahiye Tha ?
Aulaad Means Vans Beta Yahi Hua Na ? To Naujobillah
Ye To Phir Qufra Tak Baat Puhanch Jaayegi Na Kyon Ki
Aulaaden To Jani Jaati Hain Na. Aur ALLAH Ne Qur'an e Pak
Para No: 30 Sur e Ikhlas Mein Saf Saf Keh Diya Hai Ki Na
Usne Kisi Ko Jana Hai Na Kisi Ne Usko...Main Ye Apni Samajhdaari Dikhane Ya Aapka Dil Dukhane Ke Aitbaar Se
Nahi Keh Raha Main Sirf Imani Rishtey Aur Islah Ki Garz Se
Keh Raha Hun Umeed Hai Aap Bura Nahi Maanengey ?
Meri Baaten Buri Lagi Hon To Maufaai Chaunga...
Makte Ko Chhorh Baaki Sab Bahut Pasand Aaya Clapping Smiley

ALLAH Pak Apko Shad o Aabaad Rakhey Aameen

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«Reply #11 on: September 12, 2013, 09:38:15 PM »
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waah waah
Sir bahut bahut shukriya hausla afzaai ka.
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«Reply #12 on: September 12, 2013, 11:58:43 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB............. Applause Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Miru jee.
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«Reply #13 on: September 13, 2013, 12:12:26 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: September 13, 2013, 01:38:41 AM »
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DostoN aur seniors ko mera aadaab, abhi k haalaat pe maine ye ghazal likhi
hai, aur khaas baat ye hai ke isse sirf taqreeban 1/2 ghante - 45 minute
meN poora kiya. Pesh hai khidmat meN:



NafratoN   ki   chali    hai    hawa    phir se
Ho  na   jaae    kahiN     godhara    phir se

Apne matlab   ki     khaatir   siyaasatdaaN
BaaNtne naa    lageN    ab    qaza   phir se 

Apni    jaati      ke      insaan    ke    hi  ab
KhooN ka pyaasa  hai InsaaN suna phir se

Bhai  bhai   meN     kaisi    khalish   hai ye
Bhaichara     hua      bad-maza     phir  se

Ayk rab  ki   haiN   aulaadeN   jab  ham to
DarmayaaN   kyuN    hua    faasla   phir se


very nice,sir
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