~Ho Rahi Baarish Hai~:Ghazals

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Tanha Tanha Hai Raat Aur, Ho Rahi Baarish Hai
Kya Kahun Dilbar Ki Kaisi, Ho Rahi Khwaish Hai.

Yun Gayi Hain Lipat Aake Teri Yaaden Mujhse Ki
Dhadkan, Dhdkan Se Teri, Ho Rahi Farmaish Hai.

Jane Ye Kaisa Asar Kar Rahi Hain Chahaten Teri
Dekhta Hoon Jahan Tu Hi, Ho Rahi Taravish Hai.

Aise Na Guzra Karo Tum Benaqaab Baaghon Se
Bezubaan Phulon Ko Tumse, Ho Rahi Kavish Hai.

Karna De Naa Fanaa Kahin Mujhko-e-Dilbar Mere
Yeh Jo Muhabbat Mein, Ho Rahi Aazmaaish Hai.

Kitna Nadaan Hai Samajhta Nahi, Parwaana Yeh
Jan Lewa He Jo Shamma Ki Ho Rhi Numaish Hai.

Kash Ki Sang Tere Guzre, Baqaaya Zindagi Apni
Bas Khuda Se Apni Yahi, Ho Rahi Guzarish Hai

Aaja Aaja Chhorhde Tu, Berukhi Apni Humdum
Dekh Kitni Dushmano Mein, Ho Rahi Asaish Hai.

Taravish....Zahir Hona.
Kavish.....Chinta .Fikra .Dushmani.
Asaish.....Khush Hali.

~Shihab~


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Re: ~Ho Rahi Baarish Hai~

«Reply #1 on: June 19, 2010, 07:41:58 PM »

NICE

Quote from: Shihab on June 19, 2010, 01:44:03 PM

Tanha Tanha Hai Raat Aur, Ho Rahi Baarish Hai
Kya Kahun Dilbar Ki Kaisi, Ho Rahi Khwaish Hai.

Yun Gayi Hain Lipat Aake Teri Yaaden Mujhse Ki
Dhadkan, Dhdkan Se Teri, Ho Rahi Farmaish Hai.

Jane Ye Kaisa Asar Kar Rahi Hain Chahaten Teri
Dekhta Hoon Jahan Tu Hi, Ho Rahi Taravish Hai.

Aise Na Guzra Karo Tum Benaqaab Baaghon Se
Bezubaan Phulon Ko Tumse, Ho Rahi Kavish Hai.

Karna De Naa Fanaa Kahin Mujhko-e-Dilbar Mere
Yeh Jo Muhabbat Mein, Ho Rahi Aazmaaish Hai.

Kitna Nadaan Hai Samajhta Nahi, Parwaana Yeh
Jan Lewa He Jo Shamma Ki Ho Rhi Numaish Hai.

Kash Ki Sang Tere Guzre, Baqaaya Zindagi Apni
Bas Apne Khuda Se Yahi, Ho Rahi Guzarish Hai

Aaja Aaja Chhorhde Tu Berukhi Apni Humdum
Dekh Kitni Dushmano Mein, Ho Rahi Asaish Hai.

Taravish....Zahir Hona.
Kavish.....Chinta .Fikra .Dushmani.
Asaish.....Khush Hali.

~Shihab~


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mamta bajpai

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Re: ~Ho Rahi Baarish Hai~

«Reply #2 on: June 19, 2010, 11:28:06 PM »

BOONDON KE NASHEELE BAAN PADE
TAB AGAN BIRHA KI OUR BADHE
BIJALI KI CHAMAK BAADAL KI GARAJ
KISI OR BHI MUJHKO KAL NA PADE--------KAL=CHAIN

BAHUT MASOOQANA ANDAZ HAI AAP KA SHIHAB SAHEB! PADHTE HI NASHA SA TARI HONE LAGA.BAHUT ACHCHE.........BADI PURLUTF TAKHLEEQ HAI AAP KI ...BAHUT BAHUT BADHAI.....


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: ~Ho Rahi Baarish Hai~

«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2010, 12:19:48 AM »

Good one Shihab Ji


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.adeeb

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Re: ~Ho Rahi Baarish Hai~

«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2010, 07:39:34 AM »

Shihab bhai aapne bahot achhi ghazal likhne ki koshish ki hai jo qabile tareef hai. Dil ki kaifiyaat ko khoobsoorati se alfaaz mein bayaan kiya hai aur beher mein bhi likhne ki koshish ki hai. Main aapse adban kahna chahta hun ke ghazal ke liye uska beher mein hona lazimi hai varna wo ghazal nahi hoti. Isliye jab tak aap beher mein na likhne lagein apni creation ko Ghazal Section ke bajay kisi aur section mein post karein. Aap urdu shairy ke qadradan hain isliye ummed hai ke meri bat ka bura nahi manege. Meri mansha sirf itni hai ke aap aur sabhi Yoindians behter se behter likhen. Aapki is creation ki do lines ko beher mein laane ki ek tajveez pesh-e-khidman:

Tanha tanha raat hai aur ho Rahi hain Baarishein
Kya bataun uth rahi hain dil me Kya kya khwahishein
(faailaatun-faailaatun-faailaatun-faailun)

Ummeed hai aap meri rai par gaur farmayenge.

ALLAAH HAAFIZ.


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Re: ~Ho Rahi Baarish Hai~

«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2010, 07:45:48 PM »

Bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Shihab ji.... bahut sundar rachna hai aapki ye... yunhi likhte rahiye....!!!


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Re: ~Ho Rahi Baarish Hai~

«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2010, 07:55:44 AM »

Wah wah Shihab ji,hamesha ki tarah bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aapne.great creation. Hats off to you!


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aaina

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Re: ~Ho Rahi Baarish Hai~

«Reply #7 on: June 23, 2010, 03:46:16 PM »

Shihaab bhut khoob achi takleeq hai keep wrinting

aslam


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