HONTON KA TABASSUM GAYA , JEENE KA MAZA BHEE ...........................HASAN

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Honton   ka  tabassum   gaya  ,  jeene   ki   adaa  bhee  ,
Yeh  Zeest  , bina  tere  , sazaa  bhee  hai   Qaza bhee


Atkheli   mere   yaar   ke   Aanchal  se   kare   hai  ,
Gustakh  hui  jaati  hai  abb   Baad -  e - Saba   bhee


Sooli   pe   Jahez   ki   chadhi   ek   aur   Dulhan   aaj  ,
HaathoN  se  na  chhoota  thha  abhi  Rang - e - Hina  bhee


SakhiyoN  ne  unheiN  chheda  thha  kal  , le ke   mera  naam  ,
Is  baat  pe  sunte  haiN , woh   khush  bhee  hain  khafa  bhee


Tasweer   nazar   aati    teri    aur   bhi    Dilkash ,
Bhar  deta  Musawwir  jo  zara  Rang – e – Wafa  bhee


Parhez  hai  laazim ,  magar  Ai  Shaikh !  samajh  lo  ,
Kar  jaate  haiN  mohtaat - qadam , Laghzish–e–paa  bhee


Saaqi  ne  ,‘ Hasan ’ ,  aaj  to  HontoN   se   pila  dee  ,
Talkhi  bhi thhi , Turshee  bhi thhi , Mastee  bhi , Nasha  bhee






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tabassum = smile ; zeest = life ; qaza = death ; rang e hina = mehdi ka rang ;
Musawwir = Artist / tawir banane wala ; Shaikh=religious preacher ;
mohtaat qadam = those taking cautious steps ; Laghzish e paa = faltering of steps ;
Talkhi= kadwahat ; Turshi = khattapan
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2013, 07:39:40 AM »
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Kya baat hai hasan jee. behad umda peshkash rahi. ek se badhke ek sher rahe. padhkar dil kush hua. Dil se mubarakbad qubool kare

SakhiyoN ne unheiN chheda thha kal , le ke mera naam ,
 Is baat pe sunte haiN , woh khush bhee hain khafa bhee

Tasweer nazar aati teri aur bhi Dilkash ,
Bhar deta Musawwir jo zara Rang – e – Wafa bhee

Saaqi ne ,‘ Hasan ’ , aaj to HontoN se pila dee ,
Talkhi bhi thhi , Turshee bhi thhi , Mastee bhi , Nasha bhee



Yeh sher bahut khoob rahe. dheron daad.
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«Reply #2 on: February 11, 2013, 08:35:08 AM »
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Honton   ka  tabassum   gaya  ,  jeene   ka   maza  bhee  ,
Yeh  Zeest  , bina  tere  , sazaa  bhee  hai   Qaza bhee


Atkheli   mere   yaar   ke   Aanchal  se   kare   hai  ,
Gustakh  hui  jaati  hai  abb   Baad -  e - Saba   bhee


Sooli   pe   Jahez   ki   chadhi   ek   aur   Dulhan   aaj  ,
HaathoN  se  na  chhoota  thha  abhi  Rang - e - Hina  bhee


SakhiyoN  ne  unheiN  chheda  thha  kal  , le ke   mera  naam  ,
Is  baat  pe  sunte  haiN , woh   khush  bhee  hain  khafa  bhee


Tasweer   nazar   aati    teri    aur   bhi    Dilkash ,
Bhar  deta  Musawwir  jo  zara  Rang – e – Wafa  bhee


Parhez  hai  laazim ,  magar  Ai  Shaikh !  samajh  lo  ,
Kar  jaate  haiN  mohtaat - qadam , Laghzish–e–paa  bhee


Saaqi  ne  ,‘ Hasan ’ ,  aaj  to  HontoN   se   pila  dee  ,
Talkhi  bhi thhi , Turshee  bhi thhi , Mastee  bhi , Nasha  bhee






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tabassum = smile ; zeest = life ; qaza = death ; rang e hina = mehdi ka rang ;
Musawwir = Artist / tawir banane wala ; Shaikh=religious preacher ;
mohtaat qadam = those taking cautious steps ; Laghzish e paa = faltering of steps ;
Talkhi= kadwahat ; Turshi = khattapan
Saaqi  ne  ,‘ Hasan ’ ,  aaj  to  HontoN   se   pila  dee  ,
Talkhi  bhi thhi , Turshee  bhi thhi , Mastee  bhi , Nasha  bhee

Tasweer   nazar   aati    teri    aur   bhi    Dilkash ,
Bhar  deta  Musawwir  jo  zara  Rang – e – Wafa  bhee

WAAH WAAH LAJAWAAB HASAN SAHAB,,,,TOO MUCH HAI,,,
MIND BLOWING,,,,PESHKASH,,,
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«Reply #3 on: February 11, 2013, 08:37:50 AM »
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superbbbbb ghazal Sirji
jitna daad dia jae kam h
thanx for this ghazal

khus rahie
aate rahie
mehfil ko ki shobha badhate rahie
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superbbbbb ghazal Sirji
jitna daad dia jae kam h
thanx for this ghazal

khus rahie
aate rahie
mehfil ko ki shobha badhate rahie
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«Reply #5 on: February 11, 2013, 08:43:18 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab, badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa gazal rahi...
Har tarhaa ke raNgoN se rangi is kalaam par humari dheroN
dili daad O mubbarkbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe, aise hi likhate rahiye...
Bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: February 11, 2013, 09:30:35 AM »
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Honton   ka  tabassum   gaya  ,  jeene   ki   adaa  bhee  ,
Yeh  Zeest  , bina  tere  , sazaa  bhee  hai   Qaza bhee


Atkheli   mere   yaar   ke   Aanchal  se   kare   hai  ,
Gustakh  hui  jaati  hai  abb   Baad -  e - Saba   bhee


Sooli   pe   Jahez   ki   chadhi   ek   aur   Dulhan   aaj  ,
HaathoN  se  na  chhoota  thha  abhi  Rang - e - Hina  bhee


SakhiyoN  ne  unheiN  chheda  thha  kal  , le ke   mera  naam  ,
Is  baat  pe  sunte  haiN , woh   khush  bhee  hain  khafa  bhee


Tasweer   nazar   aati    teri    aur   bhi    Dilkash ,
Bhar  deta  Musawwir  jo  zara  Rang – e – Wafa  bhee


Parhez  hai  laazim ,  magar  Ai  Shaikh !  samajh  lo  ,
Kar  jaate  haiN  mohtaat - qadam , Laghzish–e–paa  bhee


Saaqi  ne  ,‘ Hasan ’ ,  aaj  to  HontoN   se   pila  dee  ,
Talkhi  bhi thhi , Turshee  bhi thhi , Mastee  bhi , Nasha  bhee






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tabassum = smile ; zeest = life ; qaza = death ; rang e hina = mehdi ka rang ;
Musawwir = Artist / tawir banane wala ; Shaikh=religious preacher ;
mohtaat qadam = those taking cautious steps ; Laghzish e paa = faltering of steps ;
Talkhi= kadwahat ; Turshi = khattapan

marhaba marhaba marhaba marhaba , umda , dilfareb, bemisal. ashaaroN se saji ye ghazal shayad aapki likhi hui meri sabse pasandid ghazloN me shumar ho gayee hai. aur sir ek iltija karna chahuNga ki aap apni ghazal post karne se kuch din pehle mujhe inform kar diya kijiye taki maiN us ghazal ke baare men kuch bhi likhne se pehle us ghazal ke mayar ke mutabik kuch alfaz yakja kar liya karuN. aap bohut mushkil men me daal dete haiN. mere jaise kund zehan ke liye k kya likhun aur kya na likhuN... kyuNki sabhi alfaz chote nazar aane lage haiN. lekin is mushkil me bhi apna maza hai khuda se dua hai ki aap yunhi kahubsoorat ghzleN likhte raheN.

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«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2013, 09:58:24 AM »
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bhaaijaan zaroor ye lucknow men kahee hogee aur aaj hyderaabad se post kee hai badee dilqash waah waah mubarak ho
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2013, 11:44:06 AM »
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Honton   ka  tabassum   gaya  ,  jeene   ki   adaa  bhee  ,
Yeh  Zeest  , bina  tere  , sazaa  bhee  hai   Qaza bhee
main agar aa bhi jaaon to kya shart hai tum khush raho ge. insaan apni fitrat se khush rahta hai aur tumhein saari duniya bhi mil jaaye to khush nahin raho ge. aur maut ka maza zindagi mein nahin milta aur marne wala aa kar nahin bata ta ke marne ke baad kaisa lag raha hai Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased

Atkheli   mere   yaar   ke   Aanchal  se   kare   hai  ,
Gustakh  hui  jaati  hai  abb   Baad -  e - Saba   bhee
mujhe qafas mein qaid kar lo. aur hawaa tak ko bhi mere paas nahin aane do. damm ghont ke maar daalo. jallu kahin ke Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased

Sooli   pe   Jahez   ki   chadhi   ek   aur   Dulhan   aaj  ,
HaathoN  se  na  chhoota  thha  abhi  Rang - e - Hina  bhee
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SakhiyoN  ne  unheiN  chheda  thha  kal  , le ke   mera  naam  ,
Is  baat  pe  sunte  haiN , woh   khush  bhee  hain  khafa  bhee
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Tasweer   nazar   aati    teri    aur   bhi    Dilkash ,
Bhar  deta  Musawwir  jo  zara  Rang – e – Wafa  bhee
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Parhez  hai  laazim ,  magar  Ai  Shaikh !  samajh  lo  ,
Kar  jaate  haiN  mohtaat - qadam , Laghzish–e–paa  bhee

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Saaqi  ne  ,‘ Hasan ’ ,  aaj  to  HontoN   se   pila  dee  ,
Talkhi  bhi thhi , Turshee  bhi thhi , Mastee  bhi , Nasha  bhee

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tabassum = smile ; zeest = life ; qaza = death ; rang e hina = mehdi ka rang ;
Musawwir = Artist / tawir banane wala ; Shaikh=religious preacher ;
mohtaat qadam = those taking cautious steps ; Laghzish e paa = faltering of steps ;
Talkhi= kadwahat ; Turshi = khattapan

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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2013, 12:27:47 PM »
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waaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah...........
wonderful.... behtareeeeeeeen kalaaaaaaaaaam............

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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2013, 01:08:49 PM »
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Honton   ka  tabassum   gaya  ,  jeene   ki   adaa  bhee  ,
Yeh  Zeest  , bina  tere  , sazaa  bhee  hai   Qaza bhee


Atkheli   mere   yaar   ke   Aanchal  se   kare   hai  ,
Gustakh  hui  jaati  hai  abb   Baad -  e - Saba   bhee


Sooli   pe   Jahez   ki   chadhi   ek   aur   Dulhan   aaj  ,
HaathoN  se  na  chhoota  thha  abhi  Rang - e - Hina  bhee


SakhiyoN  ne  unheiN  chheda  thha  kal  , le ke   mera  naam  ,
Is  baat  pe  sunte  haiN , woh   khush  bhee  hain  khafa  bhee


Tasweer   nazar   aati    teri    aur   bhi    Dilkash ,
Bhar  deta  Musawwir  jo  zara  Rang – e – Wafa  bhee


Parhez  hai  laazim ,  magar  Ai  Shaikh !  samajh  lo  ,
Kar  jaate  haiN  mohtaat - qadam , Laghzish–e–paa  bhee


Saaqi  ne  ,‘ Hasan ’ ,  aaj  to  HontoN   se   pila  dee  ,
Talkhi  bhi thhi , Turshee  bhi thhi , Mastee  bhi , Nasha  bhee






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tabassum = smile ; zeest = life ; qaza = death ; rang e hina = mehdi ka rang ;
Musawwir = Artist / tawir banane wala ; Shaikh=religious preacher ;
mohtaat qadam = those taking cautious steps ; Laghzish e paa = faltering of steps ;
Talkhi= kadwahat ; Turshi = khattapan

Ab parwaan chada hai mahfil meN..
kya baat hai sir..
ek baar naheeN , baar baar padhne ko jee chaaheN..
meri nazar me..is ghazal ka shumaar aapke dwara likhi behatreen ghazlo me hona chaahiye.

mai bhi Aarish ke comments ko repeat karna chahunga..
dil se salaam..aur mubarakbaad.
ye hamari khushnaseebi hai..ki aap hamare saath hai..
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«Reply #11 on: February 11, 2013, 01:17:12 PM »
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Aahhhaaa..... Kya baat hai behisab bemisal tareef ke liye alfaz kam padenge...... Mujhe to tareef ke liye aarish bhai aur mukesh bhai ke shbd lekar uske baad aapko baar bar salam kr hii tareef kar sakte hai..... Sach mein mujhe shuri se hee saini sir. Khawahish ji aur aapki likhe kalaam behad umda lagte hain..........croro daad aur mubarakbad is zabardast rachna ke liye
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2013, 03:35:35 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaah!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Kya baat hai hasan jee. behad umda peshkash rahi. ek se badhke ek sher rahe. padhkar dil kush hua. Dil se mubarakbad qubool kare

SakhiyoN ne unheiN chheda thha kal , le ke mera naam ,
 Is baat pe sunte haiN , woh khush bhee hain khafa bhee

Tasweer nazar aati teri aur bhi Dilkash ,
Bhar deta Musawwir jo zara Rang – e – Wafa bhee

Saaqi ne ,‘ Hasan ’ , aaj to HontoN se pila dee ,
Talkhi bhi thhi , Turshee bhi thhi , Mastee bhi , Nasha bhee



Yeh sher bahut khoob rahe. dheron daad.
Aqsh , aap ne ghazal pasand ki , hausla afzai ki . bahut shukriya aur duaaein.
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Waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, lajawaab, bemisaal, shaandaar ghazal, maza aa gaya padh ke. Bahut bahut mubarkbaad iss ghazal ke liye.
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Saaqi  ne  ,‘ Hasan ’ ,  aaj  to  HontoN   se   pila  dee  ,
Talkhi  bhi thhi , Turshee  bhi thhi , Mastee  bhi , Nasha  bhee

Tasweer   nazar   aati    teri    aur   bhi    Dilkash ,
Bhar  deta  Musawwir  jo  zara  Rang – e – Wafa  bhee

WAAH WAAH LAJAWAAB HASAN SAHAB,,,,TOO MUCH HAI,,,
MIND BLOWING,,,,PESHKASH,,,
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SAHAL  SAHEB , ZARRA NAWAZI  KE  LIYE  BEHAD  MAMNOON  HOON .
 KHUSH RAHYE .DUAON  MEIN  YAAD RAKHYE . HASAN
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