HONTON KA TABASSUM GAYA , JEENE KA MAZA BHEE ...........................HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: February 12, 2013, 05:55:28 AM »
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superbbbbb ghazal Sirji
jitna daad dia jae kam h
thanx for this ghazal

khus rahie
aate rahie
mehfil ko ki shobha badhate rahie
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THANKS , SARFIRA JI . SATH DETE RAHYE. DUAAEIN .HASAN
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«Reply #16 on: February 12, 2013, 06:31:49 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


Bahut khoob janab, badi hi khoobsurat aur umdaa gazal rahi...
Har tarhaa ke raNgoN se rangi is kalaam par humari dheroN
dili daad O mubbarkbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe, aise hi likhate rahiye...
Bazm meiN aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

shukrguzar hoon , parwaaz saheb ki  aapne  ghazal ki pazeerai ki.
aapke tabsire hamesha hi mohabbat aur  khuloos  per mabni aur hausla
afza hote hain. ehsanmand hoon.
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«Reply #17 on: February 12, 2013, 09:38:14 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #18 on: February 12, 2013, 11:40:25 AM »
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zarra nawazi ke liye tah e dil se mashkoor hoon.khush rahye.
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«Reply #19 on: February 12, 2013, 01:58:02 PM »
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marhaba marhaba marhaba marhaba , umda , dilfareb, bemisal. ashaaroN se saji ye ghazal shayad aapki likhi hui meri sabse pasandid ghazloN me shumar ho gayee hai. aur sir ek iltija karna chahuNga ki aap apni ghazal post karne se kuch din pehle mujhe inform kar diya kijiye taki maiN us ghazal ke baare men kuch bhi likhne se pehle us ghazal ke mayar ke mutabik kuch alfaz yakja kar liya karuN. aap bohut mushkil men me daal dete haiN. mere jaise kund zehan ke liye k kya likhun aur kya na likhuN... kyuNki sabhi alfaz chote nazar aane lage haiN. lekin is mushkil me bhi apna maza hai khuda se dua hai ki aap yunhi kahubsoorat ghzleN likhte raheN.

duaoN ka talib
"Aarish"

Aarish ,zarra nawazi ke liye aapka kaise shukriya ada karoon . Yeh aap hi jaise mukhlis log hain jo kisi kalaam ko waqt dete hain aur apni mohabbaton se nawaazte hain.Haqeeqat yeh hai ki mujhe khud bhi jawab dene mein alfaz dhoonhna parte hain aur yahi ehsas hota hai ki main haq ada nahi kar saka . Albatta,aise tabsire hauslon ko parwaz dene ke sath kamyab koshish ki tasdeeq bhi kar dete hain.Baharhaal aap ko shukriye ke sath zindagi mein aur sukhanwari mein roshan mustaqbil ki dua deta hoon . aap khush rahein .HASAN
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«Reply #20 on: February 12, 2013, 04:20:30 PM »
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bhaaijaan zaroor ye lucknow men kahee hogee aur aaj hyderaabad se post kee hai badee dilqash waah waah mubarak ho
bahut shukriya , saini saheb .
lucknow hi mein kahi thhi lekin bahut pahle.
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«Reply #21 on: February 12, 2013, 05:36:20 PM »
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Honton   ka  tabassum   gaya  ,  jeene   ki   adaa  bhee  ,
Yeh  Zeest  , bina  tere  , sazaa  bhee  hai   Qaza bhee


Atkheli   mere   yaar   ke   Aanchal  se   kare   hai  ,
Gustakh  hui  jaati  hai  abb   Baad -  e - Saba   bhee


Sooli   pe   Jahez   ki   chadhi   ek   aur   Dulhan   aaj  ,
HaathoN  se  na  chhoota  thha  abhi  Rang - e - Hina  bhee


SakhiyoN  ne  unheiN  chheda  thha  kal  , le ke   mera  naam  ,
Is  baat  pe  sunte  haiN , woh   khush  bhee  hain  khafa  bhee


Tasweer   nazar   aati    teri    aur   bhi    Dilkash ,
Bhar  deta  Musawwir  jo  zara  Rang – e – Wafa  bhee


Parhez  hai  laazim ,  magar  Ai  Shaikh !  samajh  lo  ,
Kar  jaate  haiN  mohtaat - qadam , Laghzish–e–paa  bhee


Saaqi  ne  ,‘ Hasan ’ ,  aaj  to  HontoN   se   pila  dee  ,
Talkhi  bhi thhi , Turshee  bhi thhi , Mastee  bhi , Nasha  bhee






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tabassum = smile ; zeest = life ; qaza = death ; rang e hina = mehdi ka rang ;
Musawwir = Artist / tawir banane wala ; Shaikh=religious preacher ;
mohtaat qadam = those taking cautious steps ; Laghzish e paa = faltering of steps ;
Talkhi= kadwahat ; Turshi = khattapan

bahut khoob sahab
is baat pe sunte hai wo khush bhi hai khafa bhi
swaad aa gaya ji

kya kahne
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«Reply #22 on: February 13, 2013, 05:01:26 AM »
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delicious................!
BAHUT  SHUKR  GUZAAR  HOON , SHEBA JI ....MAGAR  YE  
SAHELIYON  KE  NAAM  ASLI  HAIN  YA  MEDIA  WAALE ?
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«Reply #23 on: February 13, 2013, 05:06:39 AM »
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Honton   ka  tabassum   gaya  ,  jeene   ki   adaa  bhee  ,
Yeh  Zeest  , bina  tere  , sazaa  bhee  hai   Qaza bhee


Atkheli   mere   yaar   ke   Aanchal  se   kare   hai  ,
Gustakh  hui  jaati  hai  abb   Baad -  e - Saba   bhee


Sooli   pe   Jahez   ki   chadhi   ek   aur   Dulhan   aaj  ,
HaathoN  se  na  chhoota  thha  abhi  Rang - e - Hina  bhee


SakhiyoN  ne  unheiN  chheda  thha  kal  , le ke   mera  naam  ,
Is  baat  pe  sunte  haiN , woh   khush  bhee  hain  khafa  bhee


Tasweer   nazar   aati    teri    aur   bhi    Dilkash ,
Bhar  deta  Musawwir  jo  zara  Rang – e – Wafa  bhee


Parhez  hai  laazim ,  magar  Ai  Shaikh !  samajh  lo  ,
Kar  jaate  haiN  mohtaat - qadam , Laghzish–e–paa  bhee


Saaqi  ne  ,‘ Hasan ’ ,  aaj  to  HontoN   se   pila  dee  ,
Talkhi  bhi thhi , Turshee  bhi thhi , Mastee  bhi , Nasha  bhee






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tabassum = smile ; zeest = life ; qaza = death ; rang e hina = mehdi ka rang ;
Musawwir = Artist / tawir banane wala ; Shaikh=religious preacher ;
mohtaat qadam = those taking cautious steps ; Laghzish e paa = faltering of steps ;
Talkhi= kadwahat ; Turshi = khattapan

veriiiiiiiiiiii naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice -FHS
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«Reply #24 on: February 13, 2013, 07:42:15 AM »
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 Thankyou !
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wonderful.... behtareeeeeeeen kalaaaaaaaaaam............

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«Reply #25 on: February 13, 2013, 09:26:36 AM »
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Ab parwaan chada hai mahfil meN..
kya baat hai sir..
ek baar naheeN , baar baar padhne ko jee chaaheN..
meri nazar me..is ghazal ka shumaar aapke dwara likhi behatreen ghazlo me hona chaahiye.

mai bhi Aarish ke comments ko repeat karna chahunga..
dil se salaam..aur mubarakbaad.
ye hamari khushnaseebi hai..ki aap hamare saath hai..


Mukesh ji , aapke  khuloos ke liye bahut  shukriya .
Meri khush qismati ki aapko Ghazal itni pasand aayi .
Yeh dar asl  meri ek purani ghazal hai  jo matle se
mahroom  padi thhi . Matla ho  gaya  to  ahl e bazm
kikhidmat mein pesh kar  di.Bahut bahut duaaein.HASAN
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«Reply #26 on: February 13, 2013, 06:22:22 PM »
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Aahhhaaa..... Kya baat hai behisab bemisal tareef ke liye alfaz kam padenge...... Mujhe to tareef ke liye aarish bhai aur mukesh bhai ke shbd lekar uske baad aapko baar bar salam kr hii tareef kar sakte hai..... Sach mein mujhe shuri se hee saini sir. Khawahish ji aur aapki likhe kalaam behad umda lagte hain..........croro daad aur mubarakbad is zabardast rachna ke liye

Badi  zarra nawazi , soudagar ji . aapka khuloos aur himmat afzai
hamesha hi mili hai.aap ko kinhin shabdon ki zaroorat nahin hai.
khaksar ke link per aapki moujudgi hi kaafi hai . Bahut duaaein.
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«Reply #27 on: February 14, 2013, 08:35:26 AM »
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Waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, lajawaab, bemisaal, shaandaar ghazal, maza aa gaya padh ke. Bahut bahut mubarkbaad iss ghazal ke liye.
IFTAKHAR  SAHEB ,HAUSLA  AFZAI KE LIYE BAHUT  SHUKRIYA . HASAN
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«Reply #28 on: February 14, 2013, 01:29:49 PM »
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nand bahuji , bahut  shukriya . khush  rahye.
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«Reply #29 on: February 14, 2013, 02:29:45 PM »
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Honton   ka  tabassum   gaya  ,  jeene   ki   adaa  bhee  ,
Yeh  Zeest  , bina  tere  , sazaa  bhee  hai   Qaza bhee


Atkheli   mere   yaar   ke   Aanchal  se   kare   hai  ,
Gustakh  hui  jaati  hai  abb   Baad -  e - Saba   bhee


Sooli   pe   Jahez   ki   chadhi   ek   aur   Dulhan   aaj  ,
HaathoN  se  na  chhoota  thha  abhi  Rang - e - Hina  bhee


SakhiyoN  ne  unheiN  chheda  thha  kal  , le ke   mera  naam  ,
Is  baat  pe  sunte  haiN , woh   khush  bhee  hain  khafa  bhee


Tasweer   nazar   aati    teri    aur   bhi    Dilkash ,
Bhar  deta  Musawwir  jo  zara  Rang – e – Wafa  bhee


Parhez  hai  laazim ,  magar  Ai  Shaikh !  samajh  lo  ,
Kar  jaate  haiN  mohtaat - qadam , Laghzish–e–paa  bhee


Saaqi  ne  ,‘ Hasan ’ ,  aaj  to  HontoN   se   pila  dee  ,
Talkhi  bhi thhi , Turshee  bhi thhi , Mastee  bhi , Nasha  bhee






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tabassum = smile ; zeest = life ; qaza = death ; rang e hina = mehdi ka rang ;
Musawwir = Artist / tawir banane wala ; Shaikh=religious preacher ;
mohtaat qadam = those taking cautious steps ; Laghzish e paa = faltering of steps ;
Talkhi= kadwahat ; Turshi = khattapan

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