hosh meN aane ko chahiye do ghooNt SHARAAB ki...!!

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Ashq nazaron ko sajaayeN to kya kareN,, saaNseN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN,, aansuoN me baha bhula dete unka gum,, gir ke tasveer unki banaayeN to kya kareN,, chot dikhaane ki milti sajaa yahaaN yaaroN,, ab zakhm na chipaayeN to kya kareN,, tamanna ke sahaare jeeta tha “taish”,, tamannayeN hi jab khud ko mitaayeN to kya kareN…........

SACH,,

SaanseN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN,, ashq nazaroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN………………..



Sabne hume dil se lagaaya bas usne iztnaab* ki,
Itna chaha humne,jise! mohabat itni behisaab ki…

Iztnaab=parhez,, avoid…!

humne use chaha soch kar pankhudi gulaab ki,
ahmaq the hum jise pehchaan na thi naqaab ki…

Ahmaq= Bewkoof,, fool…!

Teri yadoN ke saye me yuN gum rehte hain hum,
Hosh me aane ko chahiye do ghooNt sharaab ki…

Kaun bachaye meri kasti-e-jist ab garq hone se,
Jab nakhuda hi yazdaaN se duaa kare girdaab ki…

Kashti-e-jist= Jeevan ki naav,, boat of life…! Garq= Doobna,, droening…!
Nakhuda= Navik,, boatman…!YazdaaN= Khuda,, God…!Girdaab= BhaNvar,, cyclone…!

maiN wo nange-khalk huN jise khaak kehti hai,
tujhko banaa kar kyuN meri mitti kharaab ki…

NaNge-khalk= Insaaniyat pe kalaNk,, black spot on d name of mankind…!

aaftaab ko v aaj jaroorat pad gayi hai hijaab ki,
“taish” ne tujhse mohabbat itni behisaab ki…

Hijaab= Pardaa,, cloth to hide the face…!
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«Reply #1 on: November 10, 2012, 07:07:11 AM »
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maiN wo nange-khalk huN jise khaak kehti hai,


tujhko banaa kar kyuN meri mitti kharaab ki…



Bohut khoob ghyal jee umda ghazal kahi hai . aur is shair ka to jawab

nahi , dheeroon daad qubool karen...
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«Reply #2 on: November 10, 2012, 07:14:20 AM »
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bohut khub ghayal ji and khub kaha aarish sahab
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«Reply #3 on: November 10, 2012, 07:42:51 AM »
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Quote from: ghayal_shayar on November 10, 2012, 06:47:41 AM


maiN wo nange-khalk huN jise khaak kehti hai,
tujhko banaa kar kyuN meri mitti kharaab ki…


bohut gehrai hai aapke kalaam mein ,youn hi likhte rehiye,,
ummda ,,,,:clap: Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: November 10, 2012, 08:28:50 AM »
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Quote from: ghayal_shayar on November 10, 2012, 06:47:41 AM
Ashq nazaron ko sajaayeN to kya kareN,, saaNseN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN,, aansuoN me baha bhula dete unka gum,, gir ke tasveer unki banaayeN to kya kareN,, chot dikhaane ki milti sajaa yahaaN yaaroN,, ab zakhm na chipaayeN to kya kareN,, tamanna ke sahaare jeeta tha “taish”,, tamannayeN hi jab khud ko mitaayeN to kya kareN…........

SACH,,

SaanseN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN,, ashq nazaroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN………………..



Sabne hume dil se lagaaya bas usne iztnaab* ki,
Itna chaha humne,jise! mohabat itni behisaab ki…

Iztnaab=parhez,, avoid…!

humne use chaha soch kar pankhudi gulaab ki,
ahmaq the hum jise pehchaan na thi naqaab ki…

Ahmaq= Bewkoof,, fool…!

Teri yadoN ke saye me yuN gum rehte hain hum,
Hosh me aane ko chahiye do ghooNt sharaab ki…

Kaun bachaye meri kasti-e-jist ab garq hone se,
Jab nakhuda hi yazdaaN se duaa kare girdaab ki…

Kashti-e-jist= Jeevan ki naav,, boat of life…! Garq= Doobna,, droening…!
Nakhuda= Navik,, boatman…!YazdaaN= Khuda,, God…!Girdaab= BhaNvar,, cyclone…!

maiN wo nange-khalk huN jise khaak kehti hai,
tujhko banaa kar kyuN meri mitti kharaab ki…

NaNge-khalk= Insaaniyat pe kalaNk,, black spot on d name of mankind…!

aaftaab ko v aaj jaroorat pad gayi hai hijaab ki,
“taish” ne tujhse mohabbat itni behisaab ki…

Hijaab= Pardaa,, cloth to hide the face…!


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«Reply #5 on: November 10, 2012, 11:59:40 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on November 10, 2012, 07:07:11 AM
maiN wo nange-khalk huN jise khaak kehti hai,


tujhko banaa kar kyuN meri mitti kharaab ki…



Bohut khoob ghyal jee umda ghazal kahi hai . aur is shair ka to jawab

nahi , dheeroon daad qubool karen...

Aarish ji, jab bhi koi itni dhyaan se padh ke reply karta hai to yakeen maaniye ki dil ko bada sukoon pahuNchta hai, yakeen maaniye iske liye maiN aapka aabhaari huN, bas yahi duaa rahegi ki aage v aapka saath yuNhi naseeb ho sake...
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«Reply #6 on: November 10, 2012, 12:39:14 PM »
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kya baat hai dheron daad qubool kare
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«Reply #7 on: November 10, 2012, 03:56:16 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on November 10, 2012, 07:14:20 AM
bohut khub ghayal ji and khub kaha aarish sahab

shukriya saahill sahab, jahe naseeb jo aapko ye peshkash pasand aayi, aage v bas yahi darkhwast rahegi ki yuNhi aap ahusla afzaayi karte raheN...
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«Reply #9 on: November 10, 2012, 05:16:10 PM »
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Quote from: ghayal_shayar on November 10, 2012, 06:47:41 AM
Ashq nazaron ko sajaayeN to kya kareN,, saaNseN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN,, aansuoN me baha bhula dete unka gum,, gir ke tasveer unki banaayeN to kya kareN,, chot dikhaane ki milti sajaa yahaaN yaaroN,, ab zakhm na chipaayeN to kya kareN,, tamanna ke sahaare jeeta tha “taish”,, tamannayeN hi jab khud ko mitaayeN to kya kareN…........

SACH,,

SaanseN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN,, ashq nazaroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN………………..



Sabne hume dil se lagaaya bas usne iztnaab* ki,
Itna chaha humne,jise! mohabat itni behisaab ki…

Iztnaab(ijtenaab)=parhez,, avoid…!

humne use chaha soch kar pankhudi gulaab ki,
ahmaq the hum jise pehchaan na thi naqaab ki…

Ahmaq= Bewkoof,, fool…!

Teri yadoN ke saye me yuN gum rehte hain hum,
Hosh me aane ko chahiye do ghooNt sharaab ki…

Kaun bachaye meri kasti-e-jist ab garq hone se,
Jab nakhuda hi yazdaaN se duaa kare girdaab ki…

Kashti-e-jist(ZEEST)= Jeevan ki naav,, boat of life…! Garq= Doobna,, droening…!
Nakhuda= Navik,, boatman…!YazdaaN= Khuda,, God…!Girdaab= BhaNvar,, cyclone…!

maiN wo nange-khalk huN jise khaak kehti hai,
tujhko banaa kar kyuN meri mitti kharaab ki…

NaNge-khalk= Insaaniyat pe kalaNk,, black spot on d name of mankind…!

aaftaab ko v aaj jaroorat(ZARURAT) pad gayi hai hijaab ki,
“taish” ne tujhse mohabbat itni behisaab ki…

Hijaab= Pardaa,, cloth to hide the face…!

acha kalaam hai. spelling correct kar lein
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Quote from: sahal on November 10, 2012, 07:42:51 AM
bohut gehrai hai aapke kalaam mein ,youn hi likhte rehiye,,
ummda ,,,,:clap: Applause Applause

sahal ji shukriya, bas yunhi hausla afzaayi karte rahen...
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«Reply #11 on: November 11, 2012, 01:53:31 AM »
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Quote from: ghayal_shayar on November 10, 2012, 06:47:41 AM
Ashq nazaron ko sajaayeN to kya kareN,, saaNseN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN,, aansuoN me baha bhula dete unka gum,, gir ke tasveer unki banaayeN to kya kareN,, chot dikhaane ki milti sajaa yahaaN yaaroN,, ab zakhm na chipaayeN to kya kareN,, tamanna ke sahaare jeeta tha “taish”,, tamannayeN hi jab khud ko mitaayeN to kya kareN…........

SACH,,

SaanseN jism ko sataayeN to kya kareN,, ashq nazaroN ko sajaayeN to kya kareN………………..



Sabne hume dil se lagaaya bas usne iztnaab* ki,
Itna chaha humne,jise! mohabat itni behisaab ki…

Iztnaab=parhez,, avoid…!

humne use chaha soch kar pankhudi gulaab ki,
ahmaq the hum jise pehchaan na thi naqaab ki…

Ahmaq= Bewkoof,, fool…!

Teri yadoN ke saye me yuN gum rehte hain hum,
Hosh me aane ko chahiye do ghooNt sharaab ki…

Kaun bachaye meri kasti-e-jist ab garq hone se,
Jab nakhuda hi yazdaaN se duaa kare girdaab ki…

Kashti-e-jist= Jeevan ki naav,, boat of life…! Garq= Doobna,, droening…!
Nakhuda= Navik,, boatman…!YazdaaN= Khuda,, God…!Girdaab= BhaNvar,, cyclone…!

maiN wo nange-khalk huN jise khaak kehti hai,
tujhko banaa kar kyuN meri mitti kharaab ki…

NaNge-khalk= Insaaniyat pe kalaNk,, black spot on d name of mankind…!

aaftaab ko v aaj jaroorat pad gayi hai hijaab ki,
“taish” ne tujhse mohabbat itni behisaab ki…

Hijaab= Pardaa,, cloth to hide the face…!

bahut umda aur dil se likhi hui peshkash..iske liye dili badhai aur shubhkaamnaayein..
likhte rahiye.......aaple liye ek rau

apka prem
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«Reply #12 on: November 11, 2012, 02:58:38 AM »
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Quote from: qalb on November 10, 2012, 08:28:50 AM

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Quote from: aqsh on November 10, 2012, 12:39:14 PM
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kya baat hai dheron daad qubool kare

tareef ka shukriya aqsh ji, bas aage v aap yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN...
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