HOSH UDAANE WAALE....................................SAINI

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Mere jeevan ko yooN behaal banaane waale.
Aaj poochhenge teraa haal zamaane waale.

Khoob milte haiN mujhe log banaane waale.
Mujhse shaayar ko bhee Ghaalib saa bataane waale.

Meree ghazloN pe teree ek nazar ho jaatee.
Roz kee roz mujhe apnee sunaane waale.

Ab samajh aayee hai mujhko ye teree shaitaanee.
BaatoN-baatoN meN mere dil ko churaane waale.

Teree mahfil se mujhe koi uthaa kar dekhe.
Ab talak aa chuke kitne hee uthaane waale.

Kaash kuchh seekh letaa maiN bhee hunar likhne kaa.
Ab to milte naheeN ustaad sikhaane waale.

Aql aayee  hai abhee zindagee meN ‘saini’ ko.
Geet likhtaa hai sabhee hosh udaane waale.

Dr. Surendra Saini  

मेरे जीवन को यूँ बेहाल बनाने वाले ।
आज पूछेंगे तेरा हाल ज़माने वाले ॥

खूब मिलते हैं मुझे लोग बनाने वाले ।
मुझसे शायर को भी ग़ालिब सा बताने वाले ॥

मेरी ग़ज़लों पे तेरी एक नज़र हो जाती ।
रोज़ की रोज़ मुझे अपनी सुनाने वाले ॥

अब समझ आयी है मुझको ये तेरी शैतानी ।
बातों-बातों में मेरे दिल को चुराने वाले ॥

तेरी महफ़िल से मुझे कोई उठा कर देखे ।
अब तलक आ चुके कितने ही उठाने वाले ॥

काश कुछ सीख लेता मैं भी हुनर लिखने का ।
अब तो मिलते नहीं उस्ताद सिखाने वाले ॥

अक़्ल आयी  है अभी  ज़िंदगी में 'सैनी' को ।
गीत लिखता है सभी होश उड़ाने  वाले ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी  
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«Reply #1 on: September 11, 2013, 01:45:06 PM »
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वाह वाह बहुत खूब.
Quote from: sksaini4 on September 11, 2013, 01:29:14 PM
Mere jeevan ko yooN behaal banaane waale.
Aaj poochhenge teraa haal zamaane waale.

Khoob milte haiN mujhe log banaane waale.
Mujhse shaayar ko bhee Ghaalib saa bataane waale.

Meree ghazloN pe teree ek nazar ho jaatee.
Roz kee roz mujhe apnee sunaane waale.

Ab samajh aayee hai mujhko ye teree shaitaanee.
BaatoN-baatoN meN mere dil ko churaane waale.

Teree mahfil se mujhe koi uthaa kar dekhe.
Ab talak aa chuke kitne hee uthaane waale.

Kaash kuchh seekh letaa maiN bhee hunar likhne kaa.
Ab to milte naheeN ustaad sikhaane waale.

Aql aayee  hai abhee zindagee meN ‘saini’ ko.
Geet likhtaa hai sabhee hosh udaane waale.

Dr. Surendra Saini   

मेरे जीवन को यूँ बेहाल बनाने वाले ।
आज पूछेंगे तेरा हाल ज़माने वाले ॥

खूब मिलते हैं मुझे लोग बनाने वाले ।
मुझसे शायर को भी ग़ालिब सा बताने वाले ॥

मेरी ग़ज़लों पे तेरी एक नज़र हो जाती ।
रोज़ की रोज़ मुझे अपनी सुनाने वाले ॥

अब समझ आयी है मुझको ये तेरी शैतानी ।
बातों-बातों में मेरे दिल को चुराने वाले ॥

तेरी महफ़िल से मुझे कोई उठा कर देखे ।
अब तलक आ चुके कितने ही उठाने वाले ॥

काश कुछ सीख लेता मैं भी हुनर लिखने का ।
अब तो मिलते नहीं उस्ताद सिखाने वाले ॥

अक़्ल आयी  है अभी  ज़िंदगी में 'सैनी' को ।
गीत लिखता है सभी होश उड़ाने  वाले ॥

डा० सुरेन्द्र सैनी 
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«Reply #2 on: September 11, 2013, 01:49:29 PM »
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Waah! Aajkal bahut achha likh rahe hain Sainy ji!
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Khoob milte haiN mujhe log banaane waale.
Mujhse shaayar ko bhee Ghaalib saa bataane waale.

ye khoob kaha aapne.

bahut badhiya Sir
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Mere jeevan ko yooN behaal banaane waale.
Aaj poochhenge teraa haal zamaane waale.

Khoob milte haiN mujhe log banaane waale.
Mujhse shaayar ko bhee Ghaalib saa bataane waale.

Teree mahfil se mujhe koi uthaa kar dekhe.
Ab talak aa chuke kitne hee uthaane waale.

Kaash kuchh seekh letaa maiN bhee hunar likhne kaa.
Ab to milte naheeN ustaad sikhaane waale.
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bahut khoob
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Meree ghazloN pe teree ek nazar ho jaatee.
Roz kee roz mujhe apnee sunaane waale.

Ab samajh aayee hai mujhko ye teree shaitaanee.
BaatoN-baatoN meN mere dil ko churaane waale.

Kya baat hai bahut bahut bahut khoob saini ji.. badi achchi peshkash rahi.. sabhi ashaar khoob hai khaas yeh do ashaar bahut bahut pasand aaye.. hazaron dili daad..
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waah waah waah bahut khoob sir.
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sirjee behad khoobsurat..

sabhi aasahr pasand aaye..

dhero daad..happy9
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