hoth jalte hai ........

by tushar_4u_im on July 08, 2005, 05:39:44 AM
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hoth jalte hai muskurane se,.......
phir bhi shikwa nahi zamane se,......

aashq chalak jate hai aanho k paimane se,....
chipai nahi chipta mera dard chupane se,.....

kaun kerta hai pyar mujhse or mere aashiyane se,...
sochta rehta hu baithker kisi tarane me,......

jooth bol deta hu dosto k puchne per ,.......
nikal jata hu kahi door samandr ki lahro per ,.....

ghut ghut ker mar raha hu shayad zinda reh ker,.....
ya jiye ja raha hu shayad ek bhujti chingari banker,........
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2005, 12:18:40 PM »
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hoth jalte hai muskurane se,.......
phir bhi shikwa nahi zamane se,......

aashq chalak jate hai aanho k paimane se,....
chipai nahi chipta mera dard chupane se,.....

kaun kerta hai pyar mujhse or mere aashiyane se,...
sochta rehta hu baithker kisi tarane me,......

jooth bol deta hu dosto k puchne per ,.......
nikal jata hu kahi door samandr ki lahro per ,.....

ghut ghut ker mar raha hu shayad zinda reh ker,.....
ya jiye ja raha hu shayad ek bhujti chingari banker,........


bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2005, 12:21:53 PM »
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gud one tushaar.......................................... ...
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2005, 04:52:49 AM »
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hoth jalte hai muskurane se,.......
phir bhi shikwa nahi zamane se,......

aashq chalak jate hai aanho k paimane se,....
chipai nahi chipta mera dard chupane se,.....

kaun kerta hai pyar mujhse or mere aashiyane se,...
sochta rehta hu baithker kisi tarane me,......

jooth bol deta hu dosto k puchne per ,.......
nikal jata hu kahi door samandr ki lahro per ,.....

ghut ghut ker mar raha hu shayad zinda reh ker,.....
ya jiye ja raha hu shayad ek bhujti chingari banker,........



WAH TUSHAR JEE KYA BAT KAHI HAI AAPNE.......BESHAW YE SACH HAI AUR MAIN AAPSE SAHMAT HOON. MERI DUA HAI AAP APNE BHAWNAO KO, APNE DARD KO, APNE EHSAS KO AUR APNE CHAHTO KO YUN HI APNE GAZLO AUR RACHNAO MEIN SAJATE RAHEIN........... AUR DUA HAI KHUDA SE KI WO APKO JEEVAN MEIN HAR KHUSHI ATA FARMAYEIN "....AAMEEN"
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2010, 01:58:32 PM »
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very very good gazal
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rahul natthani
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2011, 12:20:42 PM »
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this gajhal was sung by Roop Kumar Rathor in a DD1 tv serial Shikwa.
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«Reply #6 on: April 27, 2011, 06:39:56 AM »
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janab tushar ji, aapki is rachna ko paRhne ka ittefaaq hua aur ye dekh kar khushi hui k aapko apne zazbaatoN ko harfoN mein dhaalne ka fun aata hai magar aap jaise aik Umda Shayar se bahr aur meter meiN apni kaawish pesh karne ki tawaqqo rahti hai. Aapka sirf pahla sher meter mein hai aur saare ashaar kharij-az-bahr hain. Ghazal ko ghazal ke format meiN barteiN to ziyadah acerangez aur sahrangez kaawish ubhar kar saamne aati hai warna ye azaad nazm aur azaad kavita kahlaigi jise sangeet mein nahin dhala ja sakta. Aaindah ghazal post karne se pahle saare parameter par ghaur karenge mujhe iska yaqeen hai. Mujh jaise talib e ilm se koi ghalati sarzad ho gayi ho to darguzar kijiyega.

(waquif ansari)

hoth jalte hai muskurane se,.......
phir bhi shikwa nahi zamane se,......

aashq chalak jate hai aanho k paimane se,....
chipai nahi chipta mera dard chupane se,.....

kaun kerta hai pyar mujhse or mere aashiyane se,...
sochta rehta hu baithker kisi tarane me,......

jooth bol deta hu dosto k puchne per ,.......
nikal jata hu kahi door samandr ki lahro per ,.....

ghut ghut ker mar raha hu shayad zinda reh ker,.....
ya jiye ja raha hu shayad ek bhujti chingari banker,........
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«Reply #7 on: December 20, 2012, 06:04:33 AM »
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 Bahoot Khoob Gazal Tushar Ji............ love9
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«Reply #8 on: December 20, 2012, 06:08:41 AM »
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Bahoot Khoob Gazal Tushar Ji............ love9
our family always used sing this gazal on DD1 channel in SHIQWA Serial. it is evergreen Gazal as well as Serial too........ love9
 
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«Reply #9 on: December 20, 2012, 06:10:02 AM »
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our family always used to sing this Ghazal on DD1 channel in SHIQWA Serial. it is evergreen Gazal as well as Serial too........ love9
 
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«Reply #10 on: October 14, 2014, 09:27:08 AM »
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DOES ANY ONE HAS THIS GHAZAL SUNG BY ROOP KUMAR RATHOR FOR TV SERIAL SHIKWA ON DD1
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