houNton pe zikkr teraa hee rawaaN rahaa,...........

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tuNdee e baad emukhalif se na ghabhra aay aqaa.b
yeh toh chaltee hai tujhe ooncha udaane ke liye,..

apne mohteram sir saini jee ke kehne par aik ghazal aa.p sabkee nazar,.....


aaNkhon men akks teraa hee nihaaN rahaa
houNton pe zikkr teraa hee rawaaN rahaa

dil men basee faqat  teree hi aarzoo
tu saath tha mere main toh jahaN rahaa

haaN bhoo.l jaao tum sab chaahaten magar
woh pyaar kaa qisaa bolo kahaN rahaa

kaaNton ki  nou.k se zakhmon ko jub siyaa
phir  umr bhar wahin baaqee nishaN rahaa

uss moud  per  judaayee thi khadee huyee,
jis jaa milan kaa manmohnaa samaaN rahaa

sajdaa kiyaa hai maine jis jagah sadaa
khaliq ka ek vo hee aastaaN rahaa,...
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«Reply #1 on: December 13, 2013, 06:59:09 PM »
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superb ek rau ke saath dher saaree daad qubool karo keep it up
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waah waah waah laaiba jee bahut bahut khoob...likhte rahein taki hamein achhi achhi kalamon ko padhne ka mauka milta rahe...
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2013, 07:09:24 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 13, 2013, 06:59:09 PM
superb ek rau ke saath dher saaree daad qubool karo keep it up

bohat bohat bohat shuqria sir aapkaa,.............
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2013, 07:14:21 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on December 13, 2013, 06:56:41 PM

tuNdee e baad emukhalif se na ghabhra aay aqaa.b
yeh toh chaltee hai tujhe ooncha udaane ke liye,..

apne mohteram sir saini jee ke kehne par aik ghazal aa.p sabkee nazar,.....


aaNkhon men akks teraa hee nihaaN rahaa
houNton pe zikkr teraa hee rawaaN rahaa

dil men basee faqat  teree hi aarzoo
tu saath tha mere main toh jahaN rahaa

haaN bhoo.l jaao tum sab chaahaten magar
woh pyaar kaa qisaa bolo kahaN rahaa

kaaNton ki  nou.k se zakhmon ko jub siyaa
phir  umr bhar wahin baaqee nishaN rahaa

uss moud  per  judaayee thi khadee huyee,
jis jaa milan kaa manmohnaa samaaN rahaa

sajdaa kiyaa hai maine jis jagah sadaa
khaliq ka ek vo hee aastaaN rahaa,...


Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Laaiba Ji...

Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawaab...


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«Reply #5 on: December 13, 2013, 07:26:56 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on December 13, 2013, 06:56:41 PM

tuNdee e baad emukhalif se na ghabhra aay aqaa.b
yeh toh chaltee hai tujhe ooncha udaane ke liye,..

apne mohteram sir saini jee ke kehne par aik ghazal aa.p sabkee nazar,.....


aaNkhon men akks teraa hee nihaaN rahaa
houNton pe zikkr teraa hee rawaaN rahaa

dil men basee faqat  teree hi aarzoo
tu saath tha mere main toh jahaN rahaa

haaN bhoo.l jaao tum sab chaahaten magar
woh pyaar kaa qisaa bolo kahaN rahaa

kaaNton ki  nou.k se zakhmon ko jub siyaa
phir  umr bhar wahin baaqee nishaN rahaa

uss moud  per  judaayee thi khadee huyee,
jis jaa milan kaa manmohnaa samaaN rahaa

sajdaa kiyaa hai maine jis jagah sadaa
khaliq ka ek vo hee aastaaN rahaa,...


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«Reply #6 on: December 13, 2013, 08:04:45 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 13, 2013, 08:36:58 PM »
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वाह.....उम्दा...बहुत ही उम्दा....

kaaNton ki  nou.k se zakhmon ko jub siyaa
phir  umr bhar wahin baaqee nishaN rahaa

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«Reply #8 on: December 13, 2013, 09:27:41 PM »
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bht khoob ji
daad daad daad
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«Reply #9 on: December 13, 2013, 09:38:35 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on December 13, 2013, 06:56:41 PM

tuNdee e baad emukhalif se na ghabhra aay aqaa.b
yeh toh chaltee hai tujhe ooncha udaane ke liye,..

apne mohteram sir saini jee ke kehne par aik ghazal aa.p sabkee nazar,.....


aaNkhon men akks teraa hee nihaaN rahaa
houNton pe zikkr teraa hee rawaaN rahaa

dil men basee faqat  teree hi aarzoo
tu saath tha mere main toh jahaN rahaa

haaN bhoo.l jaao tum sab chaahaten magar
woh pyaar kaa qisaa bolo kahaN rahaa

kaaNton ki  nou.k se zakhmon ko jub siyaa
phir  umr bhar wahin baaqee nishaN rahaa

uss moud  per  judaayee thi khadee huyee,
jis jaa milan kaa manmohnaa samaaN rahaa

sajdaa kiyaa hai maine jis jagah sadaa
khaliq ka ek vo hee aastaaN rahaa,...
Laaiba Ji aapne bahot hi achhi Ghazal likhi hai...
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«Reply #10 on: December 13, 2013, 10:48:19 PM »
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Bahut khoob , Laaiba ji . Bahut mubarakbaad is kalaam par.
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Aap sabhee kaa bohat bohat our bohat shuqria,................
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«Reply #12 on: December 14, 2013, 03:01:28 AM »
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bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai....
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As usual Laajawab hai..
Har aashar pasand aaya..
Dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #14 on: December 14, 2013, 01:46:25 PM »
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aaNkhon men akks teraa hee nihaaN rahaa
houNton pe zikkr teraa hee rawaaN rahaa

kaaNton ki  nou.k se zakhmon ko jub siyaa
phir  umr bhar wahin baaqee nishaN rahaa

sajdaa kiyaa hai maine jis jagah sadaa
khaliq ka ek vo hee aastaaN rahaa,...

waah waah laaiba jee bohut khoob
lajawab andaaz aur dard ko bayan karne ka andaaz bhi khoob raha

is ghazal ke liye Rau de raha hoon.

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