Hua Kaise..... @

by aahnaa on January 04, 2013, 02:02:32 PM
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«Reply #15 on: January 05, 2013, 11:26:21 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai... excellant Thumbs UP
suman ji .. shukrana pasandgi ka
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«Reply #16 on: January 08, 2013, 01:26:03 PM »
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aahnaa ji marhabaa marhabaa bahut hee bright future hai keep it up
behad shukrana saini saheb... yunhi hausla afzai karte rahiyega..
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«Reply #17 on: January 11, 2013, 06:10:08 AM »
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shukriya qalb ji mujhe corrct karne ka... ye word yaad hi nahin aa raha tha  aur aisa hi kuch hai ye zehan me tha ..to galti ho gai... bahot bahot shukriya ..isi tarah corrections karenge umeed karti hun
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«Reply #18 on: January 11, 2013, 06:49:32 AM »
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Hua Kaise....@


Dekhkar usko na jane ye haadsaa hua kaise
Dil pehlu se mere ek pal me judaa.. hua kaise

Umeedon ke saaye me palti rahi zindagi meri
Dil ye mera haar kar naummeed bhala.. hua kaise

Thokrein khai hain jabse jazbaaton ne apno se
Puchhti hun sabse dil ye mera sehra.. hua kaise

Hain lakhon ki bheed is jahan me magar fir bhi
Arthi  ko bheed me ik kandha na mila.. hua kaise

Apne hi jhut ki saza pai hai tumse aaj maine
Par sawal hai ke ye dil bekabu mera.. hua kaise

Badal jata hai har shakhs yahan mausam ki tarah
Fir meri baaton pe tujhe yakeen bata.. hua kaise

Gunaahon k daldal me dhansi ja rahi zindagi meri
Maasumiyat mujhme hai bachi ye bata..  hua kaise

Ab tak jo chhupaya tha gum - e - dil iss zamane se
Tujhse milkar 'aah' wo dard sab par zaya.. hua kaise…!!

Good Job Aahna, Yunhi Likhte Rahein,.
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