Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb':Ghazals

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इनकार मोहब्बत का करेगा तू कहाँ तक
आएगा कभी नाम मेरा तेरी जुबाँ तक

मिल जुल के चलो प्यार का संसार बसाएँ
तनहा न बना पाएँगे हम एक मकाँ तक

ये राह मोहब्बत की, मोहब्बत का सफ़र है
इस राह पे ले चल तू मुझे चाहे जहाँ तक

शातिर हो बड़े प्यार की शतरंज में तुम भी
देखेंगे न खाओगे भला मात कहाँ तक

कहते हो 'रक़ीब' अपना हबीब आज मुझे तुम
ये बात तो अच्छी है मगर सिर्फ़ बयाँ तक

Inkaar mohabbat ka karega too kahaaN tak
aayega kabhi naam mera teree zubaaN tak

mil jul ke chalo pyaar ka sansaar basaayeN
tanha na bana paayeNge ham ek makaaN tak

ye raah mohabbat ki mohabbat ka safar hai
is raah pe le chal too mujhe chahe jahaaN tak

shaatir ho bade pyaar ki shatranj meN tum bhi
dekheNge na khaaoge bhala maat kahaaN tak

kahte ho ‘Raqeeb’ apna habeeb aaj mujhe tum
ye baat to achchhee hai magar sirf bayaaN tak

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’


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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #1 on: November 09, 2013, 06:26:52 PM »

Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 09, 2013, 06:16:32 PM

इनकार मोहब्बत का करेगा तू कहाँ तक
आएगा कभी नाम मेरा तेरी जुबाँ तक

मिल जुल के चलो प्यार का संसार बसाएँ
तनहा न बना पाएँगे हम एक मकाँ तक

ये राह मोहब्बत की, मोहब्बत का सफ़र है
इस राह पे ले चल तू मुझे चाहे जहाँ तक

शातिर हो बड़े प्यार की शतरंज में तुम भी
देखेंगे न खाओगे भला मात कहाँ तक

कहते हो 'रक़ीब' अपना हबीब आज मुझे तुम
ये बात तो अच्छी है मगर सिर्फ़ बयाँ तक

Wwwwwaaaahhhhhhh ...... beintehaayee khoobsurat ghazal ataa farmaayee is bazm ko Raqeeb sahab apne .... dil jhoom utha padh ke ... waqayee in aashaar ka koyee raqeeb naheen Usual Smile

Dheron dheron daad qabool farmaayein !!!


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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #2 on: November 09, 2013, 06:51:59 PM »

Inkaar mohabbat ka karega too kahaaN tak
aayega kabhi naam mera teree zubaaN tak

mil jul ke chalo pyaar ka sansaar basaayeN
tanha na bana paayeNge ham ek makaaN tak

kahte ho ‘Raqeeb’ apna habeeb aaj mujhe tum
ye baat to achchhee hai magar sirf bayaaN tak

WAAH WAAH BOHUT ACHHE rAQEEB SAHAB
EK RAU TO BANTA HAI DENA
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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #3 on: November 09, 2013, 07:00:32 PM »

bahut khoob Satish Sahab...kya khoob likha hai aapne...dheron daad.. Applause


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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #4 on: November 09, 2013, 07:03:02 PM »

Quote from: sahal on November 09, 2013, 06:51:59 PM

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya....Raqeeb Lucknowi


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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #5 on: November 09, 2013, 07:39:23 PM »

वाह....वाह....बहुत खूब शुक्ला जी....बहुत खूब.....


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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #6 on: November 09, 2013, 07:43:48 PM »

Inkaar mohabbat ka karega too kahaaN tak
aayega kabhi naam mera teree zubaaN tak

mil jul ke chalo pyaar ka sansaar basaayeN
tanha na bana paayeNge ham ek makaaN tak

ye raah mohabbat ki mohabbat ka safar hai
is raah pe le chal too mujhe chahe jahaaN tak

shaatir ho bade pyaar ki shatranj meN tum bhi
dekheNge na khaaoge bhala maat kahaaN tak

kahte ho ‘Raqeeb’ apna habeeb aaj mujhe tum
ye baat to achchhee hai magar sirf bayaaN tak
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Waaaaaaah behtareen peshkash Satish ji... dil khush ho gaya padhkar.. ek se badhkar ek sher.. dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad...


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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #7 on: November 09, 2013, 07:57:09 PM »

Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on November 09, 2013, 07:00:32 PM

bahut khoob Satish Sahab...kya khoob likha hai aapne...dheron daad.. Applause

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya ....... Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' Ji.....Raqeeb Lucknowi


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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #8 on: November 09, 2013, 08:15:46 PM »

Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on November 09, 2013, 07:39:23 PM

वाह....वाह....बहुत खूब शुक्ला जी....बहुत खूब.....

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya ....... amit_prakash_meet Ji.....Raqeeb Lucknowi


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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #9 on: November 09, 2013, 08:39:58 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on November 09, 2013, 07:43:48 PM

Waaaaaaah behtareen peshkash Satish ji... dil khush ho gaya padhkar.. ek se badhkar ek sher.. dheron dheron daaaaaaaaaaaad...

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya........ aqsh Ji.....Raqeeb Lucknowi


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«Reply #10 on: November 09, 2013, 09:05:01 PM »

waah waah waah waah satish jee..

Kya kehne..

Bade hi sundar aasahr hue hain..

Laajawab..Dhero daad..


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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #11 on: November 09, 2013, 09:31:36 PM »

Waah , bahut khoob Satish ji . Bahut khubsurat ghazal se nawaza hai .
Padh kar maza aa gaya.Dheron daad hazir hai.


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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #12 on: November 09, 2013, 10:32:15 PM »

laajawaab peshkash raqeeb bhai


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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #13 on: November 10, 2013, 02:11:54 AM »

Wah Khub Kahaa Sahab Maza Aa Gaya Parhkar Clapping Smiley

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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Re: Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

«Reply #14 on: November 10, 2013, 03:22:24 AM »

Waah Waah......bahut bahut Khoob Satish jee..


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