Hum Ek Makaan Tak / हम एक मकाँ तक......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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«Reply #15 on: November 10, 2013, 01:00:39 PM »
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waah waah waah waah satish jee..

Kya kehne..

Bade hi sundar aasahr hue hain..

Laajawab..Dhero daad..happy9

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya....nashwani Ji.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #16 on: November 10, 2013, 02:29:04 PM »
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shaatir ho bade pyaar ki shatranj meN tum bhi
dekheNge na khaaoge bhala maat kahaaN tak

kahte ho ‘Raqeeb’ apna habeeb aaj mujhe tum
ye baat to achchhee hai magar sirf bayaaN tak
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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Satishji,Babut umdaa.
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«Reply #17 on: November 10, 2013, 02:36:46 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 09, 2013, 06:16:32 PM
इनकार मोहब्बत का करेगा तू कहाँ तक
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मिल जुल के चलो प्यार का संसार बसाएँ
तनहा न बना पाएँगे हम एक मकाँ तक Is khayaal par bahut bahut mubarakbaad..laajavaab
 
ये राह मोहब्बत की, मोहब्बत का सफ़र है
इस राह पे ले चल तू मुझे चाहे जहाँ तक Kya baat hai
 
शातिर हो बड़े प्यार की शतरंज में तुम भी
देखेंगे न खाओगे भला मात कहाँ तक my fav game..pyar ki shatranj..wah wah wah..shah aur maat ..sab manzoor
 
कहते हो 'रक़ीब' अपना हबीब आज मुझे तुम
ये बात तो अच्छी है मगर सिर्फ़ बयाँ तक bahut badhiya Sir

Inkaar mohabbat ka karega too kahaaN tak
aayega kabhi naam mera teree zubaaN tak

mil jul ke chalo pyaar ka sansaar basaayeN
tanha na bana paayeNge ham ek makaaN tak

ye raah mohabbat ki mohabbat ka safar hai
is raah pe le chal too mujhe chahe jahaaN tak

shaatir ho bade pyaar ki shatranj meN tum bhi
dekheNge na khaaoge bhala maat kahaaN tak

kahte ho ‘Raqeeb’ apna habeeb aaj mujhe tum
ye baat to achchhee hai magar sirf bayaaN tak

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’
Namaste Sir
mai to kahunga...der se bhale ho par dhamaakedaar ..muqammal ghazal
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«Reply #18 on: November 10, 2013, 03:31:46 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on November 09, 2013, 09:31:36 PM
Waah , bahut khoob Satish ji . Bahut khubsurat ghazal se nawaza hai .
Padh kar maza aa gaya.Dheron daad hazir hai.

Hasan Sahib,
             Aadaab !

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya.... Raqeeb
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«Reply #19 on: November 10, 2013, 04:52:51 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 09, 2013, 10:32:15 PM
laajawaab peshkash raqeeb bhai

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya...Saini Sahib...Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #20 on: November 10, 2013, 05:25:55 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on November 10, 2013, 02:11:54 AM
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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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Jawaab dene aur ghazal pasand karne ka bahut shukriya....Shihab Ji......Raqeeb Lucknowi
 
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«Reply #21 on: November 10, 2013, 05:49:56 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on November 10, 2013, 03:22:24 AM
Waah Waah......bahut bahut Khoob Satish jee..

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khwahish ji.....bahut shukriya jawab dene aur ghazal pasand karne ka.....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #22 on: November 10, 2013, 05:52:47 PM »
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Hmmm veryyy niiceeee...
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«Reply #23 on: November 11, 2013, 01:10:31 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on November 10, 2013, 02:29:04 PM
shaatir ho bade pyaar ki shatranj meN tum bhi
dekheNge na khaaoge bhala maat kahaaN tak

kahte ho ‘Raqeeb’ apna habeeb aaj mujhe tum
ye baat to achchhee hai magar sirf bayaaN tak
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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Satishji,Babut umdaa.

Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene ka bahut shukriya...Sudhir Ashq Ji......Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #24 on: November 11, 2013, 04:15:40 PM »
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bahut umda bahut khoob sir ji.. waah waah Usual Smile

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«Reply #25 on: November 11, 2013, 07:32:54 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on November 10, 2013, 02:36:46 PM
Namaste Sir
mai to kahunga...der se bhale ho par dhamaakedaar ..muqammal ghazal
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Mukesh Ji,

Bahut shukriya...ghazal pasand karne aur

jawab dene ke liye....

Raqeeb
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«Reply #26 on: November 11, 2013, 07:57:12 PM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on November 10, 2013, 05:52:47 PM
Hmmm veryyy niiceeee...
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Ghazal pasand karne aur jawab dene ka bahut shukriya...Saman Firdaus Ji......Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #27 on: November 11, 2013, 09:09:11 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on November 11, 2013, 04:15:40 PM
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Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya Mohammad Touhid Sahib......Raqeeb Lucknowi
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«Reply #28 on: November 22, 2013, 03:32:53 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 09, 2013, 06:16:32 PM
इनकार मोहब्बत का करेगा तू कहाँ तक
आएगा कभी नाम मेरा तेरी जुबाँ तक

मिल जुल के चलो प्यार का संसार बसाएँ
तनहा न बना पाएँगे हम एक मकाँ तक
 
ये राह मोहब्बत की, मोहब्बत का सफ़र है
इस राह पे ले चल तू मुझे चाहे जहाँ तक
 
शातिर हो बड़े प्यार की शतरंज में तुम भी
देखेंगे न खाओगे भला मात कहाँ तक
 
कहते हो 'रक़ीब' अपना हबीब आज मुझे तुम
ये बात तो अच्छी है मगर सिर्फ़ बयाँ तक

Inkaar mohabbat ka karega too kahaaN tak
aayega kabhi naam mera teree zubaaN tak
iqraar karwaaye ga mujh se kaise.
 apna naam bulwaaye ga mujh se kaise. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
mil jul ke chalo pyaar ka sansaar basaayeN
tanha na bana paayeNge ham ek makaaN tak
main multistorey building ka proposal le kar aa rahi hoo.n tumhaare paas .construction ka business bahut profitable hai aaj globally icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
ye raah mohabbat ki mohabbat ka safar hai
is raah pe le chal too mujhe chahe jahaaN tak
main to ufaq tak le jaana chahti hoon icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
shaatir ho bade pyaar ki shatranj meN tum bhi
dekheNge na khaaoge bhala maat kahaaN tak
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))itni check mate di hai tumhein phir bhi haar nahin maan rahe ho. sharm aa rahi hai ladki se haar maan ne mein....arrye maan bhi jaao meri khushi ke liye ...apni HAAAAAAAAR
kahte ho ‘Raqeeb’ apna habeeb aaj mujhe tum
ye baat to achchhee hai magar sirf bayaaN tak
nahin ji, sachi dil se kahti hoon tum bhale hi raqeeb ho per tumhaari ghazlein mujhe habeeb hain icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’


ek pyaari ghazal satish sahab icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #29 on: November 27, 2013, 04:55:30 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 09, 2013, 06:16:32 PM
इनकार मोहब्बत का करेगा तू कहाँ तक
आएगा कभी नाम मेरा तेरी जुबाँ तक
 
मिल जुल के चलो प्यार का संसार बसाएँ
तनहा न बना पाएँगे हम एक मकाँ तक
 
ये राह मोहब्बत की, मोहब्बत का सफ़र है
इस राह पे ले चल तू मुझे चाहे जहाँ तक
 
शातिर हो बड़े प्यार की शतरंज में तुम भी
देखेंगे न खाओगे भला मात कहाँ तक
 
कहते हो 'रक़ीब' अपना हबीब आज मुझे तुम
ये बात तो अच्छी है मगर सिर्फ़ बयाँ तक

Inkaar mohabbat ka karega too kahaaN tak
aayega kabhi naam mera teree zubaaN tak

mil jul ke chalo pyaar ka sansaar basaayeN
tanha na bana paayeNge ham ek makaaN tak

ye raah mohabbat ki mohabbat ka safar hai
is raah pe le chal too mujhe chahe jahaaN tak

shaatir ho bade pyaar ki shatranj meN tum bhi
dekheNge na khaaoge bhala maat kahaaN tak

kahte ho ‘Raqeeb’ apna habeeb aaj mujhe tum
ye baat to achchhee hai magar sirf bayaaN tak

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’

Satish Shukla sahab! buhat umda ghazal kahi aap ne.. maazrat chahtay hen k hamari nazar say chook gai or aaj parhi hum ne... mashallah buhat he khoobsoorat kalaam say nawaza aap ne..


kya kya na mazaameeN thay dil-e-zaar men teray
honay na diya dostoN ko tu ne gumaaN tak...
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