Hum Nazar Aayenge.....!!!

by Talat on August 24, 2009, 05:13:49 PM
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«Reply #1 on: August 24, 2009, 05:29:39 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!!

Isg Ka Khumaar Aur Judai ke Dard!!Dono Hi Ehsaas nazar Aate Hai Iss Ghazal Mein!!

Bahut Hi Gehre Aur Anmol Jazbaat Hai Yeh!! bahut Ache..

Bahut Bahut Khooooob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 24, 2009, 05:42:21 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
bahoot hi khoobsoorati se buna hai aapne shabdon ko daad kabool karen talat
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«Reply #3 on: August 24, 2009, 08:29:52 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Celmira ji,beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 25, 2009, 06:32:50 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 24, 2009, 05:13:49 PM
KYA BAAT HAI CELMIRA JI.......

ZAMAANE KE SITAM SEY AGAR AAP GABRA JAAOGE,
HUM TOH DAR KE MAR JAAYENGE.

AGAR AAP YUN HI HIMMAT HAARONGE,
TOH HUM KIDAR JAAYENGE.

KISI WAJAH SE TUM DOOR HO HUMSEY,
YEH KABHI NA SOCHNA,HUM TUMHE CHOD JAAYENGE.

TUJHKO HUM APNE DIL MEIN BASSA RAKHA HAI SANAM,
WADA HAI AAKHRI DUM TAK SAATH NIBAAYENGE.

KHUD ROTE HO MERE BEGAIR,AUR HUM SE KAHETE HO KABHI NA RONA JAANAM,
KYA KAREN IMTEEYAN SE GUJAR RAHE HAIN,YAKIN HAI HUM JEET KAR HI AAYENGE.

JO TAMANAA HAI JEENE KI "TALAT"
HAR HAAL MEIN TERE LIYE JEEYE JAAYENGE.
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«Reply #5 on: August 25, 2009, 07:04:32 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Cara ji aap bhi kamaal ke likhte ho. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2009, 07:26:09 AM »
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Beautifully written Talat As usual. its always a pleasure to read you... Applause
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«Reply #7 on: August 25, 2009, 10:19:33 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on August 24, 2009, 05:29:39 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!!

Isg Ka Khumaar Aur Judai ke Dard!!Dono Hi Ehsaas nazar Aate Hai Iss Ghazal Mein!!

Bahut Hi Gehre Aur Anmol Jazbaat Hai Yeh!! bahut Ache..

Bahut Bahut Khooooob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley



Thanks so much Khwaish Dost.... Jo log mujhe jaante hain wo iss ghazal main chupe dard aur ishq dono ko achchi tarah samajh sakte hain, aur isiliye aapne ise itni gehraayi se mehsoos kiya ....Thanks so much dost, sab se pehle aapka comment dekh ke bohot khushui hui  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2009, 10:26:48 AM »
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Tallu,

Kya jhakaas ghazal pesh ki hai Applause Applause Applause

Keep going Thumbs UP Usual Smile

Ghazal ke title aur ending ko dekhte hue yeh pic yahan lagana chahoonga....to reflect the mood of the poetess Usual Smile

Dekhen Jo Aaina Wo, Unhe Hum Nazar Aayenge Winking tongue3
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2009, 10:27:57 AM »
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Waah waah waah Kya KHoob, Adbhud, Nayaab Laa Jawaab, behtareen Peshkash hai Aapki,.

Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2009, 10:28:21 AM »
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bahut achche di.........dard aur ishq ko sahi se taraash kar aapne jo yeh ghazal likhi hai badi khoobsurat hai

khaas kar yeh line bahut pyaari lagi

muskura denge jab ashq aanbkhon main jhilmilayenge
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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2009, 11:08:16 AM »
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Bahut bahut khuuuuuuuub Talat ji..........hamesha ki tarah behtrin , lajwaab
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«Reply #12 on: August 25, 2009, 11:24:39 AM »
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Quote from: cara on August 25, 2009, 06:32:50 AM
KYA BAAT HAI CELMIRA JI.......

ZAMAANE KE SITAM SEY AGAR AAP GABRA JAAOGE,
HUM TOH DAR KE MAR JAAYENGE.

AGAR AAP YUN HI HIMMAT HAARONGE,
TOH HUM KIDAR JAAYENGE.

KISI WAJAH SE TUM DOOR HO HUMSEY,
YEH KABHI NA SOCHNA,HUM TUMHE CHOD JAAYENGE.

TUJHKO HUM APNE DIL MEIN BASSA RAKHA HAI SANAM,
WADA HAI AAKHRI DUM TAK SAATH NIBAAYENGE.

KHUD ROTE HO MERE BEGAIR,AUR HUM SE KAHETE HO KABHI NA RONA JAANAM,
KYA KAREN IMTEEYAN SE GUJAR RAHE HAIN,YAKIN HAI HUM JEET KAR HI AAYENGE.

JO TAMANAA HAI JEENE KI "TALAT"
HAR HAAL MEIN TERE LIYE JEEYE JAAYENGE.

aapne bhi bhaut achha likha cara ji
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«Reply #13 on: August 25, 2009, 03:24:39 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 24, 2009, 05:13:49 PM
Bahut achchhey Celmira!
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«Reply #14 on: August 25, 2009, 03:32:40 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 24, 2009, 05:13:49 PM

Wonderful creation Talat sis  Applause Applause
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