Hum Nazar Aayenge.....!!!

by Talat on August 24, 2009, 05:13:49 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 25, 2009, 06:00:58 PM »
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Aap ne bohot achha likha celmira ji..  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #16 on: August 25, 2009, 06:02:43 PM »
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Bohot khoob cara ji, achha likhte hain aap.
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«Reply #17 on: August 25, 2009, 09:05:30 PM »
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hats off to you Celmira ji
another feather in the cap Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: August 25, 2009, 09:29:16 PM »
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Bahut hi umda peshkash hai Celmira Ji
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«Reply #19 on: August 26, 2009, 12:01:23 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on August 24, 2009, 05:13:49 PM

wahi puraani si chahate.n hain
wahi puraani rifaaqate.n hain
lakeer paani pe khich gayi ho
abhi to aisa hua nahi hai

kya kehne hain talt aapke kalaam ke, har baar ki tarahan mashaallah se har baar kuch alag aur utna hi khoobsurat ye jo qita maine aapki nazr kya hai isko aap isi nazr se daikhen ki aap mashallah chahen kisi mouzu pe bhi likhen bhut hi khoob likhti hain daad hazir hai qubool karen god bless u
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«Reply #20 on: August 27, 2009, 01:08:10 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on August 24, 2009, 05:42:21 PM
Applause Applause Applause
bahoot hi khoobsoorati se buna hai aapne shabdon ko daad kabool karen talat

Bohot bohot shukriya Sanjeev Ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: August 27, 2009, 01:08:45 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 24, 2009, 08:29:52 PM
Wah wah bahut khoob Celmira ji,beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks so much Madhu Ji
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«Reply #22 on: August 27, 2009, 01:12:01 PM »
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Quote from: cara on August 25, 2009, 06:32:50 AM
KYA BAAT HAI CELMIRA JI.......

ZAMAANE KE SITAM SEY AGAR AAP GABRA JAAOGE,
HUM TOH DAR KE MAR JAAYENGE.

AGAR AAP YUN HI HIMMAT HAARONGE,
TOH HUM KIDAR JAAYENGE.

KISI WAJAH SE TUM DOOR HO HUMSEY,
YEH KABHI NA SOCHNA,HUM TUMHE CHOD JAAYENGE.

TUJHKO HUM APNE DIL MEIN BASSA RAKHA HAI SANAM,
WADA HAI AAKHRI DUM TAK SAATH NIBAAYENGE.

KHUD ROTE HO MERE BEGAIR,AUR HUM SE KAHETE HO KABHI NA RONA JAANAM,
KYA KAREN IMTEEYAN SE GUJAR RAHE HAIN,YAKIN HAI HUM JEET KAR HI AAYENGE.

JO TAMANAA HAI JEENE KI "TALAT"
HAR HAAL MEIN TERE LIYE JEEYE JAAYENGE.


Bohot Khoob Cara Ji  icon_thumleft

Thanks a lot
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«Reply #23 on: August 27, 2009, 01:15:32 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on August 25, 2009, 07:26:09 AM
Beautifully written Talat As usual. its always a pleasure to read you... Applause

Thanks so much Sweetie for always reading and appreciating Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: August 27, 2009, 01:17:23 PM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on August 25, 2009, 10:26:48 AM
Tallu,

Kya jhakaas ghazal pesh ki hai Applause Applause Applause

Keep going Thumbs UP Usual Smile

Ghazal ke title aur ending ko dekhte hue yeh pic yahan lagana chahoonga....to reflect the mood of the poetess Usual Smile

Dekhen Jo Aaina Wo, Unhe Hum Nazar Aayenge Winking tongue3



Thanks so much...Always so good to see your comments  NaNaNa NaNaNa

.....and thanks for posting this lovely pic in accordance with the title and the last sher  icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #25 on: August 27, 2009, 01:31:23 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on August 25, 2009, 10:27:57 AM
Waah waah waah Kya KHoob, Adbhud, Nayaab Laa Jawaab, behtareen Peshkash hai Aapki,.

Bohat Achche,.

Thanks so much Azeem
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«Reply #26 on: August 27, 2009, 01:37:47 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on August 25, 2009, 10:28:21 AM
bahut achche di.........dard aur ishq ko sahi se taraash kar aapne jo yeh ghazal likhi hai badi khoobsurat hai

khaas kar yeh line bahut pyaari lagi

muskura denge jab ashq aanbkhon main jhilmilayenge

Thanks so much dear brother for always reading and appreciating Usual Smile
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«Reply #27 on: August 27, 2009, 01:39:30 PM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on August 25, 2009, 11:08:16 AM
Bahut bahut khuuuuuuuub Talat ji..........hamesha ki tarah behtrin , lajwaab
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks so much Pooja Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: August 27, 2009, 01:40:11 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on August 25, 2009, 03:24:39 PM
Bahut achchhey Celmira!
            - abd bundeli

Bohot shukriya Babu Ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #29 on: August 27, 2009, 01:40:45 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 25, 2009, 03:32:40 PM
Wonderful creation Talat sis  Applause Applause

Thanks so much Roja dear
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