humdum

by poonam singh on October 22, 2010, 04:14:40 AM
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duayein mujhse milne ki khuda se maangta hai wo,
mere hi dyaan me bekal raat bhar jaagta hai wo.

mere har shikve ko masoomiyat se jhel leta hai,
meri har khami ko sachmucch pehchanta hai wo.

khushi ho ya ki gam,kabhi kuch kehna nahi padta,
meri khamoshi ke maayene behtar janta hai wo.

doobne lagti hu jab bhi mushkilo ke samandar me,
bhwar me hath dekar ke khushi se thamta hai wo.
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«Reply #1 on: October 22, 2010, 05:29:22 AM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhh.....behtareen peshkash aapki taraf se poonam ji..
yo india me aapka hardik swagat hai aur aate hi aapne iss khubsurat gazal se dil pe ek chhap chhod di....bht khub ji....

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«Reply #2 on: October 22, 2010, 07:41:56 AM »
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Khoobsurat kavita hai aapki Poonam-di...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Teri har ada ko bakhoobee jaanta hai wo
Tujhe khudse bhee jayada chahta hai wo

Lagta hai tujh per dil se aashna hai wo
Bada he wafaadar tera humdum hai wo



duayein mujhse milne ki khuda se maangta hai wo,
mere hi dyaan me bekal raat bhar jaagta hai wo.

mere har shikve ko masoomiyat se jhel leta hai,
meri har khami ko sachmucch pehchanta hai wo.

khushi ho ya ki gam,kabhi kuch kehna nahi padta,
meri khamoshi ke maayene behtar janta hai wo.

doobne lagti hu jab bhi mushkilo ke samandar me,
bhwar me hath dekar ke khushi se thamta hai wo.

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«Reply #3 on: October 22, 2010, 08:04:50 AM »
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bahut badhiya he poonam jiiii...mast laga or maja bhi aaya~
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«Reply #4 on: October 22, 2010, 09:45:27 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Poonam ji...!!!

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