Humne toh chalaaye thye, sab teer nishaane pe

by livingbytheday on July 29, 2012, 06:32:05 AM
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Humne toh chalaaye thye, sab teer nishaane pe
Kuch chook gaye phir bhi, manzil tak jaane mein
Qismet mein musaaphir ke, nahi kal ki subah shayad
Dekh kaanp rahi kashti, saahil tak jaane mein

Shaayar ke nasihat mein, hain baat badi gehri
Bhagwaan toh hain rastey, mandir tak jaane mein

Iss qaid se azaadi, badi der se aayi hain
Mere paon padenge kum, subah tak jaane mein

Hum jaan ke bhi sab kuch, kuch maan nahi paatey
Bas soch ki duuri hain, maksad tak jaane mein

Na jaane ki ub shehron, mein kaise tajurbey hain
Koi khauf nahi khata, jungle tak jaane mein

Magroor  badal deta, hain wazood  hi jhatke se
Bade khwaab sajata hain dariyaa, saagar tak jaane mein

Aagosh mein hi aandhi ke, "Deepak" ko jalayenge
Koi rok nahi sakta humko apni, hasti tak jaane mein
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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2012, 07:13:35 AM »
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bahot kamaal ki ghazal hai bhai
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«Reply #2 on: July 29, 2012, 08:15:46 AM »
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Ahsaas aour khayalat ka ek khoobsurat milan dekhne ko mila aapkee gazal me . Dil khush ho gaya.
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«Reply #3 on: July 29, 2012, 08:29:19 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: July 29, 2012, 09:17:26 AM »
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kya baat hai  ji kya gazal kahi hai aapne bahut hi umda shabd aur lajawab tarike se likha aapne........ dhero daad aur mubarakbaad.....
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«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2012, 10:57:02 AM »
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bahut achha likha hai, dhero dad
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«Reply #6 on: July 29, 2012, 04:18:47 PM »
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Quote from: nirala on July 29, 2012, 07:13:35 AM
bahot kamaal ki ghazal hai bhai


shukriyaa bhai ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2012, 02:20:35 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 29, 2012, 08:29:19 AM
bahut khoob

thank you s
Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on July 29, 2012, 08:15:46 AM
Ahsaas aour khayalat ka ek khoobsurat milan dekhne ko mila aapkee gazal me . Dil khush ho gaya.

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thank you sir
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«Reply #8 on: July 31, 2012, 03:38:27 PM »
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BEAUTIFUL
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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2012, 03:41:34 PM »
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 Applause Applause

wah wah
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«Reply #10 on: July 31, 2012, 04:48:57 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on July 29, 2012, 10:57:02 AM
bahut achha likha hai, dhero dad

THANK YOU
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2012, 06:34:29 PM »
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Quote from: BANSI DHAMEJA on July 31, 2012, 03:38:27 PM
BEAUTIFUL

thank you
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«Reply #12 on: August 04, 2012, 03:42:24 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on July 31, 2012, 03:41:34 PM
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wah wah

thank you suman ji
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