Humsafar koi nahi (by vb)

by vb on November 16, 2012, 06:08:55 AM
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Hum-safar koi nahi, raah-nasheen koi nahi
Door tak dasht-e-mohabbat men kahin koi nahi

Haal kya dil ka bataain, wo gayay hen jub say
Ake veeraan sa makaan hay, makeen koi nahi

Us ko dekha nahi men ne pa yaqeen hay mujh ko
Meri mehboob sa duniya men haseen koi nahi

Chonk utheta hoon k ye maut ki dastak ho ge
Koi darwaazay pay aaya hay! Nahi koi nahi



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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2012, 06:14:18 AM »
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Bahot khubsurat ghazal se nawaza hai vb ji. Aapke likhne ka andaaz bada munfarid hai. Aapke kalaam ka interzar rahta hai. Ye sher hasile ghazal hai:

Us ko dekha nahi men ne pa yaqeen hay mujh ko
Meri mehboob sa duniya men haseen koi nahi

Hazaron daad pesh karta hun.
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2012, 06:30:58 AM »
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Bahut khubsurat ghazal hai vb saheb . Dheron daad , khaas taur se dil se kahe hue 3rd sher ke liye . Khuda aap ke qalam mein rawaani banaaye rakkhe.HASAN
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«Reply #5 on: November 16, 2012, 01:07:45 PM »
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Hum-safar koi nahi, raah-nasheen koi nahi
Door tak dasht-e-mohabbat men kahin koi nahi

Haal kya dil ka bataain, wo gayay hen jub say
Ake veeraan sa makaan hay, makeen koi nahi

Us ko dekha nahi men ne pa yaqeen hay mujh ko
Meri mehboob sa duniya men haseen koi nahi

Chonk utheta hoon k ye maut ki dastak ho ge
Koi darwaazay pay aaya hay! Nahi koi nahi



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«Reply #7 on: November 18, 2012, 11:22:41 AM »
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Hum-safar koi nahi, raah-nasheen koi nahi
Door tak dasht-e-mohabbat men kahin koi nahi

Haal kya dil ka bataain, wo gayay hen jub say
Ake veeraan sa makaan hay, makeen koi nahi

Us ko dekha nahi men ne pa yaqeen hay mujh ko
Meri mehboob sa duniya men haseen koi nahi

Chonk utheta hoon k ye maut ki dastak ho ge
Koi darwaazay pay aaya hay! Nahi koi nahi



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