Humse khafa hai.................................Aqsh

by aqsh on January 30, 2013, 11:40:11 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 30, 2013, 01:39:10 PM »
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waah bohat hi khoob,.........bohat c daad,.........
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«Reply #16 on: January 30, 2013, 01:40:09 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rishi ji.....!!!

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 30, 2013, 01:25:55 PM
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«Reply #17 on: January 30, 2013, 01:40:38 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Rishi ji.....!!!

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 30, 2013, 01:27:02 PM
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«Reply #18 on: January 30, 2013, 01:45:49 PM »
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boht khub aQsh ji boht umda
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«Reply #19 on: January 30, 2013, 02:07:00 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 30, 2013, 01:19:52 PM
bahut bahut shukriyaa Aqsh ji, pasand karne aur ye khoobsurat sa jawaab likhne ke liye...!!!

aaj bhi hum zindagi ke us mod pe akele khade hain
jahaan tumne kahaa thaa, thaharnaa, hum aayenge

lamhe, din, mahine, saal guzar gaye, hum wahin hain
magar ab bhi hai yakeen, ki ye din badal jaayenge

aetbaar tumhaari us baat pe nahi, bas tum pe hai humein
jaante hain hum, ki wo din khushi ke laut aayenge....


Thank you hriday jee. but meri kalam aap ke jaise chalti nahi. It was a fantastic reply
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«Reply #20 on: January 30, 2013, 02:07:33 PM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on January 30, 2013, 01:27:02 PM
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thnx rishi jee
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«Reply #21 on: January 30, 2013, 02:08:52 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 30, 2013, 01:30:58 PM
just EXCELLENT bahut bahut mubarak
thank you sooooo much saini sir
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«Reply #22 on: January 30, 2013, 02:09:25 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on January 30, 2013, 01:39:10 PM
waah bohat hi khoob,.........bohat c daad,.........
thank you laibaa jee
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«Reply #23 on: January 30, 2013, 02:10:07 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on January 30, 2013, 01:45:49 PM
boht khub aQsh ji boht umda
thnx sahill jee
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«Reply #24 on: January 30, 2013, 02:13:44 PM »
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thank u sooo much Aqsh ji....!!!

Quote from: aqsh on January 30, 2013, 02:07:00 PM
Thank you hriday jee. but meri kalam aap ke jaise chalti nahi. It was a fantastic reply
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«Reply #25 on: January 30, 2013, 02:16:42 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on January 30, 2013, 02:13:44 PM
thank u sooo much Aqsh ji....!!!

Ur welcome hriday jee
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«Reply #26 on: January 30, 2013, 03:55:07 PM »
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bahut khoob aqsh ji...
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«Reply #27 on: January 30, 2013, 04:21:42 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 30, 2013, 11:40:11 AM
Aaj phir jane kyuN, woh humse khafa hai
Kaash keh jaate dil ki, jo bhi khata hai

Haal se mere, woh bhi toh bakhabar hai
Aankho meN unki kyoN, kuch mujhko dikha hai

Khel dil ka, humko aata toh nahi hai
Aaj chahat ban baiti, meri saza hai

Hum dua karte kaise, unki khushi ki
Kah diya gusse meiN, mujhko bewafa hai

Zindagi bhikhri meri, us raah par hai
"Aqsh" ki chahat ab uska hausla hai

wah wah superb creation dear aqsh. der sara daad
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«Reply #28 on: January 30, 2013, 05:21:41 PM »
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so nice g bhut bhut khub
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«Reply #29 on: January 30, 2013, 05:37:14 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 30, 2013, 11:40:11 AM
Aaj phir jane kyuN, woh humse khafa hai
Kaash keh jaate dil ki, jo bhi khata hai

Haal se mere, woh bhi toh bakhabar hai
Aankho meN unki kyoN, kuch mujhko dikha hai

Khel dil ka, humko aata toh nahi hai
Aaj chahat ban baiti, meri saza hai

Hum dua karte kaise, unki khushi ki
Kah diya gusse meiN, mujhko bewafa hai

Zindagi bhikhri meri, us raah par hai
"Aqsh" ki chahat ab uska hausla hai

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