HUSN KI MALKA....////.................................................////....IFTAKHAR

by Iftakhar Ahmad on May 03, 2013, 06:43:57 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 05, 2013, 03:47:18 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 03, 2013, 06:43:57 AM
Sabhi membaraan aur seniors ko mera aadaab. Abhi kuch din pehle Taish saheb aur Parwaaz saheb ke saath bait-baazi meiN maine ek sher likha tha, ab maine uss pe poori ghazal tayyar ki hai, pesh hai aapki khidmat meiN. Wo she’r ghazal meiN matle ka she’r hai.


Hai tujh sa kaun  dunya   meiN  aye meri husn ki malka
Tere lab jaam  jaise  haiN  ye  ab  chalka  ke tab chalka

Ye mausam bhi  hua  rangeeN  ghataaoN  ki rida dekho
Chalo ab lutf  lete  haiN  bahaaroN  meiN  haseeN pal ka

Hua madhosh maiN pee  ke  kahiN  ab  hosh na mujhko
Teri aaNkhoN meiN aye jaanam nasha hai ayk botal ka

Zara  ab  paas  to   aao   k   baaNhoN   meiN  sama  jaao
Mujhe  muddat  se   tha   aye  yaar  intezaar  iss  pal ka

Machi   hai    bekali   dil   meiN    ye  ‘Iftakhar’  kaisi  hai
Zara  ab  thaam   le   dil   ko   k   ho   jaae   ye  dil  halka

Wah wah wonderful ghazal Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #16 on: May 06, 2013, 04:58:20 PM »
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bahut khoob Iftakhar ji, waah waah
ghanshamdas ahuja
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«Reply #17 on: May 06, 2013, 08:52:22 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on May 03, 2013, 01:29:08 PM
waah waah waah...bahut khoob...
Shukriya Musahib Jee.
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«Reply #18 on: May 06, 2013, 10:45:33 PM »
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bohat achi ghazal ,...........bohat c daad,.........
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«Reply #19 on: May 06, 2013, 11:16:55 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on May 03, 2013, 03:43:42 PM
Bahut khoob iftakhar ji. badi achchi ghazal pesh ki hai aapne. padhkar dil khush hua. dheron daad...
Shukriya Aqsh Jee.
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«Reply #20 on: May 07, 2013, 08:59:05 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 03, 2013, 05:11:55 PM
Ifteqaar Sahaab Aadaab... !


WaaH janab waaH kia kahne behad khoobsurat aur umda gair murdaf gazal kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Bade hi khoobsurat ashaar rahe janab... Kafi roomani khayaalat hai aapke bhi... Usual Smile

Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Parwaaz saheb bahut bahut shukriya hausla afzaai ka.
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«Reply #21 on: May 07, 2013, 09:02:07 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 03, 2013, 06:43:57 AM
Sabhi membaraan aur seniors ko mera aadaab. Abhi kuch din pehle Taish saheb aur Parwaaz saheb ke saath bait-baazi meiN maine ek sher likha tha, ab maine uss pe poori ghazal tayyar ki hai, pesh hai aapki khidmat meiN. Wo she’r ghazal meiN matle ka she’r hai.


Hai tujh sa kaun  dunya   meiN  aye meri husn ki malka
Tere lab jaam  jaise  haiN  ye  ab  chalka  ke tab chalka

Ye mausam bhi  hua  rangeeN  ghataaoN  ki rida dekho
Chalo ab lutf  lete  haiN  bahaaroN  meiN  haseeN pal ka

Hua madhosh maiN pee  ke  kahiN  ab  hosh na mujhko
Teri aaNkhoN meiN aye jaanam nasha hai ayk botal ka

Zara  ab  paas  to   aao   k   baaNhoN   meiN  sama  jaao
Mujhe  muddat  se   tha   aye  yaar  intezaar  iss  pal ka

Machi   hai    bekali   dil   meiN    ye  ‘Iftakhar’  kaisi  hai
Zara  ab  thaam   le   dil   ko   k   ho   jaae   ye  dil  halka




wah wah wah bahut khoob iftakhar.........!
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«Reply #22 on: May 07, 2013, 09:05:20 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on May 03, 2013, 05:17:18 PM
ab chalka ke tab chalk a...pehla sher to kamaal h bus...
dheron daad aur mubarakbaad kubul karen
Shukriya Subhash jee hausla afzaai aur sath dene ka.
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«Reply #23 on: May 08, 2013, 12:10:58 AM »
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Quote from: Shireen Hakani on May 03, 2013, 06:06:06 PM
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Shukriya Shireen Jee.
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«Reply #24 on: May 08, 2013, 01:27:59 AM »
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Iftakhar  jee ,  bahut  hi   achi  ghazal   likhi   hai  apne ... Dheron   daad ......
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«Reply #25 on: May 08, 2013, 01:46:55 AM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on May 03, 2013, 09:09:26 PM
good one,sir
Shukriya MB jee.
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«Reply #26 on: May 08, 2013, 04:20:30 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on May 04, 2013, 10:11:19 AM
Saaheb ye sahi hai, ab aap bait-baazi se bhi idea churaa rahe haiN... tongue3 waise chaliye ahcha hai, kisi ko to bait-baazi me aisa sher mila ghazal banaane ko...

Doosra gair-muradaf ghazaloN ka apna ek alag maza hota hai aur usme bhi aapne qaafiya alag sa rakha hai, ek bahut hi umdaa kosish saaheb, meri dili daad qubool farmaayeN... Umeed karta huN ki aage bhi aapki kalamkaari yuNhi dekhne ko milti rahegi hume...
Bhushan jee, yahaaN churaane ka koi concept nahiN hai, mujhe to "Chori" lafz se hi sakht nafrat hai. Maine bait-baazi ke dauraan ye she'r likhi aur uss par poori ghazal bana di, bas.

Khayr bahut bahut shukriya padhne aur hausla afzaai karne ka.
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«Reply #27 on: May 08, 2013, 04:21:39 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 08, 2013, 04:20:30 AM
Bhushan jee, yahaaN churaane ka koi concept nahiN hai, mujhe to "Chori" lafz se hi sakht nafrat hai. Maine bait-baazi ke dauraan ye she'r likha aur uss par poori ghazal bana di, bas.

Khayr bahut bahut shukriya padhne aur hausla afzaai karne ka.
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«Reply #28 on: May 08, 2013, 10:43:58 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on May 04, 2013, 10:58:23 AM
bahut khoob
Shukriya Nandbahu Jee.
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«Reply #29 on: May 09, 2013, 02:13:38 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 04, 2013, 02:13:37 PM
waah iftakhar saheb.khubsurat ghazal kahi hai.aur matlaa waqai bahut khubsurat hai . main aajkal out of station hoon , isi liye baitbazi ke dauraan matle ka lutf na le saka .bahut mubarakbaad.
Hasan saheb, tah-e-dil se shukriya hausla afzaai ka.
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