Ibadatgaah

by @kaash on June 27, 2009, 04:22:31 PM
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Likhte hain khwaab pe kalam se sajda kia karenge,
markar bhi  hakeekat me magar  ibadatgaah bana denge               
Tavajjo taajjub ko dia nahi jata,
hum rakeebon ko saare dil se dua denge,                       
Jo ghazal hi humse mukhtalif ho munsif ban baithi,
kalam ki adalat me kalaam se pairwi kia karenge               
Unmaan kabhi to hoga jahan me apnepan ka,
aakhiri saanson tak parayepan ki kitaab na chhuyenge
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«Reply #1 on: June 27, 2009, 04:46:27 PM »
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bahoot achche kaash ji
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2009, 04:48:36 PM »
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Bahut Acche Kaash Mere Bhai.. Lajawab Alfaazon ke sath Behtreen Soch ke sath Likhi Yeh Rachna hai aapki.. Daad Kubool karen.. Bahut bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2009, 06:57:14 PM »
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Beautiful gazal Kaash ji,bahut acha likha aapne. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: June 28, 2009, 02:40:36 AM »
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(PLS MOVE MY THIS POEM TO GHAZALS FORUM AS BY MISTAKE IT'S POSTED IN THIS FORUM)         Likhte hain khwaab pe kalam se sajda kia karenge,
markar bhi  hakeekat me magar  ibadatgaah bana denge              
Tavajjo taajjub ko dia nahi jata,
hum rakeebon ko saare dil se dua denge,                       
Jo ghazal hi humse mukhtalif ho munsif ban baithi,
kalam ki adalat me kalaam se pairwi kia karenge               
Imkaan kabhi to hoga jahan me apnepan ka,
aakhiri saanson tak parayepan ki kitaab na chhuyenge

GUD WORK KAASH JE..
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2009, 08:37:12 AM »
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Nice Job Kaash Ji.
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«Reply #6 on: June 28, 2009, 09:28:01 AM »
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Bahoot bahoot Khoob Kaash Ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2009, 11:37:31 AM »
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Likhte hain khwaab pe kalam se sajda kia karenge,
markar bhi  hakeekat me magar  ibadatgaah bana denge   
            
Tavajjo taajjub ko dia nahi jata,
hum rakeebon ko saare dil se dua denge, 
                      
Jo ghazal hi humse mukhtalif ho munsif ban baithi,
kalam ki adalat me kalaam se pairwi kia karenge 
             
Imkaan kabhi to hoga jahan me apnepan ka,
aakhiri saanson tak parayepan ki kitaab na chhuyenge

Bohot Khoob Kaash Ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2009, 08:51:53 AM »
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bhut khoob kaash
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«Reply #9 on: July 05, 2009, 12:54:25 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Kaashji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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