Ik Khamosh ishare pe baar baar paltata hun mein......*Usha Rajesh

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इक ख़ामोश इशारे पे बार-बार पलटता हूँ मैं
रोज पैदा होता औ’ सलीब पे लटकता हूँ मैं

ये रातों की नीदें, कहाँ नसीबों में मेरे
यूँ ही अंधेरों में पलकें झपकता हूँ मैं

महज धोखा हैं ये मुस्कुराती निगाहें    
तन्हाई में सावन सा बरसता हूँ मैं

हमदर्दी जता के दोस्त, मेरे दुश्मन न बनो
अंदर ही अंदर और भी सुलगता हूँ मैं

न हँसी, न खुशियाँ, न जिंदगी अपनी
दूसरों के दर्द से दुखी हो बिलखता हूँ मैं
 
सूखी मेरे सपनों की खेती, तलाश में समंदर की
खयालों के रेगिस्तान में तन्हा भटकता हूँ मैं


                                   ------------Usha Rajesh
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2011, 05:22:10 PM »
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 Applause
 Beautiful !!!
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2011, 06:18:24 PM »
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usha rajesh ji,


Good....keep it up.

Dheron daad aur hazaaron
shubhkaamnaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #3 on: October 29, 2011, 06:43:41 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki Usha Ji
Bas yun hi likhte rahiye
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«Reply #4 on: October 29, 2011, 06:48:44 PM »
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Usha Jee Aadaab!

Aapki lekhan Shaily aur vichardharna behad khoob hai...
Iske liye aapko dilse daad O mubarakbad .. Usual Smile

Aur aapki is kalaam meiN bhi aapke ahsaas O khayaal khoob
rahe.. Humari daad Kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

par jaane kyuN aapke ashaaroN meiN woH jaan woH baat nazar
nahi aati jo aani chahiye aap itne zahiN hai aur ahsaas bhi
khoob chun kar likhati hai .. aur lafz bhi khub istemaal
karti hai par kuch na kuch kami har ashaar meiN maqool taur
par rah jati hai jisse aapke khayaal ko sahiN se bayaani nahi
milti so ashaar bhi asar nahi kar paate aisa hume lagta hai...

Shayad waqai yeH humari kam akhali ho jo ki humari samjh meiN
ashaar apna jyada asar nahi chhodh pate hai..

par aapka yeH ashaar waqai dili tareef aur daad ka mushtahik hai..
Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

हमदर्दी जता के दोस्त, मेरे दुश्मन न बनो
अंदर ही अंदर और भी सुलगता हूँ मैं

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Likhate rahiye.. aur humari koi baat nagawaar guzare toH muaf kar dijiye..
Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: October 30, 2011, 05:02:17 AM »
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Quote from: usha rajesh on October 29, 2011, 04:23:28 PM


इक ख़ामोश इशारे पे बार-बार पलटता हूँ मैं
रोज पैदा होता औ’ सलीब पे लटकता हूँ मैं

ये रातों की नीदें, कहाँ नसीबों में मेरे
यूँ ही अंधेरों में पलकें झपकता हूँ मैं Applause Applause

महज धोखा हैं ये मुस्कुराती निगाहें    
तन्हाई में सावन सा बरसता हूँ मैं  Applause Applause

हमदर्दी जता के दोस्त, मेरे दुश्मन न बनो
अंदर ही अंदर और भी सुलगता हूँ मैं

न हँसी, न खुशियाँ, न जिंदगी अपनी
दूसरों के दर्द से दुखी हो बिलखता हूँ मैं
 
सूखी मेरे सपनों की खेती, तलाश में समंदर की
खयालों के रेगिस्तान में तन्हा भटकता हूँ मैं


                                   ------------Usha Rajesh

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ehsass Likhe Hai aapne

Dil Se Daad Kabul Kijye..

Aur Issi Tarah Aapne Acche Acche Khyaloo Se nAvazti Rahye
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2011, 05:10:18 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on October 29, 2011, 05:22:10 PM
Applause
 Beautiful !!!

Thanx, Siddiqui Saheb
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«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2011, 05:11:43 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on October 29, 2011, 06:18:24 PM
usha rajesh ji,


Good....keep it up.

Dheron daad aur hazaaron
shubhkaamnaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


Raqeeb Saheb, Bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: October 30, 2011, 05:12:55 AM »
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Quote from: Rajah rohan on October 29, 2011, 06:43:41 PM
Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki Usha Ji
Bas yun hi likhte rahiye

Thanx, Rajah Rohan ji
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«Reply #9 on: October 30, 2011, 05:28:18 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 29, 2011, 06:48:44 PM
Usha Jee Aadaab!

Aapki lekhan Shaily aur vichardharna behad khoob hai...
Iske liye aapko dilse daad O mubarakbad .. Usual Smile

Aur aapki is kalaam meiN bhi aapke ahsaas O khayaal khoob
rahe.. Humari daad Kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

par jaane kyuN aapke ashaaroN meiN woH jaan woH baat nazar
nahi aati jo aani chahiye aap itne zahiN hai aur ahsaas bhi
khoob chun kar likhati hai .. aur lafz bhi khub istemaal
karti hai par kuch na kuch kami har ashaar meiN maqool taur
par rah jati hai jisse aapke khayaal ko sahiN se bayaani nahi
milti so ashaar bhi asar nahi kar paate aisa hume lagta hai...

Shayad waqai yeH humari kam akhali ho jo ki humari samjh meiN
ashaar apna jyada asar nahi chhodh pate hai..

par aapka yeH ashaar waqai dili tareef aur daad ka mushtahik hai..
Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile

हमदर्दी जता के दोस्त, मेरे दुश्मन न बनो
अंदर ही अंदर और भी सुलगता हूँ मैं

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Likhate rahiye.. aur humari koi baat nagawaar guzare toH muaf kar dijiye..
Aate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

Parwaz Saheb Aadab!

Bahut bahut Shukriya ke apne itna waqt diya aur khulkar apna feedback diya.
Apki koi baat mujhe nagawar guzre aisa ho hi nahin sakta. Apse kuch achchha hi seekhne ko milega aisa  mujhe yakeen hai.
Achchha lagta hai ki aap jo mahsoos karte hain use behichak bayan karte hain.
Koshish yahi rahegi ki zazbaaton ko  behtar tareeke se pesh kar sakun. Main yahan ek  learner ke haisiyatse hun. Seekhne ki koshish jaari rahegi.

Apka tahe-dil se Shukriya!
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on October 30, 2011, 05:02:17 AM
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ehsass Likhe Hai aapne

Dil Se Daad Kabul Kijye..

Aur Issi Tarah Aapne Acche Acche Khyaloo Se nAvazti Rahye
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Sanjeev ji, Bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #11 on: October 30, 2011, 09:46:31 AM »
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Quote from: usha rajesh on October 29, 2011, 04:23:28 PM


इक ख़ामोश इशारे पे बार-बार पलटता हूँ मैं
रोज पैदा होता औ’ सलीब पे लटकता हूँ मैं

ये रातों की नीदें, कहाँ नसीबों में मेरे
यूँ ही अंधेरों में पलकें झपकता हूँ मैं

महज धोखा हैं ये मुस्कुराती निगाहें    
तन्हाई में सावन सा बरसता हूँ मैं

हमदर्दी जता के दोस्त, मेरे दुश्मन न बनो
अंदर ही अंदर और भी सुलगता हूँ मैं

न हँसी, न खुशियाँ, न जिंदगी अपनी
दूसरों के दर्द से दुखी हो बिलखता हूँ मैं
 
सूखी मेरे सपनों की खेती, तलाश में समंदर की
खयालों के रेगिस्तान में तन्हा भटकता हूँ मैं


                                   ------------Usha Rajesh


"mehaz Dhokha Hai yeh Muskurati Nigaahen
Tanhai Mein Saawan  Sa Barasta Hoon Main

Humdardi Jata Ke Dost Mere Dushman Naa Bano
Andar Hi Andar Aur Bhi Sulagta Hoon Main"


Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Ushaji..Ashaaron Mein Gehrai isse kehte Hai..

Aap Umda Shayara Hai..Likhte Rahiye

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Quote from: Shihab on October 30, 2011, 06:19:04 AM
humdardi jatake wah wah bahut bahut khub usha rajesh ji...

Shad o aabad rahiye...
 
Shihab

Shihabji,
Apka tahe-e-dil se shukriya.
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Quote from: khwaish on October 30, 2011, 09:46:31 AM

"mehaz Dhokha Hai yeh Muskurati Nigaahen
Tanhai Mein Saawan  Sa Barasta Hoon Main

Humdardi Jata Ke Dost Mere Dushman Naa Bano
Andar Hi Andar Aur Bhi Sulagta Hoon Main"


Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Ushaji..Ashaaron Mein Gehrai isse kehte Hai..

Aap Umda Shayara Hai..Likhte Rahiye

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khwaish ji,
Apka bahut bahut shukriya.
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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