Is bete ki budhiya maai haat uthaye baithi hai

by Jaanasheen on August 22, 2010, 04:59:03 PM
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ik deewani darwaze per aankh bichaye baithi hai
Ik deewane ke qaatir wo khud ko bhulaye baithi hai

Saath me uske tanhai hai ,aur  yaadon ki purwaaiye
Raaton  ke andhyaaron  me wo dil ko jalaye baithi hai

Mauth ne mujh ko khuch din pahele ye kahe kay zinda chora
Is bête ki bhudhiyaa maa’I haath  uthaye baithi hai

Ab ayenge jub ayenge , mere abbu sub layenge
Eak muflis ki beti kitni , aas lagaye baithi hai

Bus khuch din ki bath hai phir to mera bhai La'ot ayega
Bahena apni palkon pe khuch khawb sajaye baithi hai

Rastah takte takte Tera uski ankhen  pathraeen
Ab tasveer "Qadeer" woh Teri dil se lagaye baithi hai

qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #1 on: August 22, 2010, 06:44:43 PM »
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Masha Allah Azeem sahab.....

BeintehaaN khoob Gazal kahi hai aapne.....
Dil ki gehraiyoN se daad hazir hai janab.....

sabhi ashaar... per dil se daad...
Likhate rahiye......
Khuda Hafez......
         
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2010, 09:59:57 PM »
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wah ji wah... bahut khoob... bahut hi umda ghazal share ki hai aapne Qadeer ji ki.... bahut hi khoob...!!! Dil khush ho gaya....!!!

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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2010, 04:20:49 AM »
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AZEEM JEE AAPKAA BEHAD SHUKRIYAA JO AAP NE QADEER SAHEB KI BEHAD PYAREE GAZAL SE HUM SABKO NAZAR NAWAZ KARAYA.
MAA BETE KEE BE-INTEHAAYEE MOHABBAT,OR PARIVAAR SE DOORI KE DARD KAA AAINAA ,YE GAZAL UNKI TAMAM GAZALON ME MERI BEHAD PASANDEEDAH GAZAL HAI.GAZAL KA HAR SHER HEE NAHEE BALKI LAFZ LAFZ APNON SE JUDAI OR BEPANAAH MOHABBAT KA DASTAAVEZ BAN GAYAA HAI.EESHWAR UNHEN OR UNKE PARIWAAR KO KHUSH RAKHE.BHAGWAAN SE YAHEE PRARTHANA HAI.
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2010, 12:11:06 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 22, 2010, 06:44:43 PM
Masha Allah Azeem sahab.....

BeintehaaN khoob Gazal kahi hai aapne.....
Dil ki gehraiyoN se daad hazir hai janab.....

sabhi ashaar... per dil se daad...
Likhate rahiye......
Khuda Hafez......
         

Shukriya,.

Waise Ye Ghazal Meri Nahi,

Janab Abdul Qadeer Ji Ki Hai, Jo FB pe post hui thi, i loved this ghazal i thought to share with all my Yoindian Friend,

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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2010, 12:12:01 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on August 22, 2010, 09:59:57 PM
wah ji wah... bahut khoob... bahut hi umda ghazal share ki hai aapne Qadeer ji ki.... bahut hi khoob...!!! Dil khush ho gaya....!!!

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Quote from: mamta bajpai on August 23, 2010, 04:20:49 AM
AZEEM JEE AAPKAA BEHAD SHUKRIYAA JO AAP NE QADEER SAHEB KI BEHAD PYAREE GAZAL SE HUM SABKO NAZAR NAWAZ KARAYA.
MAA BETE KEE BE-INTEHAAYEE MOHABBAT,OR PARIVAAR SE DOORI KE DARD KAA AAINAA ,YE GAZAL UNKI TAMAM GAZALON ME MERI BEHAD PASANDEEDAH GAZAL HAI.GAZAL KA HAR SHER HEE NAHEE BALKI LAFZ LAFZ APNON SE JUDAI OR BEPANAAH MOHABBAT KA DASTAAVEZ BAN GAYAA HAI.EESHWAR UNHEN OR UNKE PARIWAAR KO KHUSH RAKHE.BHAGWAAN SE YAHEE PRARTHANA HAI.


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«Reply #6 on: August 26, 2010, 06:25:36 PM »
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azeem sb QADEER BHAI KO MERI TARAF SE BAHUT BAHUT DAAD DEIN AUR ITNI BEHTREEN SHARING KE LIYE AAP KA SHUKRIA......VERI VERI OUTSTANDING AND TOUCHING Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: August 31, 2010, 02:47:38 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on August 22, 2010, 04:59:03 PM
ik deewani darwaze per aankh bichaye baithi hai
Ik deewane ke qaatir wo khud ko bhulaye baithi hai

Saath me uske tanhai hai ,aur  yaadon ki purwaaiye
Raaton  ke andhyaaron  me wo dil ko jalaye baithi hai

Mauth ne mujh ko khuch din pahele ye kahe kay zinda chora
Is bête ki bhudhiyaa maa’I haath  uthaye baithi hai

Ab ayenge jub ayenge , mere abbu sub layenge
Eak muflis ki beti kitni , aas lagaye baithi hai

Bus khuch din ki bath hai phir to mera bhai La'ot ayega
Bahena apni palkon pe khuch khawb sajaye baithi hai

Rastah takte takte Tera uski ankhen  pathraeen
Ab tasveer "Qadeer" woh Teri dil se lagaye baithi hai

qadeertoopchi

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«Reply #8 on: September 01, 2010, 09:05:43 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on August 22, 2010, 04:59:03 PM
ik deewani darwaze per aankh bichaye baithi hai
Ik deewane ke qaatir wo khud ko bhulaye baithi hai

Saath me uske tanhai hai ,aur  yaadon ki purwaaiye
Raaton  ke andhyaaron  me wo dil ko jalaye baithi hai

Mauth ne mujh ko khuch din pahele ye kahe kay zinda chora
Is bête ki bhudhiyaa maa’I haath  uthaye baithi hai

Ab ayenge jub ayenge , mere abbu sub layenge
Eak muflis ki beti kitni , aas lagaye baithi hai

Bus khuch din ki bath hai phir to mera bhai La'ot ayega
Bahena apni palkon pe khuch khawb sajaye baithi hai

Rastah takte takte Tera uski ankhen  pathraeen
Ab tasveer "Qadeer" woh Teri dil se lagaye baithi hai

qadeertoopchi

bahut khoob azeem sahab
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«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2011, 07:19:14 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: November 28, 2012, 05:46:44 AM »
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lajwab umda ,behatreen, aur dheeerrrooon daaad
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