IS NADI KO LEKAR TUFAAN LAUTNAA HAI .........MUSAAHIB

by Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on December 25, 2013, 03:30:02 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 25, 2013, 08:59:37 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 25, 2013, 08:46:42 PM
Beautiful,musahib Ji,beautiful . Just keep it upppppp .
bahut bahut shukriyaa Sir....and Thanks a lot for help SIR,..
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«Reply #16 on: December 26, 2013, 01:12:27 AM »
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wah wah wah wah bohut khub sir ji
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«Reply #17 on: December 26, 2013, 01:49:41 AM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #18 on: December 26, 2013, 02:24:34 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoooooooooob bishwajeet... tumhe aise likhte hue dekhkar bahut khushi haasil hoti hai...aisa lagta hai mera khwaab tum poora kar rahe ho... dil se hazaron daad qubool karo.. aage aur bhi behtareen kalaam se bazm ko sanwaarte raho...
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«Reply #19 on: December 26, 2013, 10:15:05 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on December 25, 2013, 03:30:02 PM
अपना उसे बचाने अब शान लौटना है...
अब इस नदी को लेकर तूफ़ान लौटना है...

ये वक़्त है की रिश्ता सैयाद से बदल दें...
अब तोड़ने  परिंदों  ज़िन्दान लौटना है...

कब तक कली ये बागों में इस तरह सजेगी...
अब आज वो बदलने पहचान लौटना है...

हँस के यहाँ पे झूठे वादे किये सुहाने...
तुझको यहाँ निभाने पैमान लौटना है...

सबकी दुआ यही है लिखता यहाँ "मुसाहिब"...
अब तो उतारने वो एहसान लौटना है...

Zindaan - Prison, Paimaan - Promise
                                  
Apnaa use  bachane  ab shaan lautnaa hai...
ab is  nadi ko  lekar    tufaan    lautnaa hai...

ye waqt hai kii rishtaa saiyaad se badal deN...
ab todne  parindon  zindaan lautnaa hai...

kab tak kalii bhii bagon me  is tarah  sajegii...
ab aaj  wo bdalne pehchaan lautnaa hai...

hans ke yahan bhii jhuthe waade kiye suhaane...
tujhko yahaN nibhane paimaan lautnaa hai...

sabkii duaa yahi hai likhta yahaan "Musaahib"...
ab to utarne wo ehsaan lautnaa hai...


excellent,very nice utilization of qafia and RADEEF---your rau is due
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«Reply #20 on: December 26, 2013, 11:31:22 PM »
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waah waah Bishwajeet jee bahut khoob.
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«Reply #21 on: December 29, 2013, 10:25:02 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on December 26, 2013, 10:15:05 PM

excellent,very nice utilization of qafia and RADEEF---your rau is due

provided your RAU,SIR
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«Reply #22 on: December 30, 2013, 01:29:30 PM »
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bahut khoob Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: January 03, 2014, 08:37:38 PM »
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कब तक कली ये बागों में इस तरह सजेगी...
अब आज वो बदलने पहचान लौटना है...

हँस के यहाँ पे झूठे वादे किये सुहाने...
तुझको यहाँ निभाने पैमान लौटना है...

सबकी दुआ यही है लिखता यहाँ "मुसाहिब"...
अब तो उतारने वो एहसान लौटना है...
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