Is qafas se huN pareshaaN...............MKV -Panna 2:Ghazals

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«Reply #15 on: May 17, 2013, 07:32:25 PM »

Quote from: mkv on May 16, 2013, 02:09:07 PM

Khudnumayee, badgumaani aur ik ghar khaak hai
Talkh-kaami yak-bayak seenah hua ye chaak hai

Voh raqeeboN kee balaayeN le raha hai aajkal
Raat din bas aashnaai ab bachaani naak hai

Raaz dil me zabt uske lab hai jaise sil liye
Dil me uske sab dafan hai voh bahut chalaak hai

Haq-parasti aur riyazat hai mera imaan ab
Is qafas se huN pareshaN bas yahee idraak hai

hasratoN se tauba kar lee badla-badla hai ‘Chiragh’
raaz-e-aalam haiN numaya, ab ibaadat paak hai

Waah Waah Waah.....

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Mukesh Ji...Aapka Ek Naya Andaaz Dekhne Ko Mila

Lajwaab...Hatr Ek Ashaar Bahut Khooooob!!!!!


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Re: Is qafas se huN pareshaaN...............MKV

«Reply #16 on: May 17, 2013, 08:47:12 PM »


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«Reply #17 on: May 18, 2013, 02:05:05 PM »

Quote from: mkv on May 16, 2013, 02:09:07 PM

bahut khoob likha hai aapne mkv jee

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Voh raqeeboN kee balaayeN le raha hai aajkal
Raat din bas aashnaai ab bachaani naak hai


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Re: Is qafas se huN pareshaaN...............MKV

«Reply #18 on: May 18, 2013, 07:07:30 PM »

Wwwaaaahhhhhh !!!! Is laajawaab qalaam par jitni daad lutaayee jaate, kam hai. Bahaut bahaut badhayee aur mubaarakbaad Mukesh ji


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«Reply #19 on: May 19, 2013, 01:33:02 AM »

Quote from: sahal on May 16, 2013, 03:20:00 PM

hasratoN se tauba kar lee badla-badla hai ‘Chiragh’
raaz-e-aalam haiN numaya, ab ibaadat paak hai

WAAH WAAH MUKESH JI LAJWAAB
Applause

Shukriya sahal jee


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«Reply #20 on: May 19, 2013, 01:35:08 AM »

Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on May 16, 2013, 03:27:26 PM

gr888888888888 ghazal,sir you have selected few tough arabic words

shukriya Mb saheb


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«Reply #21 on: May 19, 2013, 03:04:07 PM »

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on May 16, 2013, 06:03:54 PM

Bahut khoob... Applause

touhid bhai shukriya


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«Reply #22 on: May 20, 2013, 12:09:33 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on May 16, 2013, 07:34:59 PM

Awesome mukesh ji. ek alag hi andaaz dekhne ko mila aapka. badi achchi ghazal hui is baar. tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi. dil se mubarakbad qubool kijiyega.

bahut bahut shukriya


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«Reply #23 on: May 20, 2013, 10:09:40 AM »

Quote from: Sanjeev kash on May 16, 2013, 07:37:15 PM

BAhut BAhut Khub Mukesh Ji

shukriya sanjee bhai


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«Reply #24 on: May 21, 2013, 02:06:17 AM »

MUKESH BHAI , KYA BAAT HAI , AAPKI URDU TO AWESOME HAI ....... VERY NICE.


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«Reply #25 on: May 22, 2013, 01:56:47 AM »

Quote from: laaiba on May 16, 2013, 07:58:19 PM

laajawab ,...........bohat c daad,..........

Shukriya..yun hi saath dete rahiyega


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«Reply #26 on: May 22, 2013, 10:40:58 PM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 16, 2013, 09:09:53 PM

Marhaba Marhaba, Subhan Allah, Mukesh bhai, aaj sach bol raha huN taa'reef ke liye alfaaz nahiN haiN. MaiN to bilkul awaak rah gaya ye ghazal padh ke, ek se badh kar ek she'r jinka koi jawaab nahiN. Kya ghazab ke neyk aur aa'la khayaalaat nikaale haiN aapne, aur sath meiN itna khumaar bhara hai, khaastaur pe 4th aur maqte ka she'r, lekin baaqi ash'aar ko bhi kisi soorat kamtar nahiN kaha jaa sakta. Ye mere liye ek yaadgaar ghazal kahi hai jo mujhe hamesha yaad rahegi.

Iss pe jitni daad-o-mubarakbaad di jaae kam hai, khayr kuch to dena padega aur kam se kam in 5 ash'aar pe 5 Rau to bante hi haiN jo ki ek baar meiN nahiN diye jaa sakte, lekin phir bhi maiN inheN poora karuNga 3-4 din meiN.

Bhai mere
itna bojh le ke kaise jiunga.
par aapki bhaavnaao ki kadra karta hun..isliye manzoor hai.
par aapki ye baaten..taaumra ke liye yaadgaar ban gayee.
khush rahiye..


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«Reply #27 on: May 23, 2013, 09:32:55 PM »

Quote from: adil bechain on May 17, 2013, 12:16:57 AM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah mkv ji, 3rd aur 4rth sher khususi rahe Applause

shukriya adil bhai


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«Reply #28 on: May 24, 2013, 07:24:02 PM »

Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 17, 2013, 12:44:01 AM

Wah,Wah,Wah very nice composition.

Thanks sudhir jee


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«Reply #29 on: May 25, 2013, 07:26:50 PM »

Quote from: khwahish on May 17, 2013, 07:32:25 PM

Waah Waah Waah.....

Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Mukesh Ji...Aapka Ek Naya Andaaz Dekhne Ko Mila

Lajwaab...Hatr Ek Ashaar Bahut Khooooob!!!!!

thanks a lot for your encouragement Khwaish jee


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