Ishk ne kab haar maani hai ... ! Ishk Ek Ibadat

by ishk ek ibadat on April 01, 2011, 02:00:36 PM
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Yeh toh reet puraani hai
Ishk ne kab haar maani hai

Khushi men aate aansoo hai
Hijr ki bhi woh hii kahaani hai

Khaalii reshmi roomal tera
Mere paas aakhri nishaani hai

Heena haathon men lagaa ke
Kyon teri aankhon men paani hai

Baith ke jaatii  doli men, dekhti
Chhut gai yaaden suhaani hai

Naye saathi ki baahon men
Sochti "ishk" ki rahi diwaani hai
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nirala
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«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2011, 03:53:55 PM »
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umda ghazal ishq ji.
daad daad ji dil se daad
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«Reply #2 on: April 01, 2011, 04:26:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #3 on: April 01, 2011, 05:13:46 PM »
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Yeh toh reet puraani hai
Ishk ne kab haar maani hai

Khushi men aate aansoo hai
Hijr ki bhi woh hii kahaani hai

Khaalii reshmi roomal tera
Mere paas aakhri nishaani hai

Heena haathon men lagaa ke
Kyon teri aankhon men paani hai

Baith ke jaatii  doli men, dekhti
Chhut gai yaaden suhaani hai

Naye saathi ki baahon men
Sochti "ishk" ki rahi diwaani hai

Ji .. Nice One ... !

Dil Se Daad .....  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2011, 05:28:07 PM »
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good poem.......Ishq-ek-ibadat ji...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Chhuta aaj baabul ka ghar.unke sneh ka aankhon me paani hai
Ishq ki raahon par aaj meri doli ki mere piya k ghar rawaani hai


Yeh toh reet puraani hai
Ishk ne kab haar maani hai

Khushi men aate aansoo hai
Hijr ki bhi woh hii kahaani hai

Khaalii reshmi roomal tera
Mere paas aakhri nishaani hai

Heena haathon men lagaa ke
Kyon teri aankhon men paani hai

Baith ke jaatii  doli men, dekhti
Chhut gai yaaden suhaani hai

Naye saathi ki baahon men
Sochti "ishk" ki rahi diwaani hai
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«Reply #5 on: April 01, 2011, 05:51:17 PM »
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good one... !!!

Intezar !
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«Reply #6 on: April 01, 2011, 06:46:42 PM »
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Bahut khoob..
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ParwaaZ
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«Reply #7 on: April 01, 2011, 07:31:50 PM »
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Ishq Sahab Aadaab!

Bade arse baad aapki koi kalaam nazar aayi hai.. ?
Mijaaz to thik hai naa aapka ?
Ummid hai sab thik hoNga Usual Smile

Aap delhi waaloN ki kalaame aik hi meter meiN aa rahi hai.. Usual Smile
bada achcha laga janab, aap logoN ki aik meter meiN alag alag kavish ko khoob anjaam de rahe hai... Koshish jari rakhiye.... Hum bhi soch raheN hai ke isi meter meiN hum bhi kuch likheN taki aap logoN se sikhane meiN madat mil jaye Usual Smile

Khair aapki kalaam par aate hai Usual Smile

Kia khoob is kalaam ki rawaani hai
Jaise bahte huye darya ka pani hai          



Yeh toh reet puraani hai
Ishk ne kab haar maani hai

Kia kahne behad khoob daad .. bahut achcha matla kaha hai bahut khoob Usual Smile          

Khushi men aate aansoo hai
Hijr ki bhi woh hii kahaani hai

Kia kahne bahut achche ... Usual Smile          

Khaalii reshmi roomal tera
Mere paas aakhri nishaani hai

Oye hoye yeH bada khoob raha janab daad Usual Smile          

Heena haathon men lagaa ke
Kyon teri aankhon men paani hai

Hmmm achcha hai gehra bhi hai daad Usual Smile          

Baith ke jaatii  doli men, dekhti
Chhut gai yaaden suhaani hai

Oye hoye gazab janab gazab kia kahne bahut khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile          

Naye saathi ki baahon men
Sochti "ishk" ki rahi diwaani hai

Maqta bhi khoob kaha hai janab daad Usual Smile          



Aise hi khoob kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye..
Khush O aabaad rahiye...

Aapki is khoob kalaam par hum bhi kuch misre arz karne ki gustaqi kare rahe haiN .. Usual Smile          



Yehi haqeekhat yehi kahaani hai
Rasm e duniya tumhe bhi nibhaani hai

Jaane kaise nind aayeNgi mujhe
Teri yaadoN meiN raat bitaani hai

Umar bhar ko lamhoN meiN yaad kiya
Kitni chhoti si yeH zindagaani hai

Hum khakh ke putle khak ho jayeN
Humko duniyaa wahaaN basaani hai

Kisi ke jaane ka kiaa gham karnaa
Key Ulfat hai toH phir nibhaani hai

KyuN socheN ParwaaZ dhalte suraj ko
YeH raateN toH aksar aani jaani hai

      


         

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«Reply #8 on: April 02, 2011, 12:45:10 AM »
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Ishq jee! behad khoob aap kee ye peshkash or saath hee Parwaaz jee kee beharareen gazal ........waqi badaa lutf de gayee.......dil se daad .....
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«Reply #9 on: April 02, 2011, 04:17:55 AM »
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Simple .. Sweet & Very Touching ..... Rajinder Bhai !!  icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: April 02, 2011, 06:31:28 AM »
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 Applause Applause
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Wah....! Wah.....!

Bahut Khoob.. Aise hi likhte rahiye..
Dil tak pahuch gayi ye nazm..
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: April 02, 2011, 06:58:47 AM »
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bahut khub ishqji..... bahut badiya.....

 Applause Applause Applause

parwaz ji ne bhi kamal ka likha hai...

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: April 02, 2011, 09:50:16 PM »
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umda ghazal ishq ji.
daad daad ji dil se daad

Bahut bahut shukriya .... Nirala Ji ! koshish ko kimti waqt dene kaa .. aise hi saath nibhaate rahiyega ... !
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«Reply #13 on: April 03, 2011, 09:47:23 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!

Bahut bahut shukriya .. Janaab !! aapki dilee daad kaa !!!!
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«Reply #14 on: April 03, 2011, 11:18:52 AM »
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Yeh toh reet puraani hai
Ishk ne kab haar maani hai

Khushi men aate aansoo hai
Hijr ki bhi woh hii kahaani hai

Khaalii reshmi roomal tera
Mere paas aakhri nishaani hai

Heena haathon men lagaa ke
Kyon teri aankhon men paani hai

Baith ke jaatii  doli men, dekhti
Chhut gai yaaden suhaani hai

Naye saathi ki baahon men
Sochti "ishk" ki rahi diwaani hai

Nice Work ...... Ishk Ji
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