Ishq ka Kaarobaar hai Saahib

by vipul kumar on June 22, 2011, 11:55:30 AM
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Ye Kaisa ishq pyar hai saahib.....
Jii ka rona hai maar hai saahib.....

Yaa.n Dukano pe dard bikta hai,
Ye lutera Baazar Hai Saahib.......

Fikr-e-Sood-o-Ziya.n Kaun kare,
Ishq ka kaarobaar hai saahib......

Unki aadat wo Zakhm dete hai.n,
Hamko zakhmo se Pyar hai saahib......

Unke seene me Lakh hasrat hai,
Apna seena Figaar hai saahib.....

Unko chaahat hai phuul chunNe ki,
Apni jholi me khaar hai saahib......

Bewafaa hai k Dil_Fareb hai wo,
Kuchh bhi Hai Apna Yaar hai saahib.....

Wo mera muddai hai Par YaaRa,
Wohi Parvar_Digaar hai saahib.......!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2011, 12:57:19 PM »
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Ye Kaisa ishq pyar hai saahib.....
Jii ka rona hai maar hai saahib.....

Yaa.n Dukano pe dard bikta hai,
Ye lutera Baazar Hai Saahib.......

Fikr-e-Sood-o-Ziya.n Kaun kare,
Ishq ka kaarobaar hai saahib......

Unki aadat wo Zakhm dete hai.n,
Hamko zakhmo se Pyar hai saahib......

Unke seene me Lakh hasrat hai,
Apna seena Figaar hai saahib.....

Unko chaahat hai phuul chunNe ki,
Apni jholi me khaar hai saahib......

Bewafaa hai k Dil_Fareb hai wo,
Kuchh bhi Hai Apna Yaar hai saahib.....

Wo mera muddai hai Par YaaRa,
Wohi Parvar_Digaar hai saahib.......!!



vipul sb aap ke sher ache hain , aakhri sher se ittefaq nahin rakhta hoon. aap kya kahna chahte hain
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vipul kumar
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«Reply #2 on: June 27, 2011, 05:06:42 PM »
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Khamosh_awaaz ji....

Aakhiri sher yaani Maqte me ParvarDigaar mahboob ke liye Use hua hai....
Jo ki Muddai bhi hai aur Khuda bhi........
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«Reply #3 on: June 27, 2011, 05:51:34 PM »
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Wo mera muddai hai Par YaaRa,
Wohi Parvar_Digaar hai saahib.......


"Vipul Sahab" aapke is quote se hum bhi ittefaq nahi rakhte... kyunki agar aap "MUDDAI" ki defination par jayein tou iska matlab huwa  mitane wala.
jabki Wo Rabb... Banaane wala hai, a creator and not a destroyer only, who creates unbelieveable things, the whole universe also coming in the creation of God. and lots of things are there like sun, moon stars, planets, humans.....etc etc...

Allah humein aur aapko likhne aur samjhne se ziyada amal ki taufique de..(Ameen)


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«Reply #4 on: June 27, 2011, 08:09:48 PM »
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Shukriya Alam Qazi sahab. Pahle to ghazal padhne aur comment karne ke liye shukriya.

Jo us sher ki baat hai, maine waha.n 'Par' ka istemaal kiya hai. Mahboob ke liye shayri me aksar aisi guftgu hoti hai.
Meri naqis soch ke hisab se maine likha tha k Usi ne beshaq mujhe mitaya hai Par asl me wahi mujhe banane wala hai. Gaur farmaaye.n ki ye us 'Khuda' ki baat nahi ho rahi hai. yaha.n Mahboob ki baat hai ki wahi mera dushman hai par wahi meri Jaan hai, mera khuda hai...

Ye to bas maine apni Haqeer soch ke hisaab se adna sa sher banaya hai...
Galti ho to Muaafi....

Aate rahiye.
Khush rahiye:)
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«Reply #5 on: June 28, 2011, 04:27:58 AM »
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Aadab ,,

Ghazal ka majmoo"ii rang pasand aaya so daad khubool kare.N ,, allah apko mazeed nawaze...Khuch sher apki tawajho ke mahutaj hain so dekh len .. khuch sher apki nazar kar raha hon issi radeef pe umid hai apko pasand ayenge


Khuch nahi humko ab gila sahib
tha jo kismat me wo howa sahib

bebasi , bekali o tanhai
aur kya ishq ne diya sahib

baad muddat ke jhil me akhir
ik kanwal khushnuma khila sahib

sub khilono.N ko tood ke beta
Maa.N ke anchal me so gaya sahib

Uske waade ki laaj rakhne ko
ashq pi pi ke mai jiya sahib

eak waade pe umr kaati hai
kya "Qadeer" apne kiya sahib


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