ish.q kee ham per bhi eenayat ajab hai,.......

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«Reply #15 on: March 29, 2014, 06:23:18 PM »
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Salam vb g
Bohat bohat our bohat shuqria tafseeli repky ke liye..
G maine apne naqis ilm ke hisab se behr ekhafeef ko in alfaz men dhalne k liye chuna ..
Lekin iski defination ko aap ne byan kiya darust our mukamal byan kiya hai aap ne ...islah hamesha ghalatiyon pe di jati hai jahan ghalatee ho gee islah ka pehloo b wahin pe nikalta hai our tanqeed bara e islaah bohat ahmiyat rakhti hai is siksile mein......
Maine points note kr liye hain
In shaa allah agli baar behr e khafeef ke in pehloo ko samne rakh ker kuch behter likhne ki koshish ho gee youn b apke lessons meri nigah se nhi guzre ye meri laailmee hai...well aik baar phir iss lesson ke liye shukr guzar hun...is uumeed ke sath aapki taraf se tanqeed baraye islah ke lessons milte rahen gen .........

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«Reply #16 on: March 30, 2014, 03:51:43 PM »
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uss ke dil men rehne ki raahat ajab hai
saa.th uss  ke chalne ki chahat ajab hai
 
bas uusee kee hee saamne sar jhukaaya
pyaa.r men dil kee  her ebaadat ajab hai
 
khaa.b tootey  aaNkhon ke to hum ne jaana
dar.d kee  dil men ek hararat ajab hai

saath meiire  rehte ho  ek um.r se par
jo maiN souchun toh yeh rafaaqat ajab hai
 
bhool jaayun uskoh ye mumkin nahi hai
yaa.d uss koh karne ki aadat ajab hai...

aankh se dil men roo.h mei n yun hai utra
ish.q kee ham per bhi eenayat ajab hai

,laaiba shah,
   

uss ke dil men rehne ki raahat ajab hai
saa.th uss  ke chalne ki chahat ajab hai
 
bhool jaayun uskoh ye mumkin nahi hai
yaa.d uss koh karne ki aadat ajab hai...

aankh se dil men roo.h mei n yun hai utra
ish.q kee ham per bhi eenayat ajab hai


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«Reply #17 on: March 30, 2014, 05:33:59 PM »
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Bohat bohat shuqria sahal aapkaa .
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«Reply #18 on: March 30, 2014, 07:01:17 PM »
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uss ke dil men rehne ki raahat ajab hai
saa.th uss  ke chalne ki chahat ajab hai
 
bas uusee kee hee saamne sar jhukaaya
pyaa.r men dil kee  her ebaadat ajab hai
 
khaa.b tootey  aaNkhon ke to hum ne jaana
dar.d kee  dil men ek hararat ajab hai

saath meiire  rehte ho  ek um.r se par
jo maiN souchun toh yeh rafaaqat ajab hai
 
bhool jaayun uskoh ye mumkin nahi hai
yaa.d uss koh karne ki aadat ajab hai...

aankh se dil men roo.h mei n yun hai utra
ish.q kee ham per bhi eenayat ajab hai

,laaiba shah,
   



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uss ke dil men rehne ki raahat ajab hai
saa.th uss  ke chalne ki chahat ajab hai

saath meiire  rehte ho  ek um.r se par
jo maiN souchun toh yeh rafaaqat ajab hai
 
bhool jaayun uskoh ye mumkin nahi hai
yaa.d uss koh karne ki aadat ajab hai...



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«Reply #19 on: March 30, 2014, 10:37:20 PM »
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Beautiful !! waaah
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