Ishq ki aag laga dena.................................Aqsh..

by aqsh on October 07, 2013, 11:52:46 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 07, 2013, 07:50:47 PM »
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«Reply #16 on: October 07, 2013, 08:57:56 PM »
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Na mumkin hai mere dil meiN, ishq ki aag laga dena
AasaaN nahiN hota hai, ret par apna ghar bana dena
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Sun le zaalim, mera husn toh hai ek zinda tajmahal
Mujhe taraash kar tu kahiN, apne haath na ganwa dena
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Meri aankhoN meiN doobne ki, tamanna karne wale
Phir soch le, maujo ko aata hai tinke ko baha dena
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Mere rukhsaar par saje til ko, raat ki syaahi na kah
Chaand ka kaam hota hai, andheroN ko mita dena
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“Aqsh” ki wafa aur junoon, toh hai sirf usi ke liye
Jis meiN hunar ho, hawa ke rehte chiraagoN ko jala dena

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wah wah wah.......! bada hunar wala hai tumhara ghar wala icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #17 on: October 07, 2013, 09:05:52 PM »
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waah waah kyaa zindaa dilee hai to ho jaaye ek rau
thnx a lottttttt saini sir for the appreciation and the rau..
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«Reply #18 on: October 07, 2013, 09:08:36 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Aqsh ji, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke....!!! kuch likhaa hai iske jawaab mein, ummeed kartaa hoon aapko pasand aaye....!!!



tere maan jaane tak main teraa  intezaar karungaa
tu naa kare naa sahi, main  tujhse   pyaar karungaa

ret pe ghar banaake lehron se  bachaa lungaa main
toot  jaaye  kabhi  agar  use firse tayyaar karungaa

taaj banaa ke kaarigar ne apne haath  gawaaye the
tere   liye  apni  zindagi  hi  tujhpe   nisaar  karungaa

khwaahish hai dilki  teri  aankhon mein  doob  jaaye
doob  teri  aankhon  mein  tere dil ko paar karungaa

bujh jaaye koi  chiraag  hawaa  ke jhaunke se kabhi
khud  ko  jalaa  ke main roshni mere yaar karungaa

maut aajaaye gar kabhi 'Hriday' ko mohabbat mein
teri  khushiyon  ke liye duwaayein hazaar karungaa


*****HRIDAY*****



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ohoooooooooooo awesomeeeeeeeee reply hriday ji.... dil khush ho gaya padhkar....Bahut bahut bahut thnxxxxxxxxxxx.... baar baar padhne ko dil karta raha.. really bahut umda jawab raha...
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«Reply #19 on: October 07, 2013, 09:09:45 PM »
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Na mumkin hai mere dil meiN, ishq ki aag laga dena
AasaaN nahiN hota hai, ret par apna ghar bana dena

Sun le zaalim, mera husn toh hai ek zinda tajmahal
Mujhe taraash kar tu kahiN, apne haath na ganwa dena

Meri aankhoN meiN doobne ki, tamanna karne wale
Phir soch le, maujo ko aata hai tinke ko baha dena

Mere rukhsaar par saje til ko, raat ki syaahi na kah
Chaand ka kaam hota hai, andheroN ko mita dena

“Aqsh” ki wafa aur junoon, toh hai sirf usi ke liye
Jis meiN hunar ho, hawa ke rehte chiraagoN ko jala dena

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause ApplauseWaah waah,bahut hi Khoobsurat Peshqash Ki Hai Apne.!!
Is Khoobsurat Kalaam Par Ek Rau,Pesh Hai,Qabool Kariyega.!!
Ravi ji pasand karne ke liye aur rau ke liye bahut bahut bahut shukriya....
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«Reply #20 on: October 07, 2013, 09:10:37 PM »
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boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!  one rau
Qalb ji pasand karne ke liye aur rau ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #21 on: October 07, 2013, 10:22:29 PM »
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Kya baat hai. icon_scratch

Tumhare pyar main kya gire
tumne nazar se gira diya.
hum bure aadmi na the
tumne bura aadmi  bana diya.
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«Reply #22 on: October 08, 2013, 01:26:51 AM »
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Sun le zaalim, mera husn toh hai ek zinda tajmahal
Mujhe taraash kar tu kahiN, apne haath na ganwa dena

Mere rukhsaar par saje til ko, raat ki syaahi na kah
Chaand ka kaam hota hai, andheroN ko mita dena

Aqsh ji .... Khoob ghazal kahi hai ....kuchh naye se ehsaasaast dekhne ko mile ..... ye waale aashaar to
khaas taur se pasand aaye .... Dheron daad aapko
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«Reply #23 on: October 08, 2013, 01:55:24 AM »
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ohoooooooooooo awesomeeeeeeeee reply hriday ji.... dil khush ho gaya padhkar....Bahut bahut bahut thnxxxxxxxxxxx.... baar baar padhne ko dil karta raha.. really bahut umda jawab raha...
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«Reply #24 on: October 08, 2013, 01:43:41 PM »
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aqsh jee..chha gaye aap to..ufffff kya ghazal kahi hai..

Dil bagh bagh ho gaya hai..RAU pe to apka hi naam hai..

maza aa gaya aqsh jee..dhero daad qubool farmaaye..happy9


P.S: Apne sare raaz na kholiye aqsh jee..koi takla aa gaya na hunar le ke to prblm ho jayegi..Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #25 on: October 08, 2013, 03:10:56 PM »
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Sun le zaalim, mera husn toh hai ek zinda tajmahal
Mujhe taraash kar tu kahiN, apne haath na ganwa dena

waah waah AQsh ji lajwaab likha hai ,ek dum zabardast ghazal likhi hai apne ...ye ashaar to bohut pasand aya hai mujhe ,
RAU dena to banta hai.
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[/quote Sahal pasand karne ke liye aur rau ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #26 on: October 08, 2013, 03:14:06 PM »
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Na mumkin hai mere dil meiN, ishq ki aag laga dena
AasaaN nahiN hota hai, ret par apna ghar bana dena

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Wah,Wah,Wah Aqshji,Bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai,Really Beautiful.Matla bahut achha laga. Aapke isi matle ke jawaab me apne aik ghazal ka matla aapkee nazr karna chahta hun -

Ret per main ghar banana chahta hun.
Aag   paani    me lagana chahta hun.
aapka bahut bahut shukriya sudhir ji...
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«Reply #27 on: October 08, 2013, 03:14:52 PM »
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WAAH WAAH SUPER ONE.............. Thumbs UP

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thnxxxxx a lottt miraj ji...
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«Reply #28 on: October 08, 2013, 03:16:29 PM »
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bohut khub aqsh ji
thnx sahill ji...
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«Reply #29 on: October 08, 2013, 03:18:29 PM »
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kya  baat kya baat kya baat....is gazal mein jitna josh hai utna hee khud mein bhi le aana........dekhte hai phir kaun himmat karta hai tumhare samne aane ki ...lajawab lajwab lajwab lajwab alawab peshkash


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Soudagar ji bahut bahut shukriya... aur haan mai waisi darpok nahi hoon yaar... itni himmat hai mujh mein..
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