Iss dubte kashti ko lehron mein, tinka hi de jata koi

by livingbytheday on June 28, 2012, 04:56:23 AM
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Ai kaash ki iss andhiyare mein, deepak hi jala jata koi
Iss dubte kashti ko lehron mein, tinka hi de jata koi

Qaid hue is chaar deewari, sadiyan jaise beet gayee
Haath pakad kar mousam tak humko bhi le jata koi

Yun toh hai kayi log yahan apnapan dikhlanewale
Chupke se kisi dil mein paley hum, aisa bhi ho nata koi

Raat hai gehri, chand hai sehma, jugnu ghurte rehte hai
Tanhayee mein mout na aaye, bahon mein reh jata koi

Tod ke chaand aangaan sajwaaya, raas manaya logo ne
Mera ghar bhi raat mein dooba, tara hi de jata koi

Tanhaayee qismat mein likhi, aanewaala koi nahi hain
Bekaar hai raste aankh beechana, isko bhi samjhata koi

Jhuti umeed pe jeete hai, na dubey  na ubharey hai
Ya toh humko raah dikhata, ya humko dafanaata koi
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«Reply #1 on: June 28, 2012, 05:14:45 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: June 28, 2012, 05:55:51 AM »
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Tod ke chaand aangaan sajwaaya, raas manaya logo ne
Mera ghar bhi raat mein dooba, tara hi de jata koi


Achchi lines hain ,
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«Reply #3 on: June 28, 2012, 06:01:18 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 28, 2012, 05:14:45 AM
bahut khoob

bahut shukriyaa sir
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Quote from: Aarish on June 28, 2012, 05:55:51 AM
Tod ke chaand aangaan sajwaaya, raas manaya logo ne
Mera ghar bhi raat mein dooba, tara hi de jata koi


Achchi lines hain ,

thank you aarishji
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thank you sir
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«Reply #7 on: June 28, 2012, 03:38:03 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on June 28, 2012, 03:38:03 PM
boht khub

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Bahut khoob Deepak jee
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Quote from: mkv on June 30, 2012, 05:27:49 PM
Bahut khoob Deepak jee
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thank you sirji
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«Reply #12 on: July 03, 2012, 01:30:35 PM »
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bohat khoob...aapka likhne ka andaaz bohat pasand aaya mujhe.
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bohat khoob...aapka likhne ka andaaz bohat pasand aaya mujhe.


bahut shukriyaa for kind words
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