Iss Duniya mein Aisa Bhi Koi Shaks Ho Jo Bezubaan Mile.....

by khwaish on September 06, 2009, 11:54:02 AM
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Kaash Aisa Bhi Koi Jahaan Mile!!
Jahan har Chehre Par Muskaan Mile...

Bahut Hua Iss Zameen Par Insaaniyat Ka Khoon!!!
Log Ab kehte Hai,Kuch Aisa Ho ke Humein Ab Aasman Mile...

Rote Hue Ko dekh Kar Kisi Aur Ki Aankh Bhi Ro padhe,
Kaash Aisa Bhi koi Jahaan Mile...

Nafrat,Vair,Virodh Ki Bhaawna Har Jagah Faili Hai!!!
Kahin to ho ke Mohabbat ka Bhi kuch Nishaan Mile....

Dard ke Silsile Kabhi Khatam Hi Nahi Hote!!!
Jahan Khushiyon Ko Koi Kareed Sake,Duniya mein Aisi Bhi Koi Dukaan Mile...

Sirf Insaano mein Hi Kyon Hai Yeh Gile-Shikwe??
Iss Duniya Mein Aisa Bhi koi Shaks Ho Jo Bezubaan Mile..

Kyon Dar-Badar Talaash Karte Ho Uss Khuda Ki,
Jab Woh Tum Mein Hi Kahin Basta Hai!!!!
Bas Shart Yeh hai ke!!!
Aaj Ke Iss Daur Mein,Pehle Humein Koi Insaan Mile....

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke Ek Woh Din bhi Zaroor Aayega!!!
Jab Mandir mein Allah Aur Masjid mein Bhagwaan mile....

                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2009, 12:12:21 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost.....Aisa Jahan pata nahin hai ki nahin, lekin dua hai ki aisa jahan jald mile !
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2009, 12:24:47 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish ji.. Bahoot Hi Khubsoorat Ghazal hai.. Baoot khoob!
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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2009, 10:59:05 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Khwaish ji ,beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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«Reply #4 on: September 07, 2009, 02:22:44 PM »
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waah bhut khoob khwaish kya kehne........................
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2009, 02:25:20 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Khwaish bhaiya
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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2009, 11:02:28 AM »
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...bahut badhiya Khwaish bhai...bahut achhe...
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«Reply #7 on: September 08, 2009, 11:09:14 PM »
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Wah Khwaish Sb

Main bhi talat se muttafiq hun


dad qubool ho



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«Reply #8 on: September 08, 2009, 11:24:23 PM »
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Best Lines from Your Poem Khwaish:


Kyon Dar-Badar Talaash Karte Ho Uss Khuda Ki,
Jab Woh Tum Mein Hi Kahin Basta Hai!!!!
Bas Shart Yeh hai ke!!!
Aaj Ke Iss Daur Mein,Pehle Humein Koi Insaan Mile....

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke Ek Woh Din bhi Zaroor Aayega!!!
Jab Mandir mein Allah Aur masjid mein Bhagwaan mile...

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hamesha ki tarah shandaar@jaandar.superbb!!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 09, 2009, 12:30:56 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 06, 2009, 11:54:02 AM
Kaash Aisa Bhi Koi Jahaan Mile!!
Jahan har Chehre Par Muskaan Mile...

Bahut Hua Iss Zameen Par Insaaniyat Ka Khoon!!!


bohot hi achha likha aap ne,,,
keep writing

Log Ab kehte Hai,Kuch Aisa Ho ke Humein Ab Aasman Mile...

Rote Hue Ko dekh Kar Kisi Aur Ki Aankh Bhi Ro padhe,
Kaash Aisa Bhi koi Jahaan Mile...

Nafrat,Vair,Virodh Ki Bhaawna Har Jagah Faili Hai!!!
Kahin to ho ke Mohabbat ka Bhi kuch Nishaan Mile....

Dard ke Silsile Kabhi Khatam Hi Nahi Hote!!!
Jahan Khushiyon Ko Koi Kareed Sake,Duniya mein Aisi Bhi Koi Dukaan Mile...

Sirf Insaano mein Hi Kyon Hai Yeh Gile-Shikwe??
Iss Duniya Mein Aisa Bhi koi Shaks Ho Jo Bezubaan Mile..

Kyon Dar-Badar Talaash Karte Ho Uss Khuda Ki,
Jab Woh Tum Mein Hi Kahin Basta Hai!!!!
Bas Shart Yeh hai ke!!!
Aaj Ke Iss Daur Mein,Pehle Humein Koi Insaan Mile....

"Khwaish" Kehta Hai Ke Ek Woh Din bhi Zaroor Aayega!!!
Jab Mandir mein Allah Aur masjid mein Bhagwaan mile....

                 ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #10 on: September 09, 2009, 06:06:39 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 06, 2009, 12:12:21 PM
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Bohot Khoob Khwaish Dost.....Aisa Jahan pata nahin hai ki nahin, lekin dua hai ki aisa jahan jald mile !

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Talat Dost!!!

Insaan Sirf umeed Karta Sakta Hai Ke Sach mein Aisa Jahan kabhi To ho..

Kehte Hai Naa,"Umeed Pe Hi Duniya Kaayam hai"!!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Dost!! icon_flower
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«Reply #11 on: September 11, 2009, 07:34:43 AM »
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Khwaish ....  bahut khoob .... Dil ka armaaN hai .... sukuuN-e-jaaN hai ......  jo bhi dil ko chuu le .. wohii Allah hai wohii BagwaaN hai .... Khayaal accha hai ..... Magar kissi ne kya khoob khaa hai ....

"Mandir Pujari ke liye aur Masjid NamaziyoN ke Liye
Gar Ho Sake To Apne Ghar Mein Khudaa Rakhna"


LijiYee ... Chend Alfaaz Pesh_E_Kidmat hai .....


Har Bhashar YahaN PreshaaN Sa Lagta Hai
Mujh Ko Tera Shehar VeraaN Sa Lagta Hai

Door Tak Failaa Hua San-Nata Hi San-Nata
Har Ik Ghar Mujh Ko ShamshaN Sa Lagta Hai

Yeh Kisne Merii Ruuh Ko AaKar Chuu Liya
Woh Kaun Hai Jo Mujhe BagwaaN Sa Lagta Hai!!

Khush Rahiye ...

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«Reply #12 on: September 11, 2009, 07:47:55 AM »
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bahut achche khwahish bhai aap ne bahut khoobsurat ehsaas jagaaya hai
aur ek behtareen khwab dikhaya hai ummeed hai kii ek roz aisa jaroor aayega
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«Reply #13 on: September 11, 2009, 08:50:27 AM »
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kya baat hai   khwaish ji......

KAASH AISA BHI KOI JHAAN MILE,
JAHAN INSAAN KE SAATH SIRF INSAANIYAT MILE.

KAASH AISA BHI KOI CHAMAN MILE,
JAHAN KAANTE NA SIRF PHOOL KHILE.

KAASH KAHIN TOH AISA MAALIK KA GHAR MILE,
JAHAN ALLAH,BHAGWAAN,JESUS,NANAK EK HI RUP MEIN MILE.
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«Reply #14 on: September 11, 2009, 04:50:00 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on September 06, 2009, 12:24:47 PM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Khwaish ji.. Bahoot Hi Khubsoorat Ghazal hai.. Baoot khoob!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sophi.. Usual Smile
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