Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!:Ghazals

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2009, 08:17:47 AM »

Wah wah Celmira ji,excellent and very beautiful creation,
aise hi likhte rahena,bahut acha likthe hai aap. Clapping Smiley


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k.shael

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2009, 08:21:06 AM »

Wah Wah Bahut Khoob, Bahut Umda aur jajbaato.n se bhari ye lines bahut pasadh aayi..!!!

Shally.


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_Vicky_

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2009, 08:30:43 AM »

Talattttttt Ji.. yeh Gazal Behad Khubsoorat Likhi Hai aapne..!! Lafzon Ko Bahut Sunderta Se Sajaaya hai..!!! Applause

Behad Lajawab aur dil Ko Chhoo Jane wali Peshkash Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob Talat Ji..!! Daad Kubool Karen..

**~** Mann **~**


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gabbar

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2009, 08:33:26 AM »

bahut khoob lajawab


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aaina

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2009, 11:41:09 AM »

Quote from: Celmira on June 09, 2009, 08:12:25 AM

ek aur bhut khoobsurat paishkash celmira ji bhut hi umda, aap apni ghazlo.n mai har baar ek khoosurat ehsaas paish karti hain aur usse bhut khoob tarhan se ru ba ru karaati hain........mashallah dil se daad hazir hai aapke is kallam par, Allah aapko is sifat se nawaazta rhe hai, bhut khoob.........


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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2009, 12:26:00 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on June 09, 2009, 08:12:25 AM

Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!!!

Ek Se Badhkar Ek A'shaar Hai..padhte Waqt Har Ek Lafz Par Aankhein Rukh Si Jaati Hai..Bahut Hi khooobsurat Ehsaas Pesh Kiye hai Aapne..

Bahut Khoob!!!


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Talat

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2009, 12:35:44 PM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on June 09, 2009, 08:17:47 AM

Wah wah Celmira ji,excellent and very beautiful creation,
aise hi likhte rahena,bahut acha likthe hai aap. Clapping Smiley

Thanks so much dear....bohot bohot shukriya Madhu iss khoobsurat taareef ka !


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Rajbir

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2009, 12:38:23 PM »

Tallu,

Chaa gaye boss ! Applause

Aaj kal ghazals bahut likh rahi ho...yeh inspiration kahan se mili Winking


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2009, 03:39:30 PM »

Bohat khoob Talat bas "Motiye" lafz hota hain kya yeh janna tha aur makhte ka pehla misra thoda kamzor laga......aisa hota to shayed behtar hota

Abhi se hath q tumne dil pe rakh liya talat


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Talat

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2009, 05:07:45 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on June 09, 2009, 03:39:30 PM

Bohat khoob Talat bas "Motiye" lafz hota hain kya yeh janna tha

Motiya lafz Moti yaani pearls ke liye use hota hai...

Mujhe ilm nahin ki aapko urdu aati hai ya nahin.....Ye lafz maine Parveen Shakir Sahiba (jinki shayari ko sar-ankhon pe lagati hoon !!) ki ghazal main dekha tha, aur usi se inspired ho ke apni ghazal main use kiya hai........Neeche un ki kitaab "Khuda-Kalami" se image de rahi hoon !!

Yahan English Fonts main likh deti hoon:

Utri Hai Meri Aankh Main Khwaabon Ki Motiya
Toote Ga Roshni Ka Bhala Silsila Kahan

Parveen Sahiba ne shayad Motiya, pearls ko kaha hai, yaani moti..........aur maine apni ghazal main aansuon ko motiye ki mushabihat di hai..yaani aansuon ko moti ya pearls bola hai !!

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on June 09, 2009, 03:39:30 PM

aur makhte ka pehla misra thoda kamzor laga......aisa hota to shayed behtar hota

Abhi se hath q tumne dil pe rakh liya talat

Bohot shukriya Sajid Bhai is suggestion ka......main sochungi iss baare main.....!

Bohot bohot shukriya aapne ise padha aur apne suggestions bhi diye..... Usual Smile


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deepika_divya

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2009, 05:11:21 PM »

Wow Di.. its so beautiful.. Bahoot hi pyara likha hai aapne.. Usual Smile


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2009, 05:25:55 PM »

Wah wah Celmira Ji bahut khoob
Kamaal likha hai aapne, very very nice
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Talat

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #13 on: June 09, 2009, 06:42:29 PM »

Quote from: k.shael on June 09, 2009, 08:21:06 AM

Wah Wah Bahut Khoob, Bahut Umda aur jajbaato.n se bhari ye lines bahut pasadh aayi..!!!

Shally.

Thanks so much Shally dear for reading and appreciating this work Usual Smile

Bohot shukriya ...


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Sayyid Randeri

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Re: Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2009, 07:21:52 PM »

Bohot achha celmira ji bohot umda ghazal hai, or andaaz bhi badaa pyara hai... misaal bhi ahchi di aap ne, khaas-kar Chashm-e-tar ko ufante darya se tashbih dena bohot achha laga..waah!!


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