Iss Haadse Se Guzarna Hai......!!

by Talat on June 09, 2009, 08:12:25 AM
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«Reply #30 on: June 10, 2009, 12:20:19 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 10, 2009, 02:59:41 AM
As usual Talat Very beautiful. Har ek lafz khoobsurat, aur saaf. hamesha ki tarah behad pyaara aur khoobsurat Usual Smile

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Thanks so much darling for your sweet words....Always nice to see your lovely comments in my threads......Thanks a lot Sweetie  icon_flower icon_flower
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«Reply #31 on: June 10, 2009, 12:31:32 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on June 10, 2009, 07:50:03 AM

Tumhe ilm nahi hain Talat to main hi tumhare ilm me izafa kar deta hu. Mujhe bilkul urdu nahi aati na hi main Urdu padh sakta hu na hi likh sakta hu. Jaha tak urdu ki baat hain main Yoindia ka sabse ghatiya aadmi hu urdu ke mamle me.

Aur tumne mere sawal ka jawab khud de diya afsos to is baat ka hain tumhe yeh cheeze dikhayee nahi di tumne Praveen Shakir ka hawala diya hain jinhone kaha hain

Motiya

Aur meri behan tumne likha hain

Motiye

Waise aainda mujhse aisi koi galti nahi hogi, mera maqsad sirf yeh jannna tha ke motiye jaisa koi lafz hain kya.

Pehli baat to Sajid Bhai, agar aapne kuch poocha hai to itni jaldi hausla na haaren..kam se kam saamne waale ko ye haq to den ki apni baat samjha sake  Usual Smile

Aap apni jagah sahi ho sakte hain, par doosre ka nazariya jaanne main koi harj to nahin na ?

Aapne Jasmine Flowers ya Chameli ke phool ke baare main to suna hi hoga, dekha bhi hoga shayad.......use Urdu main MOTIYE KE PHOOL kehte hain....!! Ye baat to iss baat ka jawab hai ki lafz MOTIYE hota hai ya nahin !!

Aur kyun kehte hain use Motiye Ke Phool ? Inki kaliyan (jab phool khila nahin hota) dekhne main safed moti si lagti hain aur isiliye inhe Motiye yaani MOTI bola gaya hai !!!!

Ek sher kisi shayar ka:

"Ussne kal bare pyar se mera hath
thama tha ,
choom ke meri hatheli motiye ka
ye gajra bandhan ki soorat bandha tha,
murjhaa gaya hai ye magar ,
mehak utar gayee iskee mere man men,
dojahaan ki daulat paa lee iss bandhan men"

Shayar ne yahan Motiye lafz gajre ke liye use kiya hai...lekin Motiye lafz, moti se aaya hai........Parven Sahiba ne Motiya likha (unki murad MOTI se thi)....aur maine MOTIYE (meri muraad askhon se thi jo moti ki tarah hain mere liye) !!!

Shayari wo haseen cheez hai jismain vast imagination use hota hai...Shayar ki nazar kaun si cheez kya hai, kis nazariye se usne dekha hai kisi cheez ko, ye bohot maayene rakha tahi !!!

Ab bhi agar main apni baat na samjah paayi hoon, to mujhe ma'af kijiyega.....isse zyada main kya likhun......!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #32 on: June 10, 2009, 04:02:50 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on June 10, 2009, 08:00:42 AM
NIce Work Bohat Achche,.

Shukriya Azeem
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«Reply #33 on: June 10, 2009, 04:04:04 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on June 10, 2009, 08:02:56 AM
bahut achche di ...........aapke liye kya likhoon dus baar sochna padta hai...............chaliye kucch toh likhoonga hi


mita diya gaya meri har nishani ko
magar jab band kii ankhen toh mein nazar aaya
ashqon ne kii wafa na chhalke teri aankhon se
magar do boond tere haathon k jaam se chhalak aaya


Very nice lines Salil.....Thanks so much dear for these words for me Usual Smile
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«Reply #34 on: June 10, 2009, 04:04:50 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 10, 2009, 08:03:40 AM
Bahut khoobsurat peshkash dear Talat.. Bahut accha laga padkar.  Thumbs UP

@Saahil...
Lovely lines dear.


Thanks a lot dear....bohot bohot shukriya sarahne ka Usual Smile
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«Reply #35 on: June 10, 2009, 04:05:54 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on June 10, 2009, 10:17:18 AM
kya baat h Celmira ji........bahut bahut khub likha h aapne..
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har lafj jaise aane wale waqt aur usse juda dard byaan kar rha h.....bahut khub

Thanks a lot PP dear for your appreciation....bohot shukriya is ghazal ko padhne ka aur sarahne ka Usual Smile
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«Reply #36 on: June 11, 2009, 03:13:15 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 10, 2009, 12:31:32 PM
Pehli baat to Sajid Bhai, agar aapne kuch poocha hai to itni jaldi hausla na haaren..kam se kam saamne waale ko ye haq to den ki apni baat samjha sake  Usual Smile

Aap apni jagah sahi ho sakte hain, par doosre ka nazariya jaanne main koi harj to nahin na ?

Aapne Jasmine Flowers ya Chameli ke phool ke baare main to suna hi hoga, dekha bhi hoga shayad.......use Urdu main MOTIYE KE PHOOL kehte hain....!! Ye baat to iss baat ka jawab hai ki lafz MOTIYE hota hai ya nahin !!

Aur kyun kehte hain use Motiye Ke Phool ? Inki kaliyan (jab phool khila nahin hota) dekhne main safed moti si lagti hain aur isiliye inhe Motiye yaani MOTI bola gaya hai !!!!

Ek sher kisi shayar ka:

"Ussne kal bare pyar se mera hath
thama tha ,
choom ke meri hatheli motiye ka
ye gajra bandhan ki soorat bandha tha,
murjhaa gaya hai ye magar ,
mehak utar gayee iskee mere man men,
dojahaan ki daulat paa lee iss bandhan men"

Shayar ne yahan Motiye lafz gajre ke liye use kiya hai...lekin Motiye lafz, moti se aaya hai........Parven Sahiba ne Motiya likha (unki murad MOTI se thi)....aur maine MOTIYE (meri muraad askhon se thi jo moti ki tarah hain mere liye) !!!

Shayari wo haseen cheez hai jismain vast imagination use hota hai...Shayar ki nazar kaun si cheez kya hai, kis nazariye se usne dekha hai kisi cheez ko, ye bohot maayene rakha tahi !!!

Ab bhi agar main apni baat na samjah paayi hoon, to mujhe ma'af kijiyega.....isse zyada main kya likhun......!! Usual Smile



I agree wid you completely Talat. your each and every word.

Dont worry about the negative comments. some people are used to give such to gain attention when they dont get any. So such arguments arise without application of mind. its easy to see faults in some other's creations rather than seeing fault in own's character. RIGHT?

Be calm sweetie. You write marvellous and this is one of your best creations. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #37 on: June 11, 2009, 09:10:46 AM »
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behad nayab likha hai jee apne...
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«Reply #38 on: June 11, 2009, 01:08:52 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 11, 2009, 03:13:15 AM


I agree wid you completely Talat. your each and every word.

Dont worry about the negative comments. some people are used to give such to gain attention when they dont get any. So such arguments arise without application of mind. its easy to see faults in some other's creations rather than seeing fault in own's character. RIGHT?

Be calm sweetie. You write marvellous and this is one of your best creations. Clapping Smiley

Thanks a lot Sweetie.... Usual Smile

Thanks so much for this.
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«Reply #39 on: June 11, 2009, 02:35:36 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 11, 2009, 03:13:15 AM


I agree wid you completely Talat. your each and every word.

Dont worry about the negative comments. some people are used to give such to gain attention when they dont get any. So such arguments arise without application of mind. its easy to see faults in some other's creations rather than seeing fault in own's character. RIGHT?

Be calm sweetie. You write marvellous and this is one of your best creations. Clapping Smiley

Quote from: Celmira on June 11, 2009, 01:08:52 PM
Thanks a lot Sweetie.... Usual Smile

Thanks so much for this.

As far as i thought it was a healthy discussion between me and Talat, but it was made a issue of me trying to get attention so funny. And as far as my charecter is concern, its my decency i have kept my mouth shut my yahoomail ID is full of people charecter history.

And Talat being so senior monitor it was very sad to see you appreciating such illogical comments.

I know i would be very soon banned from Yoindia and some people are very desparate to see that. Whatever time i have spent with you all i dont have any regret.

Ghayel
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«Reply #40 on: June 11, 2009, 02:37:35 PM »
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Quote from: qayda on June 11, 2009, 09:10:46 AM
behad nayab likha hai jee apne...

Thanks so much Qayda Ji....Bohot shukriya aapne iss khoobsurat lafz se  iss ghazal ko saraha !
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«Reply #41 on: June 11, 2009, 02:50:32 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on June 11, 2009, 02:35:36 PM
As far as i thought it was a healthy discussion between me and Talat, but it was made a issue of me trying to get attention so funny. And as far as my charecter is concern, its my decency i have kept my mouth shut my yahoomail ID is full of people charecter history.

And Talat being so senior monitor it was very sad to see you appreciating such illogical comments.

I know i would be very soon banned from Yoindia and some people are very desparate to see that. Whatever time i have spent with you all i dont have any regret.

Ghayel

Here all can see what sort of healthy discussion is going on, and who is so much desperate to get attention. People here have habit to create such nuisances. who is decent to what extent all know. if you have guts then talk through PM rather than spoiling such beautiful thread. But its in ur blood thats what you can do, spread dirt wherever you go. RIGHT? Keep doing that, becuase people here know who is what....

No need to comment on Talat's comments. THAT TOO WAS A HEALTHY COMMENT.

Ya i m very desperate to see you banned from yoindia, i m telling you on your face, rather than doing disgusting things behind the back.

Sorry Talat for being so rude. But this slap was badly needed on someone's hypocrat face...


Now better do all the discussions in PM.
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«Reply #42 on: June 11, 2009, 03:03:33 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on June 11, 2009, 02:50:32 PM
Here all can see what sort of healthy discussion is going on, and who is so much desperate to get attention. People here have habit to create such nuisances. who is decent to what extent all know. if you have guts then talk through PM rather than spoiling such beautiful thread. But its in ur blood thats what you can do, spread dirt wherever you go. RIGHT? Keep doing that, becuase people here know who is what....

No need to comment on Talat's comments. THAT TOO WAS A HEALTHY COMMENT.

Ya i m very desperate to see you banned from yoindia, i m telling you on your face, rather than doing disgusting things behind the back.

Sorry Talat for being so rude. But this slap was badly needed on someone's hypocrat face...


Now better do all the discussions in PM.

I am sure now members and Admin can go through this whole thread and come to the conclusion what has happen. My charecter is being questioned even my blood is being questioned.

I am sure talat still remember once in her thread Ghafil saheb and Talat had a very long healthy discussion even i was part of that thread. I still remmember that thread but now things have changed.

I just dont want to say anything more.....
 
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«Reply #43 on: June 11, 2009, 03:11:28 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on June 11, 2009, 03:03:33 PM


I am sure talat still remember once in her thread Ghafil saheb and Talat had a very long healthy discussion

Yes, indeed that was a very healthy discussion.......... and very memoraable also !!

Here my ghazal has been questioned of using a so called "non-existing" word....!!

Itni to shayari aur urdu zubaan mujhe aati hai ki main koi aisa lafz use nahin karungi jo asal main lafz hi na ho.....!! If you had asked me the meaning of that word, that would have been indeed very healthy....but questioning the existence of a word used in my ghazal, that was not right.


Aur jahan tak healthy discussions ki baat hai, kisi doosre ke thread pe "healthy" discussion karna bohot asaan hai.......!!

Once a senior and a very reputed poet suggested something on your ghazal in a very polite way....and what he suggested was absolutely right.......but you reacted in such a rude way to him........even sent me PM asking for the deletion of that poet's comment from your thread !!

So....yes, situations do change !
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«Reply #44 on: June 11, 2009, 07:06:57 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on June 11, 2009, 03:03:33 PM
I am sure now members and Admin can go through this whole thread and come to the conclusion what has happen. My charecter is being questioned even my blood is being questioned.

I am sure talat still remember once in her thread Ghafil saheb and Talat had a very long healthy discussion even i was part of that thread. I still remmember that thread but now things have changed.

I just dont want to say anything more.....

People here are not blind nor they are waiting for your instruction to come and see the thread what me or Talat have written. Admin and other members too know who is what and why this all is going on?

There is no point in pointing YOUR character. If this is called decency then surely we have to check out the dictionary for the same word. And as Talat said, its very easy to point out other's creations, but when questions arise on our own creation the negative comments are asked to be removed.

Even then this is called as healthy discussion, then either our english is bad or some people have illusion of an oxford scholar. Please request you to discuss this through PM, we are not interested in gaining attention like some DECENT NUISANCES over here. Do not dump your frustration over here and spoil Talat's beautiful thread.

Thanks for Nothing.
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